http://www.statecollege.com/news/local-news/committee-votes-for-recreational-facility-security-increased-room-and-board,1467022/
Min, Azure, Marisole, Anna , Jeff
Story Idea Template: Bicycle Wheel Form
The Axle (What do you want the viewer to understand? Use one declare sentence: Noun+ Verb + Object. Do not use a phrase or ask a question here.): the board of trustees have voted to increase the amount of security at rec building, white building, and the IM building. They also increased how much room and board is
The Riders (Who are the best people to tell the story):
The best people to tell this story would be the people making the decision. That would be the Board of Trustees and The Penn State trustees’ Committee on Finance and Capital Planning. We would also interview the people that are affected by this decision. That would be students and/or parents of students. Regarding the recreation facilities, we could talk to people who work there and see what their thoughts are.
The Spokes (Any memorable moments: bites, sound, track, stand-up?):
Memorable moments could be any sound from those who feel strongly on whether or not spending this money which will affect students is a good or a bad thing . It’d be best to show both sides and opinions. Nat Sound could just be people conversing and walking past the buildings that are listed for renovation . The stand up could be outside of Rec Hall where it will cost $120,000 to be renovated.
The Rim (What are the beginning, middle and ending of your story?)
1) Beginning: The story can start with how the facilities have been operated and how the Board of Trustees and The Penn State trustees’ Committee on Finance and Capital Planning have made decision.
2) Middle: Discussing about the advantages and disadvantages of the current situation and also talking about the expected outcomes after the change. We can interview people who are using the facilities and ask their thoughts regarding to the decision.
3) Ending: The end can reiterate what is expected as far as an official decision and let the viewers know that the committee is meeting on tomorrow to make that final decision.