As most of the world knows, the Pepsi-Cola versus Coca-Cola debate goes back almost a century. Around the world, people can be really passionate about their stance on the beverages and the company’s marketing teams are well aware of this. With Coke being a one hundred twenty-nine-year-old company and Pepsi being a one hundred twenty-three year old brand respectively, it’s safe to say that this rivalry is bound to continue long after I submit this post. When you’re dealing with two powerhouses going after each other, there’s bound to be competition when it comes to vying for consumer’s money and attention. Due to this competition, both of the companies have created slogans and advertisements that made enough of a cultural impact to act as their own commonplaces. For Coke, you may think of Santa Claus, the polar bears, “Open happiness” and “Taste the feeling” . For Pepsi you may remember the taste test commercials from the eighties and nineties as well as “Be Young, Have Fun, Drink Pepsi”, “Live for now” and “That’s what I like”. Across the board one company marketing implements the idea that drinking their beverage will lead to instant happiness. The other company pushes the difference in their product and associates this diversity with the interests of the youth. The similarity between the two marketing strategies is that they both aim to associate positive interactions and experiences with their products. Both Pepsi and Coca-Cola use their historical standings to capitalize on their consumers’ emotions. Since Coca-Cola and Pepsi-Cola have already been confirmed to give consumers joyous and diverse experiences for ages, consumers are led to make positive assumptions about purchasing the products. Overtime, it becomes harder to separate which drink you actually like from the drink you’ve been convinced to like for ages.
I really like your ideas in this introduction. I love how you compare the two to the point where I truly wonder what rally is the “better brand.” Personally, I’m not a Cola drinker as I don’t love drinking soda, but I can completely understand the ongoing battle. I would really expand more on what lenses each company uses to convince potential buyers to buy their product. For instance, why would someone want to buy a Coke over a Pepsi or vice versa? I would also define your thesis a bit more. Overall, great job! I love it : )
Really, really good introduction; you could technically use this right away!
If I were to give a few suggestions to take it up to perfection, perhaps varying the word choice a bit (e.g. bound) and also I am not sure about the last two sentences of the paragraph — I know it’s not the thesis but it’s throwing me off a bit since it’s kind of a different point to the thesis, almost showing the similarities. I agree with what you say there and I think it’s an important point to make, so maybe put it before the thesis? Just some thoughts!
Awesome job!!