Axle: The Mount Nittany Middle School added new security features to its building.
Riders: A few of the school’s officials were already interview for this story, so to take a different angle we could interview some of the teachers from the middle school. We could also interview parents of students and some of the students themselves to see how they feel and if they notice any changes to their daily safety protocol.
Spokes: We could get a full visual explanation of the new security features that will make the school safer as one of the school officials could walk us through some of the ins and outs. We could also get an explanation of why the previous system wasn’t sufficient and any instances that occurred that led to these new measures.
Rim: Beginning we get shots of the outside of the school and b-roll of students walking through the hallways and then introduce the front door where the security is visually beefed up. The Middle would be interviews of teachers and students and some of the changes they see around the school. The end would be interviews of some parents talking about how they feel safer that their kids are safe and get some sound bites of the principal talking about how safety is their first priority at the school with some closing b-roll of the outside again.