3.2.2 Deliverables Story Elements Iteration

This week was not a good one. I spent most of my week with an unnecessarily heavy workload, and I am burnt out, exhausted, and at my wits end.

Beyond that. Some good work has happened this week. Just not enough that will most likely be satisfactory for the collaboration and deadline.

I have not had a chance to ink but I will be staying up tomorrow to get all five pages inked, detailed, and sent off for grayscale work.

Here are pages 1-5 with my part of the detail work done so that they are not just… panels with stick figures.

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I have to do some cleaning during the inking stage, but the writers were incredibly happy and excited with this output.

Any space that is blank is work that my collaboration mate was supposed to have a part in. Overall, I’m happy with this, and this can guide the more detailed inks I plan to do over the next two days. I plan on adding stipple, hatching, cross hatching, and line weight to create a more detailed look to the panels. I also plan on adding detail and correcting minor inconsistencies I noticed after I wasn’t so sleepy to the characters. I… also need to get rid of the pink pages. That was not intended, Clip Studio for some reason has my canvas color set to pink automatically.

Works Cited:

Cromar, William. “narrativeArtsStoryElementsIteration.” newMedia Wiki. 2022. http://newmediawiki.pbworks.com/w/page/149510625/narrativeArtsStoryElementsIteration Accessed November 4th, 2022.