Please take time to read The Art of the Paragraph.
While I thought the article would be more relevant to the Social Media Profile Assignment, I think you can get something out of it for the Company Profile assignment and other upcoming assignments.
Consider reading it, and see if you can draw something from it that will help as you make final edits to the Company Profile. Pay attention to the headings ‘Is it a two-headed baby’ and ‘Is there an echo in here?’
FYI- I’m sure you’ll see this information again.