I think the strength of my speech is that my PowerPoint is clear. It does not contain too many words. And the content of the speech is good. My speech follows the PowerPoint. The weakness of my speech is the delivery. I think the tone of my speech can be improved. I also talk a little too fast because I’m worried I could not finish the speech in a limited time. I learned from my classmates’ speeches that sometimes lower volume helps better delivery. I think the volume of my voice is a little loud. I should fix this problem and have more practice for the next speech.
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I agree with majority of these points; however, I don’t think loudness is really an issue. People can turn their volume up or down if they are bothered.
I agree with Bobby that the volume is not an issue. In fact I think it’s better to be loud than quiet, and the audience can adapt and change their own volume if they need to.
I don’t think your volume was an issue at all, loudness is usually better at getting points across. I think it communicates assertiveness and confidence.