September 29

Rhetorical Analysis Essay Draft

A people’s identity is their culture. Throughout human history, we have gathered in groups living as a community. These communities had different ideas, traditions, and structures. Culture and community are two fundamental things to the human race. As we travelled the world, we started to explore these cultures, and one way this was done was through food. The magnitude of foods impact on our culture is immeasurable. Even today we continue to flock to restaurants that have food that seems foreign, or just to feel like we are somewhere else. The City of Philadelphia is a city with a unique identity. One of hard work, one of immigrants, and one steeped in our nation’s history. One thing that all Philadelphians have an opinion on is the Cheesesteak. If you ask someone if they like their cheesesteak wit or wit out, you can’t be sure of their answer, but you can be sure of one thing, they are from Philadelphia. 

To understand why this sandwich is so important to the City of Philadelphia, it is essential to understand the history behind it. It all started in the 1930s. A man by the name of Pat Oliveri was a hotdog vendor. One day, when his family was low on money, he told his son to run to the butcher to get scraps of meat. He cooked those scraps on the grill and made a sandwich for himself. At that moment a cab driver came by and asked for one too. Soon word spread and the famous cheesesteak was born. In some ways this is a perfect example of the word Kairos. Although it may not be in the same sense that people think of, this treasure was created out of pure happenstance. By word of mouth it became a hit. With minimal advertising the greatest sandwich in Philadelphia history was born.  

 

 

 

 

 

After opening up a restaurant called Pats on 9th and Passyunkanother store opened up. In fact, this one opened across the street on the opposite corner. Named Geno’s Steaks, a rivalry was born that would in a sense make the sandwich more famous than it could have been if either restaurant were alone. Using this rivalry these two stores were able to create Philadelphia pride, something that is useful and very productive when it comes to fostering a community or a legacy in the city. Let’s look at how Pats Steaks uses this and other factors to get people to come to their restaurant.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The official name for the restaurant is now Pat’s King of Steaks – a not so subtle way of claiming to be the best. Below the logo it says very clearly inventor & originator, letting people know it is just thatI want to first look at the Logos or argument and logic that goes into this logo. They use big bold letters to make sure that people understand who they are. This is important because they base a lot of their business on name recognition. As it is what some may call a tourist trap, it is important that they use a very recognizable logo. They also put a crown on top of the A creating a subtle reference to the name, the king of steaks. Finally, they put that they are open 24/7, a move which attracts a different crowd all together. A 2 a.m. cheesesteak draws a different breed. A monster in a category of its own. This subtle call to this makes Philadelphians mouth water.  

The Ethos in this logo lends itself back again to the crown and the name, king of steaks. As the king of this almost mythical sandwich, you make sure everyone knows you are the creator. The owner of the idea, and it also makes it sound like you do it best. Just to make sure that you get thisthey print inventor and originator of the cheesesteak underneath the name. This is important because people want the real thing. And although it may be up for debate if this is really the best one in the city, their claim to fame is all they need to stay in business. Philadelphia is a city that thrives on history. They make sure that they use their own history to their advantage. 

 

 

Finally, we can look at the pathos or emotional pull of this logo. The most important thing is the fact that they are Philly born and Philly made. The pride that residents have for the city is immeasurable. We see it in everything. Sports games, movies, posters, music events, even restaurants. It is a city that works hard and were proud of it. Pats uses their logo to make sure you know who they are. Born out of a hard-working Philadelphian, opportunity struck. This sandwich is endeared to the heart of the city and by reminding us that they created it they strike an emotional chord within us.  

Genos Steaks sits catty corner. It stands as a second neon monolith. All great things have rivalries attached, and none say Philadelphia quite like this one. Although they are not the creators, Genos has created its own foothold in the Philadelphia folklore. Many believe they are better. One thing is clear, the two rivals feed off each other creating more business than there would be on their own. The Genos logo is simpler.  

 

 

 

 

 

A simple color scheme makes this logo memorable. Let’s look at the logos or logic behind it. The color scheme contrasts each other making sure that you see the words. They want their brand to be known and they are banking on the fact that you have heard of them. Simplicity in the design creates intrigue and makes people want to figure out more. They use ethos here under their namesake. It states Philadelphia original. Not only does this give them credibility within the Philadelphia community, it attracts tourists as well because it makes them seem like the real deal. That one line also uses pathos. By claiming to be a Philadelphia original they are attempting to endear themselves into the heart of the Philadelphia community.  

The Philly Cheesesteak is a monument to Philadelphia’s blue-collar roots. As coney’s are to Detroit, Cheesesteaks are to Philadelphia. They are a piece of its identity, and they are rooted in these two neon giants. They use their rivalry and their lore to create a holy sandwich. It is one everyone must eat, and one that if you don’t order and eat rightit can ruin your credibility all together.  

 

  

 

September 28

Great Smoky Part 1

 

When we left off, we were in the famous Blue Ridge Mountains in Shenandoah National Park. This park may have been amazing, but it was only half of my trip. The second destination was Great Smoky Mountains National Park in Tennessee. The most visited national park in the country with around 12.5 million visitors yearly. What makes this park so special? The answer lies not only in the park itself but the surrounding towns and cities. It is easy to forget how diverse American culture can be. Different places have people with drastically different values and ways of life. One of the more famous ones would be the so-called Hill Billy. The back country, moonshiners. A rugged way of life that came to be during western expansion. The Great Smoky Mountains offers a window into this world, and it starts in the city of Gatlinburg.  

Gatlinburg, Tennessee is often called the gateway to the Great Smoky Mountains. A tourist town nestled into a valley at the edge of the massive park, it offers visitors a place to stay and a whole experience on its own. When I say tourist town, I really mean tourist town. I have never seen so many attractions, gift shops, wacky museums, and rides in one place. They are all themed and advertised that they are done in the mountain way of life. They really lean into the Hill Billy, mountain people stereotype that has been around for decades. Walking down the main street you will see places selling moonshine, trout houses, pancake restaurants, even a place called Hill Billy Golf.  

A friend from school named Andy and his family regularly visited the area so they wanted to show us around a bit when we were there. They actually took us to Hill Billy Golf. A golf course on the edge of a mountain, you need to sit on carriage on a track that slowly takes you to the top. It was a one-of-a-kind, American road trip experience.  Then they took us to the Trout House, a staple part of the mountain diet. In the end we went back to their hotel where we sat at a fire pit. Here is one of the most memorable moments I have. I remember walking by my sister and my mom cowering away from a small shadow on the path to the firepit. When Andy asked what they were doing they pointed towards it and asked what it was. He looked down, laughed and said, “Its a cinnamon bun!” In a way this perfectly encapsulates my family’s relationship with National Parks. We love the outdoors, the fresh air, the peace. But there are things like bugs that sometimes get in the way. The important thing to remember is to always take chances and when you have a once in a lifetime experience to go for it.  

September 24

Introduction for Rhetorical Analysis Essay

A people’s identity is their culture. Throughout human history, we have gathered in groups living as a community. These communities had different ideas, traditions, and structures. Culture and community are two fundamental things to the human race. As we travelled the world, we started to explore these cultures, and one way this was done was through food. The magnitude of foods impact on our culture is immeasurable. Even today we continue to flock to restaurants that have food that seems foreign, or just to feel like we are somewhere else. The city of Philadelphia is a city with a unique identity. One of hard work, one of immigrants, and one steeped in our nation’s history. One thing that all Philadelphian’s have an opinion on is the Cheesesteak. If you ask someone if they like their cheesesteak wit or wit out, you can’t be sure of their answer, but you can be sure of one thing, they are from Philadelphia.  

September 24

Country Roads

My next visit to a national park was on what some may call a quintessential road trip. This was my road trip through Shenandoah National Park and the Great Smoky Mountains National Park. One of the reasons that I say it is the quintessential road trip is because, other than the fact that we drove there, the Great Smoky Mountains National Park is the most visited national park in the country. In 2019, 12.5 million people visited the park, the second closest is the Grand Canyon with 5.97 million visitorsThis staggering number makes it valuable to the American Identity. My southern road trip started in my hometown of Philadelphia. An urban center like Philly may seem like a perfect place to live, and in many ways it is, but it is severely lacking is nature. Yes, there are large parks, in fact Fairmount Park is one of the largest city park systems in the nation. But these parks are not a place where you can truly escape.  

Shenandoah was our first stop on the National Park circuit. Located in Virginia along the infamous Blue Ridge Mountains, the park offers stunning views. I often associate my trips with songs, albums, and artists. What was popular at the time can say a lot about culture, and what I was listening to can say a lot about me. One song above others should be obvious as we drove to our destination. John Denver’s Country Roads, a classic folk song, a love letter to the backcountry, is one of my favorites. He mentions the Blue Ridge Mountains in his song and whenever I think of that park, I think of him and his song. 

I remember a lot about my time in Virginia. I remember highways lined with lush greenery, and I remember country diners with peanut soup. In fact, I vividly remember peanut soup. I was in a diner with my family. The place had a carpet that look used, and wallpaper that showed a forest. I remember a steaming ceramic bowl with chicken and chunks of peanut butter. It felt like a different world, and it continued to do just that on the Skyline Drive. A picturesque mountain path in the park. A place that was not only home to amazing views, but to bears. That’s right, we saw a family of bears right on the side of the road. That stunning moment was one of the first times that I thought about how humans intruded on the homes of other animals. I realized that even if we act like it, this isn’t our world. It belongs to all the animals in a fragile and intricate balance.  

September 17

Rhetorical Speech Draft

On the corner of 9th and Passyunk sit two rival sandwich shops that are monuments to neon and sizzling beef. And over the past half century, these places, Pat’s and Geno’s, have helped craft one of the most renowned symbols of Philadelphia: the cheesesteak. Some might think that a simple sandwich would not have the importance to represent a city, but those people would not know the cheesesteak’s history or the city of Philadelphia itself. For those who’ve never had one, a cheesesteak is essentially thin slices of beef griddled with onions and cheese tucked steaming hot into a long roll. It’s a late-night ritual. It’s the subject of endless debates, as cheesesteak stands spread across the region. And it reflects so much about the character of Philadelphia – its unpretentious blue-collar roots, its love of street food, and the history of Italian immigrants who created the sandwich in the 1930s and helped shape the neighborhood where it was born, in South Philadelphia. 

These two rivaling stands have been at war for years. Although it may be considered more of a cold war, they each have their own brands, logos, and it is a heated debate which is better. Ask anyone in Philadelphia, and they will have an opinion. It all started in the 1930s when a man named Pat Olivieri was at his hotdog stand. As a favor to a butcher he made a steak sandwich. At that moment a cab driver walked by and asked for one. Soon word spread and the cheesesteak was born. The word Kairos refers to the perfect moment, and although it is usually meant to be used in some form of speech or advertisement, I could argue that this moment was Kairos itself. Soon after Geneo’s Steaks opened catty corner from Pat’s and a lifelong rivalry began.  

The logo for Pat’s King of Steaks is the words with a crown on top of the letter A. It states that they are the inventor and originator of the steak. This is using rhetoric to their advantage. By stating they are the original, they cement their place in cheesesteak history and the history of Philadelphia. Geno’s Steaks recently changed their logo to the one below. It has the name along with the words, “Philadelphia Original.” Although they cannot state they created the cheesesteak, they can cement their claim as a true part of Philadelphia. Not only does this help attract tourists, it undermines Pat’s as the only place to get a true cheesesteak. This rivalry is full of the use of rhetoric as they battle for dominance continues in Philadelphia. In a world steeped in red gravy, only one cheesesteak can shine the brightest.  

September 17

Acadia National Park

That first trip to Mammoth Cave National Park may be what started my lifelong love of national parks, but what put it in the forefront of my mind is this next trip. Living on the East Coast it is a lot harder to get to national parks than other places in the United States. I think this is because of colonization. Colonization started on the East Coast and a lot of the land was not protected, but there was still a lot of wilderness on the West Coast and in the middle of the country. If you look at a map of national parks you can see that there are a lot more towards the western region of the country. This does not mean that there are no national parks here though. This is the story of my trip to Acadia National Park in Maine.  

As I said in the last blog, visiting national parks is not just about the park itself, but the trip. Sometimes our views of America can be just based on the places we live, and it can be easy to forget that the country has such diverse climates and regions. Each one different, and each one has a character that can’t be replicated. Maine is a world in its own right. A land of fisherman, lobster, and moose. A cold corner covered in lighthouses and trails.  

My dad is the food critic for The Philadelphia Inquirer, so every trip we have ends up being about the food. Because of that I remember countless lobster rolls. A fresh lobster tail smothered in butter in a toasted bun with toppings. I remember trips to oyster farms so my dad could write a story about it. Besides getting great food, another thing that his job allows me to do is connect with the culture on a deeper level, and the culture of Maine is the forests and the oceans it inhabits.  

Nothing encapsulates all of that like Acadia National Park. It is nestled on an island called Mount Desert Island, and it is brimming with trails to explore. The town nearby is Bar Harbor and there are signs everywhere to watch out for moose and other exciting animals. Unfortunately, I didn’t get to see a moose during my visit, but I still got to explore the trials. There are rocky mountain trails, lakes, and beautiful beaches that transport you to another world. Acadia National Park may not be as well-known as the Grand Canyon, but that lends to its charm. It is a refuge and a world apart all just a drive away. 

September 10

Kairos in The Modern World

Kairos, or the exact right moment to take advantage of a situation, can make or break any type of rhetoric. To show how this works I will explore a simple question. Why was Alec Baldwins impression of Donald Trump so popular on Saturday Night LiveAlec Baldwin first appeared in his famous role in 2016 and it was an instant hit. But why then and why now? The answer may seem obvious to us, but it is a perfect example of Kairos. As Donald Trump transformed from a reality TV start to a political figure, people wanted to see him be made fun of. 

They started these skits with Alec Baldwin playing opposite of Kate McKinnon’s Hillary ClintonTo fully understand how SNL has used rhetoric in the past, it helps to know that Saturday Night Live is a skit show that draws from the news and current events. In this sense, SNL uses rhetoric to make the audience laugh. They use polarizing events and know that a lot of the population will find it funny. They are also very specific about the language they use and where they emphasize things. Although this may not seem like what you think of when we talk about rhetoric, it is just a more subtle form in the sense that we don’t think about it. They can also use that to their advantage by using subtle hints to get a reaction out of you.  

This brings me back to Alec Baldwin. Donald Trump is certainly a polarizing figure in America, and SNL also knows that their audience is mostly liberal, so they were able to use this to get higher views. They were able to take advantage of the right moment, or Kairos, and create a memorable reoccurring character that is relevant to today’s world. You can be sure that whenever a new political figure appears, Saturday Night Live will use that to their advantage.  

September 10

An Introduction to My Passion

I have always been very excited about and interested in the National Park system, but of course that interest had to have started somewhere. The fact that the United States government has preserved thousands of acres of pristine land so that my and future generations can enjoy these lands is amazing. To me the parks are a beacon of hope, cheesy as that may sound it’s true. I want to become an environmental lawyer, and these parks seem like a monument to that field. They cannot be touched, and the natural resources within them can’t be extracted. So, when I say beacon of hope I guess I mean a starting point. A place that I am grateful for, and a model for what I want to do as an adult.  

That may be one of the reasons why I love national parks now, but my fascination with them started long before I knew what I wanted to do in my life. The first national park that I can remember going to is Mammoth Cave in Kentucky. I didn’t realize it then – I was only five years old – but that trip would end up bringing together different passions for my parents, and it would be the moment when I would discover my own passion  

My mom loves a lot of things. One thing that she loves are horses. Can you guess a stop on our trip to Kentucky? A track called Churchill Downs, in Louisville. It’s a racetrack, but most importantly it holds the yearly Kentucky Derby. On that trip we also visited the farm where Smarty Jones, the horse that almost won the Triple Crown in 2004, livedThe next thing I remember about our trip was a visit to the Makers Mark Distillery because my dad had to have some fun too. But the most important stop on our trip for me was the one to Mammoth Cave.  

Mammoth Cave is the largest known cave system in the world. I remember seeing the famous insignia of the National Park Service for the first time, an arrowhead with a buffalo in the middle of a forest. Pulling up you can see some kitschy attractions that scream American road trip. I said what my mom loved but I didn’t say what she hated, which happens to be small spaces. A cave happens to be full of them it turns out. We had to tour the mouth of the cave instead of seeing the actual thing. Although disappointing as this was, it has turned out to be the beginning of a lifelong fascination with our untamed wilds. To be fair, some of the 62 national parks are not necessarily “untamed,” but I think people would be surprised what you can see just a few miles off the road.  

September 3

My Two Brainstorm Ideas

When I think about what makes me happy, a surprising number of things come to mind. I don’t mean that in a sad way, but when I think of the sentence, “what makes me happy,” I think that it must be something that I don’t see flaws in. Something I could talk about for hours on end. So I was surprised during my brainstorming session that I was able to come up with so many things that I would be truly excited to write about. Of course, I have to narrow it down to two ideas, so this strangely hard decision led to hours of deliberation. This led me to two topics, the fantasy genre in television and books, and the National Park Service. These two completely different topics are some of the things that I am most interested in, and as I said before could probably talk about for hours.  

I found the fantasy genre a long time ago, but I really got into it during the run of the show Game of Thrones. The sprawling adventures and detailed characters led me to a world other than our own. The best part is that this seemingly massive world was just the tip of the iceberg for me. There are countless series and shows and worlds out there for me to explore that would let me escape. I believe that a good place to start, other than the classics, would be with the author Brandon Sanderson. This prolific writer continues to churn amazing books out quicker than a person can read them. He has gained a cult following to the point that a community of millions are able to share worlds that he dreamed of. While escaping this world may be a plus or benefit of reading these books, I also believe that they provide a way to see the real world from a new angle. It has taught me to look at the world as magical in its own right, that the world that we live in and the systems in place are in some ways just as fantastical as the stories entombed in those books.  

National Parks are extremely special. With around 62 located across the nation and its territories, they provide a glimpse into the untamed wild that was here long before we were. These parks are worth everything that they are given and more. My goal is to go to all of them in my lifetime, an achievement that I hope will not take as long as it sounds. I have a scratch off map over my bed in my dorm room with all the parks, and I have seven scratched off already. I believe that these preserved lands stand as a symbol for what can be done to help this world get back to where it needs to be.  

September 3

Commercial Campaign

In today’s television culture it can be easy to skip through commercialsThis makes it harder for companies to make an impression on the consumer. The answer to this problem is to present a catchy commercial campaign that people might actually like to watch, such as string of advertisements that follow a storyline or a theme that promote the company. The one I will be focusing on today is made by the cellular company AT&T. They have a series of commercials that go like this: there is a specific event or trick happening, and during it the event goes wrong. For example, there is one with a doctor who just got back from suspension preparing to do surgery on a patient, or one where the sushi chef has just been sent home sick. At the end of each commercial they state, “Just ok, is not ok. These commercials may not appear to be related to whaAT&T does as a company, but they don’t need to. A company that famous is already known across the world for its servicesso they don’t have to explain what they do. Instead, they want to attract people to their companyBy using humor, they make people pay attention. Then by using the slogan, “Just ok, is not ok,” a line that is fun to say and will likely be repeated oftentheir name becomes synonymous with a company that does not rest until their products work perfectly. The reason this works though is because it is a part of an ad campaign in which they have multiple commercials telling different stories. By making funny skitsthis advertising strategy begins to gain a following as people look for what the next one will be. Then once viewers have the concept and phrasing in mind, they will think of this message every time they think of the company. To me, this is the perfect way to get people to listen to you. By using subtle messages consistently, the consumer won’t even realize they are watching a commercial, but the next time they look to get a phone they will think of whose campaign says they strive for the best.