Overall, I think I did pretty well on my speech in all regards: both content and presentation.
In regards to content, I think I provided a thorough, analytic approach and included a lot of different rhetorical viewpoints for understanding my artifact, “Mask up or Pack Up” (also random side tangent, if I have to write the words “Mask Up or Pack Up” anymore, I think I might scream, haha!). I began by describing the rhetorical situation around the artifact, then analyzed the artifact from the perspective of kairos, pathos, and ethos. The only part of my content that might be a bit questionable was the conclusion, where I brought my personal viewpoint about the artifact a bit. I did so in sentences like “masks are more important now than its ever been,” etc, which could be seen as volleying for my artifact rather than analyzing it. I am comfortable with this, however. Partially because I personally don’t think wearing masks is negotiable in public settings when distancing is not an option, and because I used it to tie in my conclusory points about the civil nature of the artifact.
As far as presentation goes, I chose to present in a bit more of a casual, conversive way (personal preference for performing) without sacrificing content quality. I am pretty nervous public speaking (even over a video, apparently lol) so I had a few stumbles. The worst occurred during the conclusion of my speech, and considering this was probably my millionth attempt at getting a perfect recording, I wasn’t too inclined to re-record a small mistake at the end. I do also tend to gesture a lot more when nervous, which I notice when watching my video back. I believe if I had given this speech in person, that might have been a bit distracting or more obvious, but due to the small video size, I don’t think it interfered too much.
I really enjoyed listening to your speech. You are a natural at public speaking and did a great job of presenting it and keeping the audience engaged.
Your speech was very good and spoke very well. You did a good job and with such a relatable topic I really enjoyed and understood it.
I thought you did really great on your speech, I found it very informative and you really got your audience more engaged by speaking in a casual tone.