I felt that Dawson had a decent handle on the memorization and execution of giving his speech. I also felt that the visuals he gave throughout the speech were simple yet effective. I like how well he incorporate ethos into his speech as well as the structure he set up his civic artifact in. He takes a deep dive into the effects that this music video has and how it relates to the SDGs. I think he could’ve had a little bit better of a flow of speaking but other than that he had a very interesting and well done speech. In my own speech I feel like I had an adequate set up but lacked confidence and could have memorized the materials a little more. I also felt as though I should have tied the information more to logos, and ethos and not just pathos.
I really like how you set up your review. It complimented Dawson well while giving him constructive criticism. I really liked your speech and you should have more confidence in what your saying. I can’t wait to read more from you and watch more speeches.
I viewed Dawson’s while looking at everyone’s speeches, and I also thought his execution was really well done. I felt like I had a lack of confidence in the beginning of my speech because I was so worried about memorizing the content. At least we can be relieved that it’s over with and can say we did it!
I think you had a really good analysis on Dawson’s speech and his is pretty good. I think your speech is also pretty good (and there’s always something to improve on) so I think we can focus more on the positive end.