So I’ve been struggling a little bit with the exigence of my paper. Like Chiara, Abby, and Katie, I’m writing about the sexual objectification of women in the media. However, instead of calling out the advertising agencies, I’ve decided to address my paper more to the general public. To those who receive and take in media information on a daily basis. So, really, everyone in this room. I’m focusing on making the audience care about this issue, to take a moment to reflect and acknowledge that the medias constructions of reality can and do influence us on an individual basis. The media is always thought of as an abstract figure, at least that’s how I see it. However, this abstract idea can cause serious harm to people we know, effecting us on an individual and personal level. I want people to understand this when they read my paper. In that sense, I’m going to take a more personal route with my paper and appeal to emotions. I will, of course, still be providing a lot of evidence to support and reaffirm my claims.
So we all know about photoshop, some of us may even have used it before. I know that Jesse is pretty handy with it. Well the media uses photoshop and other devices to create constructions of reality that they then relay to their audience, whom they hope to convince to consume their product. However, altering reality in such a drastic way has equally drastic consequences. For women especially, this tactic can create an ideal that we simply live up to. I mean honestly, the models don’t even look like the models we see in magazines. This creates a pressure for women to live up to this ideal, because men and women both see it and expect women to look like that. This pressure can lead women to develop low self-esteem and to develop eating disorders in order to achieve the supple thin bodies of the models they see. It’s all in an effort to live up to something that isn’t even real.
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With this in mind, I think it’s been pretty widely accepted that #1, the audience is an active recipient of media. This means that we have the power to turn off the channel, mute the ad on youtube, or flip the page of the magazine. However, just because we can choose not to look at a particular ad, doesn’t mean that it doesn’t affect us. In fact, to some degree it does affect us. This brings me to #2, the sexual objectification of women in the media is a thing. There’s really no refuting it. I mean, we have four girls in our class alone writing persuasive essays on the subject. #3 another irrefutable point is that this portrayal of women is detrimental in a plethora of ways.
Having said that, I don’t think it’s particularly necessary to beat this issue to death with an abundance of statistical information and data. I think it would be both repetitive and boring if I were to bog the reader down with data point after data point, example after example of how this commercial and that ad is negatively impacting society. So instead, I plan on beginning my essay with a pre-intro type paragraph. This pre-intro intro will be the true story of someone who was effected by sexual objectification. I’m thinking about something along the lines of a snippet of the story, maybe telling it in reverse. No to spoil it, but this particular girl gave up her life, and I think it would be interesting to tell the story in reverse. Have a snippet of her story, beginning with her death, and then go into the actual introduction, which would be my miniature rant of how the media portrays women negatively, and then I would provide statistics and examples of commercials, companies, etc. that do this. That way I can get that out of the way early on in the essay and set up a sort of support system to build off of. From there I can intersperse the personal story or stories with hard data. I think this strategy will provide an interesting break up of the paper.
What I intend on specifically focusing on in regards to the informational side of the essay is that the media creates self-esteem issues which can lead to eating disorders, suicides, self-harm, etc. I also want to discuss activists and companies that are working against the typical media approach to portray women in a positive, normal light. For example, Dove and aerie are both taking the initiative and using real women in their advertisements, so no photoshopping