3.1.2 Deliverables: Story Elements Draft

I worked with the writers to produce this incomplete draft of the panels of the Milne project. It needs revisions, but I didn’t have the time to make them.

There are 8 pages to this comic. Each page contains 6 -7 images, and most do not contain speech bubbles as of yet.

There were some things that I was unsure about when I was drafting the comic’s art, I was unsure of where to put the title, among other things. I believe I may redraft and add a title onto page one along with our names.

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Page 1

This page shows the crash of Jerry, our politician and the surgery to give him a prosthetic leg. It also shows the doctor’s injury and infection.

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Pg 2

This is page 2. It shows Jerry reflecting on his new leg in disgust and leaving for a political rally.

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Page 3

This page shows the doctor getting fired and leaving the hospital after losing his job.

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Page 4

This page shows Jerry rallying the people against the “mecchies” and the doctor doing an illegal procedure.

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Page 5

The mechani-person comes to the doctor and warns him of the mob that is after him.

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Page 6

This page shows the crowd arguing with the doctor, and the doctor revealing that Jerry has been deceiving them and is also a mechie.

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Page 7

The doctor and the mechie (in secret) go to confront Jerry. The mob goes to find out if Jerry is a Mechie too.

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Page 8 and the conclusion.

Jerry tries to frame the doctor as if he is attacking him, but then attempts to push the doctor off his balcony. The mechani-person grabs the doctor and pushes Jerry lightly into the crowd, the leg of his pants hiding his prosthetics rips revealing the metal of his fake leg, and the crowd surrounds him.