Alexander the Great

The objective of our current assignment is to properly analyze the pre-battle speech that Alexander made before his final push for the re-conquest of Greek states. I am not actively concerned with the validity or accuracy of these speech translations, primarily because they consist of multifaceted translations by Greco-Roman historians.

I suppose it is quite an achievement to be known throughout history as “President, Pope, Ambassador, King, or Queen” however, there have been hundreds of people with those ranks. How often do you see someone that has the word “Great” following his or her name? Well Alexander the Great was truly deserving of such a title. From an early age Alexander was a perfect son to his father. He was a bright young man eager to learn. He sought out Aristotle as a mentor until he was sixteen years old. At this time, his father was assassinated and so Alexander took over the empire. He launched his father’s plans for expansion, and by the time he was thirty, he ruled one of the largest empires of the ancient world, spanning from Greece to Egypt. He was undefeated in battle and considered one of the most successful military leaders in history. Alexander’s pre-battle speech during his attempt to recapture former Greek cities had a lasting and inspirational effect on his army. His skills in giving speeches, partially based on his learnings from Aristotle, allows him too effectively and easily motivate his troops during difficult times.

Alexander’s speech, simply in the context in which it exists, was considered both typical and unique. At the time, it was an integral part of a battle plan for a captain, general, or anyone with authority to motivate and convince their people that they are fighting for something worthwhile. Without motivation, armies would crumble and disband, regardless of how ruthless the ruler. However, in Alexander’s case, his motivational speech did not simply consist of the generic words and reasons that others have given in the past. Alexander himself fought with his army. Perhaps he wasn’t the first one to rush into a crowd of armed men, however he was right there, on the battlefield, commanding and tending to his troops. (quote talks about how he fought alongside his men, walked miles on end with them, and even struggled through sickness with them) + explanation) Even if the troops did not wholeheartedly believe in their reasons for fighting, they were oftentimes inspired by his involvement and dedication.

Throughout his speech, Alexander tries to address the issues of ownership throughout his followers. He insinuates that there are not enough noblemen, leaders, or high ranking officials to control all of the lands that they have conquered. It is almost a necessity for him to split up the massive empire to those who are slaving away in the war itself. (Quote 2, he keeps saying “our” + explanation) Through this, he is able to implement the use of logos effectively. It is only natural for others to think something along the lines of “well I suppose he is right. If I continue to serve loyally perhaps I could rule or watch over a town or province.” This was one of the most effective ways that kept his army fighting. He was taught by Aristotle that all men had greed. By playing on this greed, he was able to give a speech that did not demand anything of his men. However one that simply made the men believe that fighting was the most beneficial course of action. After all, one of the most effective strategies is to make someone think that they are came to a conclusion through their own free will.

Oftentimes people come across the misconception that if all of the rhetoric appeals are not included, then it weakens a speech. However in Alexander’s case the lack of pathos actually makes the speech stronger. His speech is solely meant to play on the army’s emotions. It is meant to make them jealous, greedy, and worry about the future. By inserting statistics, which most likely weren’t even available circa 350 B.C., he would disrupt the flow of the speech, making it less effective. After all, if anyone has experienced, as we would now call it, a “hype” speech, then you would know that the “hype” that took so long to build up can easily be killed if there was any interruptions.

It is also important to analyze how this speech is given. It, like most other inspirational war speeches, is based on a deliberative occasion. The synopsis of the speech is that “we should, for there are no reasons to insist otherwise, push on with this battle and continue to reconquer our lost Greek states.” He uses ethos efficiently here, claiming that “These natives either surrender without a blow or are caught on the run–or leave their country undefended for your taking; and when we take it, we make a present of it to those who have joined us of their own free will and fight on our side.” This plays on much of his army’s emotions. Of course they want to win, nobody would want to fight on a losing side. Additionally, through his descriptions of the opposition, he makes his army believe that they are fighting against submissive colonies that would never dare to fight back. This ensues self-confidence and trust throughout his army. Also, by saying that “These natives surrender without a blow” makes it seem as though his men may never even see battle. He tells them that they are so powerful, that they simply take what they want. That no matter who they oppose, the sheer power and size of their army is enough to make even the strongest of nations crumble. Now, who wouldn’t want to be fighting for a man and army like that?

Ultimately Alexander’s speech does what he intended. He inspires his army to continue fighting for a common cause and makes truly share in his beliefs. Some credit his outstanding speaking skills to his learnings with Aristotle. However, one can see that years later, he is still an effective speaker. His use of rhetoric is flawless. He implemented Kairos perfectly. This speech was given when his followers and army had grown tired. They had been fighting for years and could not take much more. He is able to, however, convince them that they will absolutely benefit, and gain land and riches. However, if they were to stop now, then there would still be others off to the west who could grow stronger and eventually pose a threat to them. By playing off of their greed and worry, he was able to complete his conquest of the Greek states. He even ended the speech with a final challenge to those who wished to leave. “The utmost hopes of riches or power which each one of you cherishes will be far surpassed, and whoever wishes to return home will be allowed to go, either with me or without me. I will make those who stay the envy of those who return.” Well I sure would stay. How about you?

Note* some quotes were left out simply because there were issues with being able to copy and paste from the website that the speech was found. I try to give a general idea of what the quote would be about and will implement it into the claims made around that area of each paragraph.

India, Roughin’ It

For the last few weeks I have been blogging about some of my most memorable journeys around the world and experiences that they brought. I’ve been writing about the materialistic and aesthetic enjoyment that they have brought me. However, this week I have chosen to write about one of the most influential vacations I have been on.

It was winter break and it seemed time for our family to take a trip to India in order to visit some family and friends. Normally my family and I were accustomed to flying first class, being greeted by chauffeurs, and driven in comfortable cars. However this time my father had decided to show us (mainly my brother and me) how the other 90% of Indians have to live. Instead of chauffeur driven cars we took the broken train system. We defecated in holes in the ground, “wiped” with water, and wore surgical masks for protection from haze. And the trip had merely begun.

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My father didn’t officially break us this news until we got to a train station. We were going to be traveling in a “First Class AC Sleeper” train, or so they called it. We slept in cockroach infested beds, which were glorified prison cots that were poorly attached to the walls of the train. The “AC” was a small desk fan in the corner of the room, and the ground was covered in mud and rust. The “3 hour” train ride ended up lasting 16 hours. Mainly due to the fact that it had to stop and slowed down because of the intense fog. So slow in fact that I actually got off the train, stretched my legs, jogged, and was able to get back on with ease. Depicted below is the massive overcrowding due to people waiting for delays and also simply because many homeless people simply live in the train station.

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My aunts kept screeching and yelling about the cockroaches on the floor and refused to sit on the beds. I have no problem roughing it and chose a bed by the window. The things I saw absolutely shocked me. There were children sitting beside the railroad begging for food, and hugging stray dogs for warmth. Men were rebuilding tin and mud houses while women washed clothes in disgusting rainwater. I couldn’t stand their complaining anymore. I turned to my elders, (at the time I was 15 and wasn’t as outspoken as I consider myself to be currently) and screamed at them “if you are going to keep complaining I’m sure one of the kids out there wouldn’t mind trading places!” While my family droned on about their “problems” I zoned out and truly thought about the things I have taken for granted every single day of my life.

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After that trip my dad came up to me and explained how proud he was of me and the lessons I had learned. It was exactly the outcome he had intended this trip to produce. I will never forget the lessons I learned that day. This trip had such a large impact on me that I even wrote about it in some of my college essays.

Like usual I have reached my word count, however if anyone wants to learn more or has any questions just let me know.

 

España!

Today I will be whisking you away into the culturally rich and architecturally unique country of Spain. I went to Spain with one of my best friends, Rohun, and his family. We had always wanted to take a trip together, however our busy schedules never seemed to be in sync. However I must say, whenever we get together you can bet that it will be a blast.

We flew to our first hotel together and planned out our entire trip throughout the first night. We have similar personalities in which we tend to do extreme things. Well we were here to travel, so we refused to rest for a single moment.

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For the first four days of our trip we were staying in Madrid. The environment was very friendly, probably due to the fact that shop owners needed tourist revenue to survive. There were small houses and shops stacked on top of each other on the outskirts of the city, and gave it an older feel. However the city itself was well developed and also had modern American architectural features implemented.

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After the first four days we took a small plane down to the city of Toledo. Here, almost the entire city and surrounding areas held its historical significance in its culture and architecture. The city seemed to be split up in many different small and close knit communities. Here we found many traces of the old history from the Paleolithic to middle-ages such as ancient hospitals, cathedrals, and castles. Throughout our research, we had decided to visit a place that they call “Tambleque.” This was an area that was surrounded by an open style castle. Throughout the hallways leading up to a massive plaza in the middle of the castle, called Plaza Mayor, there were miniature shops that sold traditional trinkets and artifacts. Some of the shop owners had skills that I had never seen before. You know how in India there are monkey and snake trainers? Well here they were able to write names on a grain of rice. Yes, A SINGLE GRAIN OF RICE. I thought that was pretty impressive.

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After our short stay in Toledo, we traveled to a small town located near the southern tip of Spain called “Puerto Banús.” This area was absolutely amazing. The people here were very wealthy, primarily due to old money and illegal drug operations. The food was excellent and cooked with modern skill yet also exhibited many culturally rich aspect also. The streets were lined with Corvettes, Lamborghinis, Ferraris, Rolls Royces, and other amazing cars and yachts. The men and women were dressed well, wearing thousands of dollars of clothing at a time. However they didn’t seem like typical criminals. I suppose they had so much money that they led a carefree lifestyle. They would give kids rides, take pictures with them, and open up their cars to flaunt their designs.

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I really enjoyed this trip. It was the first trip I had been on that wasn’t solely rest and relaxation. We were now old enough to finally appreciate ancient cultures and civilizations that surround us and made for a great experience.

We also traveled to Gibraltar and had some amazing experiences with monkeys, however that will be for a future post!

 

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As I have not yet received a grade for my speech, nor do I know the grades that my peers earned, I can only speculate based on what my understanding of this assignment was. I believe that some of the factors that heavily affected the quality of any given person’s speech was multifaceted. It was very important to be prepared and know what you want to say. This allowed for a smooth speech and also allowed for all of the allotted time to be used towards actually giving your speech. It was also important to stay on track and make sure you made the points that needed to be made. Oftentimes people had well prepared speeches, but did not address the assignment at hand.

Before the speech days began, we were shown different videos of people giving past presentations, however, I don’t think it sunk in that those presentations did not exemplify what we were supposed to do, however things that could lead us off track. Oftentimes some of my peers mentioned Kairos, Logos, Ethos, and Pathos in their speeches. Although it is good that they were able to include that, some of those people neglected the fact that the assignment was to link the artifact or speech to the four key characteristics of civility mentioned in the textbook.

I believe that my speech stayed on track and went as planned. I suppose, looking back, that I could have prepared a little more so that my speech flowed more. This would have prevented me from using filler words throughout the speech. However hindsight IS 20/20.

I believe that once we receive our grades and discuss what we did correctly and incorrectly with Professor Babcock, that we will have a better understanding of the grading system for the class. This should put us on track for preparing our TED talk in the future.

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Some of the ads that I was considering for the assignment were possibly those found on television channels. I find that some of the more common ads that I used to see when watching T.V. were either child insurance ads for Gerber Life, or the Old Spice commercials. I selected these primarily because I see many uses of Logos, Ethos, Pathos, and commonplace.

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For example, the Gerber Life ads seem to appear more often whenever my mother watches T.V. I believe this shows that the ad is automatically shown on more feminist programs. This allows for the ad to influence the one person in a family that would care most about a child’s insurance and well-being, the mother. Also there are usually statistics that show how much one can save for his or her child with only a set amount of minimal monthly payments, making it seem like a no-brainier for anyone who cared about a child. Finally, when the group is asked “who has even started saving for their child” the parents who have done so are always depicted as cheerful while the others seem to be ashamed that they haven’t.

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Also, I thought the Old Spice commercials would be another good example because they really play with Ethos very well. The ads often show an average man who uses Old Spice and automatically becomes hot, has no fears, jumps out of planes, swims with sharks, can fly, and gets the good looking girl in the end. I mean come on, what 13 year old boy wouldn’t want to embody a powerful good looking man who has everything in the world?

I think the above two ads exemplify the many different methods that producers use when trying to advertise and sell products.

Lunch With the General

If I have learned anything throughout my adventures around the world, it is that you most definitely do not have to leave America to go on an adventure. One of my fondest memories is of my trip to Hawaii. It started out as a typical vacation. My family and I woke up early, (something I had become very fond of for some reason) drove to the airport, and waited at the terminal. Like always, my brother, Dylan, and I would try to see if one of us could be upgraded to first class. This was because our father was such a frequent flyer that he had earned the “diamond medallion” rank for the airline.

Upon arrival, we unpacked and relaxed for the first few days. After we were all settled, on the third day, we went to a private beach where we spent the day relaxing, talking, drinking coconut water, and playing games. It was a great way for the family to spend time together. On the fourth day we decided to go hiking up a mountain overlooking the ocean. It took two hours but my 63 year old powerhouse of a grandmother led the way to the top. We took a picture of us overlooking the mountainside and later discovered that there were dolphins jumping out of the ocean in the background. It was truly a memorable picture.

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After a few more days of rest and relaxation, we met up with a friend of my fathers. Remember in my last post how my dad had been a part of “JCOC?” well he made a few friends there, one of which was a three star general in the United States Military. He had retired to Hawaii and we met up with him and his wife. General Pete Pawling is an amazing man. Living solely off of his government pension, he was truly living a great life. I got to play golf with him and his wife (and I am beyond proud to be able to say I beat them all). Afterwards, he invited us to have lunch on his boat and the rest of my family met us there. And for those of you planning a trip to Hawaii, plan for the worst traffic in the United States. Yes, the traffic there is worse than in D.C. during rush hour. General Pawling then took us to his house were we got to see and drive his vintage car and motorcycle collection!

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The last few days of our trip we toured the streets and went to different public areas. I must say that the people are extremely nice. They love to surf, joke around with strangers, and have a great time. They are some of the most laid back and relaxed people I have ever met. The island food was delicious. Sadly I feel like I can’t cover all of the best parts of a trip into one post. So I figured I would let you have a taste of the best just to spike your curiosity. If you have any comments or questions feel free to post them or ask me in person!

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For my unit one civic engagement speech, I selected to interview my dad. Throughout the class periods during which I viewed past speeches, I noticed one recurring issue in the presentations. This was that students kept trying to find the civic engagement in the people that they interviewed. (I will not mention artifacts simply because that is not the path I chose) Because of this, I decided to select someone who I knew to be civically engaged. I also decided to select someone whose definition of civic engagement that I was already familiar with. I realized that the perfect person to interview would be my dad. I knew he had always been civically involved, however I did not always comprehend the things he did and the specifics of what it took to be such an active member of groups, societies, and communities. However, he was not always handed these opportunities, it took a great deal of effort, perseverance, and luck for him to become the person he is.

Looking back on the assignment itself, I found that Kairos plays a very important role in the rhetorical situation of my selection. As stated previously, I realized that to effectively fulfill the requirements of this speech, I have to convince my audience that I understand my interviewee and his knowledge, or lack thereof of civic engagement. Additionally, I have found that Kairos was and still is an integral aspect of my father’s life and the experiences that shaped who he is today. See I believe in Aristotle’s notion of the Tabula Rasa, or “Blank Slate” theory. I vote in favor of the nurture side of “nature vs nurture” and that a person’s experiences can mold who they become. This plays a large part in my interviewee’s life because as a poor boy who came to America with the clothes on his back and money in his pocket, I believe he has taken advantage of all the opportunities life offered and that, in turn, paid off. He “struck while the iron was hot” in many different ways. But sadly I am approaching my max word count. Guess you’ll just have to learn about my dad through my speech!

 

Question #3

Throughout my lifetime I have, like everyone else, definitely tried to change someone’s mind countless times. It the natural order of things after all. We want what we want. If we can make someone think that it’s the right thing or if what we want is logical, then they will comply. One of the most memorable times that I have had to implement rhetoric is when I was in high school as a part of the debate team.

Our debate teams would be given a specific topic, and then would have to debate a certain viewpoint on it. Now the kicker is that we aren’t always given the side of the topic that we necessarily agree with. I remember during one conference the topic regarded immigration into the United States and if we needed to close down our borders or not. I was given the side to argue in favor of closing down while my opponent was given what I believe to be the easier side of the argument.

Since my argument was not necessarily appealing to other’s emotions, I had to use many different statistics and examples in order to try and defend my viewpoint. However, I fell short and my opponent was able to convince the general public of his argument. I believe in part this was because he had the ability to play off of people’s emotions. Heck, even I almost wanted to drop my case and join him. Although we both debated well and were both generally capable public speakers, his side of the argument simply had more going for him. This is probably why rhetoric is such a large part and important factor in public speaking, politics, and other forms. Not only does one have to have the ability to convey their thoughts properly, he or she also has to know when an argument is in their favor and when it isn’t.

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Evening Parade

Although I had planned to recount my experiences in some sort of chronological order, the fact that today is 9/11 has brought back fond memories of a trip I took just a few summers ago. However, some back story into how this trip came to flourish is necessary.

My father had always been interested with the military and a few years ago, he was offered to be a part of a program called “JCOC” or Joint Civilian Orientation Conference. He was nominated for this program by the Secretary of Defense. After the program (which could be a post in itself) my father was offered admission to attend the Commandant of the Marine Corp’s Evening Parade the next year in July. Luckily, no one else in my family was available or wanted to go, so I was the default person my dad decided to take.

We took a train to Washington D.C that morning. At first I had no idea what the Evening Parade was going to consist of. I honestly believed it was actually going to be a normal, run of the mill parade. We got dressed up later that day, my dad in his Civil Air Patrol attire and me in a shirt and pants. When we got off of the bus that ferried us to 8th and I, the location of the Commandant’s massive home, we got off and saw hundreds of people running, jogging, and training in their military garments. As we walked to the house, every person that passed my dad would stop and salute to him. Although he was only part of the CIVIL auxiliary of the air force, he was still technically a higher rank, and the soldiers are trained not to distinguish. Needless to say we were stopped every two minutes so that my father could return a salute.

Once it started there was a massive back yard with bleachers all around the sides. It almost seemed like a stadium! At first we met the Commandant and other high ranking officials, like most events, people talked and mingled for a while. Then each person was escorted to a seat and the show started. They showed the “President’s Own” Marine Band, the “Commandant’s Own” Drum and Bugle Corps, and the Color Guard. They all performed and it was one of the most amazing and precise things I have ever seen. I could only imagine the amount of dedicated work and practice that going into earning that level of precision.

Some of the most impressive things I saw was the soldiers THROWING guns to other members from UPWARDS OF 20-30 feet while catching them…. WITHOUT LOOKING. You can click HERE to visit some videos of this!

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As a drummer myself the sheer skill and endurance that the Drum Corps had was impressive. They could play in synch, break synch, and regain synch with one another instantly. It was one of the most humbling things I have ever seen.

This is one of my most memorable and amazing trips I have ever been on. It started as another thing that my dad was going to drag me along for, and ended up being one of the most spectacular events I have ever attended.

Thank you to all of those brave men and women fighting for our lives so that we don’t have to. Your hard work and dedication is inspirational and above and beyond what anyone expects.

Around the World in 18 Years

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I once despised traveling. When I was a child, my father would always be out on business trips. I never received as much attention from him as I wanted. He would have to depart for another trip days after returning from the previous one. I never understood why he enjoyed it so much. Why did he have to leave me so often? Did he really love it that much? More than me? It pained me even more because he would frequently extend his trip for pleasure.

I used to give my dad a hard time about this. Part of me was truly upset, however part of me also loved guilt tripping him into buying me trinkets and souvenirs whenever he went on a trip.

As I began to grow up and mature, I realized the importance of traveling, learning about new cultures, and experiencing different traditions. One of my first vacations was a road trip to Chicago. I was enchanted by the thought of driving for days on end and living out of my car. (If only I knew how much I would hate car rides once I grew up) I got to meet my cousins and spend a week with them. I was absolutely delighted.

Eventually I got bored of car rides and wanted to take further trips. The boring car rides turned into short flights. These evolved into international flights and opened up to me a whole new world of immersion and adventure. Short trips turned into long vacations. Meeting family and friends turned into meeting locals and taking part in culturally significant activities. Rest and relaxation trips morphed into adventurous and physically tiring hikes and climbs.

I have done things and developed a passion for activities that I would have never had the courage to pursue alone. Adventure and travel has brought my family closer together and given me a brand new look into disparities, beauty, cultures, and religion. I have fed stingrays with my hands, stood face to face with a pride of lions, dove with sharks, swam with dolphins, explored reef systems, hiked to the top of mountains, gone cliff jumping, flew airplanes, and acquired a greater understanding of my own religion and culture. I have experienced enormous economic disparities, and realized how lucky we are compared to others.

I honestly cannot count how many countries and states I have been to. Travel truly has been an amazing and memorable part of my life. It has changed and affected me in both positive and negative ways. I have learned more about myself through other cultures and civilizations than I would have ever learned before. I look forward to sharing my thoughts and experiences with my readers.

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