Hey y’all,

Here’s the link to my elevator pitch: https://psu.voicethread.com/share/25180443/

See you next week!

~Asim~

In reviewing my speech and comparing it to some others that I saw, it’s clear there are certain things I did really well as well as a lot of things I can still work on.

Strengths:

1. I feel that my introduction is very successful in getting the viewer to see the moral issue at the heart of African Exploitation. Many people wouldn’t see the artifact in the same way if I didn’t use a relatable and universal lens of comparing the situation.
2. My delivery for a lot of things felt pretty good. This isn’t something I was worried about, since public speaking and performance is very comfortable for me at this point.
3. Overall, my conception and arrangement flowed well, given that I took on a subject that’s relatively different than what most people focused on. That’s just to say that I had somewhat of a hard time getting this deeply-rooted and uncommonly accepted civic issue to a place of comprehension and understanding for viewers.

Weaknesses:

1. I’ll go ahead and admit that my preparation could’ve been better. I procrastinated developing the speech as much because I was focusing on the essay and other things, so I had to do a lot of on-the-spot tweaking when I was recording, which kept me up late.
2. I kept changing the ending of the speech up to the final time I recorded it because I just couldn’t find a conclusion that felt like it wrapped up my points, reinstated the thesis, and presented an idea for moving forward with the issue in the time I had left. My ending wasn’t bad, but I’d probably go back and rearrange it if I could.
3. Memorization. I think if I spent a bit more time memorizing the wording of my speech and the arrangement of topics, I wouldn’t have had to look at my notes as much. Watching Chris’ speech, he’s completely memorized, and that gives him the freedom to explore intonation, style, gesture, and other aspects of delivery. As an actor, I know how important it is to be off-book when it comes to delivering material effectively.

Overall, I’m happy that I got the speech recorded and submitted, but I will remember for the future that it takes more time commitment to do the best work I can.

~Asim

Essay Draft:

Johnny and Lisa were friends and liked to share their toys with each other, but one day Johnny got selfish and decided to take all of Lisa’s toys as his own. Some time passed, and Johnny decided to give Lisa her toys back, but he still got to use them whenever he wanted whether she liked it or not. Even more time has passed now, and Johnny claims to have given them back, but Lisa is still wondering whether her toys will ever truly be her own. This situation presents the same moral issues as the relationship between Europe and Africa. From the trans-Atlantic Slave Trade that continued through colonization in the 19th and 20th centuries, to the well-hidden ploy of Neo-Colonialism that exists today, African resources have been exploited by Western nations throughout history.  

There are two civic artifacts that do a great job of addressing this issue. One, titled “Gold diggers” depicts how the material resources from Africa (gold, oil, cacao, fish, rare minerals, etc.) end up piled on the continents of North America and Europe. The other, which I’ll refer to as “The Resource Curse” illustrates the relationship between Western corporations and African people, where the Westerners “rejoice” over finding oil in Turkana, Kenya, but the citizens of the Turkana tribe are more concerned simply with finding clean water. I will use strategies of Ideological criticism, unpacking the commonplaces apparent in the artifacts, and the misrepresentation of progress in global media to examine this issue. Ultimately, both artifacts use visual rhetoric to communicate our civic duty to learn about neo-colonialism and attack the ongoing exploitation of Africa. If we address African exploitation carefully and collaboratively, we can work as a global community to repatriate the wealth of Africa, finally giving Lisa her toys back. 

The rhetorical situation behind “Gold Diggers” is that most of Africa’s resources, worth trillions of dollars, still end up being exported to wealthy nations all over Europe, Asia, and North America, while many African people experience extreme poverty, hunger, limited access to clean water, and governmental corruption. This exploitation of African resources goes back to the 15th century, when the Portuguese began trading with West African merchants for gold and other commodities, including human captives. The ideological criticism in “Gold Diggers” here is the impact of this exploitation. As shown in the image, the gold from Africa physically ended up on the continents of Europe and, subsequently, America as well. Due to this, Africa is left barren, with only a little gold left. Though this civic artifact doesn’t depict any human individuals, you can see from looking at it the inequalities that have been created between the continents. 

“The Resource Curse” also employs heavy ideological criticism in its visual rhetoric. In the image, the Europeans are all making expressions of joy and excitement, with heightened poses and wide cartoony smiles, while the Africans stand straight-faced and unenthused. This presents the ideology that the Westerners are more concerned with the monetary implication of new resources than the Africans’ plight. The physical difference between the thick and full-bodied Westerners and the thin, exasperated-looking Africans also suggests a gap in access to nutrition, another ideological criticism to the rhetorical situation. More visual commentary is found in the depiction of a few westerners who aren’t humanoid, like the pig-person and other people with animal heads to the left. This represents the animalistic greed of those who try to exploit others’ resources. The text, reading “Rejoice, we have discovered oil”, in which an African woman responds, “And when will you discover water…?” shows the misalignment between the two peoples’ values, which, similarly to “Gold Diggers”, emphasizes the inequality that lies between the two groups of people.  

“Gold Diggers” also plays on a few commonplaces that we in the western world take for granted. One such commonplace is the association of Africa as a country and not as a continent full of nations. I vividly recall a moment in my childhood where our social studies teacher had to inform us that Africa was in fact a continent, just like Europe, Asia, or North America. Since the artifact has the entire continent voided out, it plays on our comfortability with grouping it all together, even though gold only comes from select places. It also uses the western commonplace that money=power. If the coins in the artifact represent gold, or currency, then the entirety of African resources adopt Western monetary value. It’s not just gold that gets exported from Africa, but also other rare minerals, oil, gas, cacao, coffee, raw food products, and much else. All these things were given monetary value by the Western world to trade them. Since it all ends up in the west, they have the monetary power in this situation.  

The commonplace found in “The Resource Curse” is a very common and damaging one. It’s very likely that everyone who grew up in America has heard the phrase “There are starving children in Africa” before. This commonplace is especially harmful, not only because it’s not entirely true, but also because it teaches us to be comfortable with this fact rather than trying to do something about it. If we just take “there are starving children in Africa” as an unconditional truth, we will never stop and think about why this may be. The truth would connect back to the rhetorical situation of “Gold Diggers” and the exploitation of African resources, but since the Western world doesn’t benefit from a common knowledge of that inequity, it’s never a part of our education to learn about it. If the narrative was changed from “starving children” to “African people don’t have control over their own resources”, then maybe there would be more global effort for change. 

A final lens that can be used to analyze both artifacts is the misrepresentation of progress in global media. Investigative journalist Tom Burgis claims in his book The Looting Machine that Africa is: “the continent that is at once the world’s poorest and, arguably, its richest” (CNN). In terms of monetary value of resources, no continent has Africa beat, and yet many countries in Africa have some of the highest poverty rates in the world. One aspect of the rhetorical situation that neither artifact touches on is the corruption present in certain governments of Africa. According to a survey by Transparency International, people in countries like South Africa, Ghana, and Nigeria reported increased corruption in 2015 (Transparency.org). This is important in analysis of the two civic artifacts, as the governmental corruption is directly tied to the exploitation of political power and resources that the Europeans left behind in Africa, as depicted in the artifacts. “Gold Diggers” depicts the economic results of colonial exploitation, and “The Resource Curse” shows the ways in which neo-colonialism still plagues the African people. All of this is misrepresented in the media because the Western world is taught that colonialism is long dead and gone. 

The exploitation of African resources addresses the SDGs of reduced inequalities, no poverty, zero hunger, good health and well-being, decent work/economic growth, and peace, justice, and strong institutions. The civic artifacts “Gold Diggers” and “The Resource Curse” use many different rhetorical methods of communicating the issue at hand, but there is still much of the rhetorical situation that they are unable to cover. As civic artifacts, they are educating us so that we may gain a better understanding of the issue and possibly make more efforts to address it. The less we think about it as an African problem and rather as a global problem, we can work towards restoring wealth and resources to the people of Africa. 

Resource curse:

Transparency International 2015 

https://www.transparency.org/en/gcb/africa/africa-9th-edition 

CNN 2018 

https://www.cnn.com/2016/04/18/africa/looting-machine-tom-burgis-africa/index.html 

Speech Outline: 

• Johnny and Lisa were friends and liked to share their toys with each other, but one day Johnny got selfish and decided to take all of Lisa’s toys as his own. Some time passed, and Johnny decided to give Lisa her toys back, but he still got to use them whenever he wanted whether she liked it or not. Even more time has passed now, and Johnny claims to have given them back, but Lisa is still wondering whether her toys will ever truly be her own. This situation presents the same moral issues as the relationship between Europe and Africa. From the trans-Atlantic Slave Trade that continued through colonization in the 19th and 20th centuries, to the well-hidden ploy of Neo-Colonialism that exists today, African resources have been exploited by Western nations throughout history. 
• “Gold diggers” depicts how the material resources from Africa (gold, oil, cacao, fish, rare minerals, etc.) end up piled on the continents of North America and Europe. 
• I will examine this issue through the lenses of Ideological criticism, the commonplaces apparent in the artifact, and the misrepresentation of progress in global media. 

Ideological criticism: 

• The rhetorical situation behind “Gold Diggers” is that most of Africa’s resources, worth trillions of dollars, still end up being exported to wealthy nations all over Europe, Asia, and North America, while many African people experience:  

• extreme poverty 
• hunger 
• limited access to clean water 
• governmental corruption. 

• The ideological criticism in “Gold Diggers” here is the impact of this exploitation.  

• As shown in the image, the gold from Africa physically ended up on the continents of Europe and, subsequently, America as well. Due to this, Africa is left barren, with only a little gold left. 

Commonplaces: 

• “Gold Diggers” plays on a few commonplaces that we in the western world take for granted.  
• the association of Africa as a country and not as a continent full of nations. I vividly recall a moment in my childhood where our social studies teacher had to inform us that Africa was in fact a continent, just like Europe, Asia, or North America.  
• Since the artifact has the entire continent voided out, it plays on our comfortability with grouping it all together, even though gold only comes from select places.  
• It also uses the western commonplace that money=power. If the coins in the artifact represent gold, or currency, then the entirety of African resources adopt Western monetary value.  
• It’s not just gold that gets exported from Africa, but also other rare minerals, oil, gas, cacao, coffee, raw food products, and much else.  
• All these things were given monetary value by the Western world to trade them. Since it all ends up in the west, they have the monetary power in this situation. 

Misrepresentation of progress: 

• Investigative journalist Tom Burgis claims in his book The Looting Machine that Africa is: “the continent that is at once the world’s poorest and, arguably, its richest” (CNN).  
• In terms of monetary value of resources, no continent has Africa beat, and yet many countries in Africa have some of the highest poverty rates in the world.  
• According to a survey by Transparency International, people in countries like South Africa, Ghana, and Nigeria reported increased corruption in 2015 (Transparency.org). 
• Governmental corruption is directly tied to the connection between political power and resources that the Europeans left behind in Africa, as can be inferred from the artifact.  
• “Gold Diggers” depicts the economic results of colonial exploitation  
• All of this is misrepresented in the media because the Western world is taught that colonialism is long dead and gone. 

SDG’s: 

• Reduced inequalities among nations
• Europe > Africa 
• no poverty 
• zero hunger
• good health and well-being 
• decent work/economic growth 
• peace, justice, and strong institutions

That’s it!

~Asim

Johnny and Lisa were friends and liked to share their toys with each other, but one day Johnny got selfish and decided to take all of Lisa’s toys as his own. Some time passed, and Johnny decided to give Lisa her toys back, but he still got to use them whenever he wanted whether she liked it or not. Even more time has passed now, and Johnny claims to have given them back, but Lisa is still wondering whether her toys will ever truly be her own.

This situation presents the same moral issues as the relationship between Europe and Africa.

From the trans-Atlantic Slave Trade that continued through colonization in the 19th and 20th centuries, to the well-hidden ploy of Neo-Colonialism that exists today, African resources have been exploited by Western and Eastern nations throughout history. In this essay, I will explore two civic artifacts. One, titled “Gold diggers” depicts how the material resources from Africa (gold, oil, cacao, fish, rare minerals, etc.) end up piled on the continents of North America and Europe. The other, which I’ll refer to as “The Resource Curse” illustrates the relationship between Western corporations and African people, where the Westerners “rejoice” over finding oil in Turkana, Kenya, but the citizens of the Turkana tribe are more concerned simply with finding clean water.

I will examine this issue through the lenses of Ideological criticism, the commonplace of “There are starving children in Africa”, and the misrepresentation of progress in global media. The exploitation of African resources addresses the SDGs of reduced inequalities, no poverty, zero hunger, good health and well-being, decent work and economic growth, and peace, justice, and strong institutions. If we address this issue carefully and collaboratively, we can work as a global community to repatriate the wealth of Africa, finally giving Lucy her toys back. 

~Asim~