One thought on “Spring Semester Blog #8 (April 1st, 2021): Draft of Issue Brief”
1). The title is good and straightforward. You could potentially just take out “addressing” to make it more succinct.
2). Yes, this piece clearly points out and describes a problem and why it is a problem. I like the historical reasoning involved in the introduction.
3). The thesis could get a little more specific rather than just stating that more education is needed. Maybe one or two more sentences explaining what that means could be useful.
1). The title is good and straightforward. You could potentially just take out “addressing” to make it more succinct.
2). Yes, this piece clearly points out and describes a problem and why it is a problem. I like the historical reasoning involved in the introduction.
3). The thesis could get a little more specific rather than just stating that more education is needed. Maybe one or two more sentences explaining what that means could be useful.