This I Believe

The United Nations Declaration of Rights of the Child entitles each child to a name. Naming children shows that parents at least acknowledge their existence and care enough to distinguish them from everything else in their world. There are shelves of books devoted to the subject of names, especially the critical choice all expecting parents must make when deciding their children’s names.

I certainly can’t recall the process my parents went through as they examined those first ultrasound images, but I’m sure they never intended for me to make a separate name for myself. 

I feel almost guilty about spitting on their weeks of  deliberation. After all, my parents  named me after a princess. I can console  myself  that it was an accident I have no way of undoing.

The first day of kindergarten at Roberts Elementary School was an ordinary, almost boring, day for me. Since my birthday missed the grade cutoff date by two months, my parents enrolled me in a preschool head start program so that by the time I entered Roberts, I was well acclimated with school routines. Many of my less experienced classmates who had trouble adjusting to their new surroundings cried for their parents.

I sat on the rug and toyed with a stray piece of yarn, waiting for the end of the day so I could finally watch Arthur on TV.  My teacher, Mrs. Davis, comforted the other students before taking role. In my preschool class or whenever I met strangers, my parents introduced me as “Cissy (pronounced see-see)” but I was all alone on that day. I couldn’t hide behind my mom’s legs or burrow under my dad’s oversized polo. When Mrs. Davis called my name, she hesitated before guessing the pronunciation.

“Cissy?” she said.

I didn’t know what to do. On one hand, I’d been taught not to talk back to the teacher, but on the other hand, I didn’t want my name mispronounced. Then, as I sometimes do now, I shut down when I most needed to assert myself. I decided to remain silent. For the rest of the year, Mrs. Davis called me Cissy and so did my classmates. From that point onward, I introduced myself to new people as Cissy but my parents and old friends continued to call me “Cissy”. My two names marked off the public and private sectors of my life, two identities given my the people who surrounded me. 

Many people think of a “sissy” as someone who lacks conviction and self-confidence. When Mrs. Davis first called my name, I couldn’t muster the courage to correct her. In that moment, I defined myself as a “Cissy” both literally and figuratively. I began this essay by discussing the value of names within our world. You might wonder what benefit I could possibly have from such an embarrassing mispronunciation of my name. Though the symbolism might seem too perfect, I understand now that I learn from the mistake that gave me my name by becoming more confident. In that regard, my name might have a different sort of meaning for me than the one we usually consider.

I believe that each person has the opportunity to define their own identity. I believe we must seize that opportunity, or allow others to tell us who we are.

Ideas post

For my This I Believe podcast, I want to speak about the 2008 recession’s impact on my family and how it taught me that we don’t control what happens to us, but we determine how we respond to hardship. Growing up, I lived in a community where most parents had stable, high-paying jobs including my dad, who worked for pharmaceutical company GSK. The recession and job outsourcing meant that the company laid off many of its workers at his site, and eventually, he was laid off as well. The notion of an unemployed parent was strange to me because my experiences thus far taught me to expect a steady income. I was upset with my dad for “getting fired” and I didn’t understand economic reality.

On a lighter note, I might also do my podcast about learning music and what it taught me about accomplishing any goal. Once you know how to read music, learning a piece of music becomes mostly about just playing it repeatedly and gradually figuring out how the notes flow. However, I’ve found that there are always things I can do to interpret a piece differently or make it sound better. Like learning music, no goal will begin itself.

For my Civic Issues Blog, I’d like to write about the American identity today and the controversies over what qualities should unite us. Each blog post would focus on a specific aspect of identity, such as religious identity, race, immigration status and others. I plan to research the historical context of the issue, then write about the current state of the country as it concerns the issue. Given my research and personal values, I’ll present my opinion on how to resolve the tensions.

This blog topic might be too general, so my second idea is for a blog about immigration. The issue of immigration inspires a lot of emotional passions, which makes it difficult to debate or discuss it. To the extent that it’s possible given my personal biases, I’d write an assessment of what values guide both sides after reading other opinions on the topic. Then, I would decide what I believe or come up with a compromise.

For my Passion Blog, I want to continue with my current idea. Ideally, I read a book each week then write a review and commentary on the book. If I don’t end of reading that week, as is often the case, I’ll write about a memorable book I read previously or some other reading related topic. The format for my passion blogs is currently pretty open ended. I might reflect on the parallels between my own observations and the content of the book or general trends in the books I read.

Another idea I’d like to try is blogging about the ways geology has influenced human history. For example, mountains often served as a natural defense against invasion while people living in societies on level land risked invasion. I would research and blog about a different example each week.

Rhetoric and Civic Life Reflection

At the beginning of the semester, my conception of rhetoric included only a narrow range of situations and forms of speech. I thought of civic life as a political term, which applied to voting and protests, but nothing I would do in my everyday life. Throughout the length of this course, I realized that those two terms encompass a lot of the content I consume and my own daily communication. Learning about the characteristics of rhetoric, seeing examples and analyzing messages made me aware of just how it influences the way people view the world. Ironically, this course has also lead me to become somewhat paranoid, always thinking about how others are trying to manipulate me.

For example, I remember struggling with the assigned blog post about the rhetorical strategies employed in an advertisement. I watched the “Dawn Saves Wildlife” ad and thinking afterwards that it was well put together, the animals were cute and it made we want to buy Dawn dish soap. But why did the ad have such a strong effect on me? Could it have been the cute animals? And what did our instinctive protectiveness toward the animals say about our society? The answers to these questions came more easily than I expected because I incorporate them in my conversations. When I want to convince my parents, I tell them about how my request will help me become a better student or person. I take into account the societal expectation that parents should help their children’s development and provide for them. I preemptively express my gratitude because they like feeling needed.

It surprised me that things as ordinary as sappy ads and parental persuasion could employ the same strategies used by our opinion leaders. In a free system, whether a free market or a representative democracy, persuasion forms the foundation of our interactions. Since Dawn has competitors and legally can’t compel customers to pay for its product, it pulls our heartstrings to get at our wallets. Similarly, I can’t force my parents to do whatever I want. The pervasiveness of persuasion, in some ways, has made me accustomed at analyzing rhetoric without even realizing it.

As I prepare to enter  adulthood, I understand the importance of being able to detect the underlying messages in rhetoric so I can make informed decisions. I also anticipate using many of these strategies to effectively communicate my ideas.

Documentary Script Draft

Animal testing has a long and messy history of saving thousands of human lives through medical advancement, but also causing the suffering of innocent animals in cruel and unusual experiments. Ancient Greek and Arab physicians tested their surgical procedures on animals before using them on humans. Their experiments indicate that people have long recognized the physical similarities between humans and animals while also believing their lives to have less value. Given the heavy influence of religion on morality in early societies, the primary arguments in favor of animal testing came from the human-centric doctrines of Christianity, Islam and most other religions. However, medieval Catholic theologian Thomas Aquinas discouraged cruelty against animals because it often led to similar treatment of other people.

From a secular viewpoint, Renee Descartes advanced the idea that animals could feel pain and express that pain, but their inferior intelligence made them more like machines than people. The justification Descartes offered paved the way for a century of animal testing in Europe with almost no government oversight. Despite the scientific community’s general tolerance of animal testing, including live dissection, some members of the public reacted by forming Anti-Vivisection Societies or lobbying their governments. Animal testing increased in scope and popularity in the U.S. after an untested drug killed 100 people in 1937, leading to the passage of the Food, Drug and Cosmetics Act of 1938. The law required extensive animal testing before the approval of new medicines, beauty products and food ingredients.

Throughout history, the main tensions within the debate over animal testing have been in the degree to which animals’ similarities to humans granted them similar rights. The reason scientists and doctors turned to animal testing was because animals shared physical characteristics in common with humans, which allowed them to stand in for human subjects and advance our understanding of the human body. For opponents of animal testing, the similarities between animals and humans runs deeper than their external features. If animals had beating hearts, brains and eyes just like people, they could feel pain and suffer psychologically like we did.

TED Talk Outline

Opener: Show pictures of bored college students in a giant lecture hall, ask why are we here?

-the college years make an impact on students beyond their time in higher education: alumni parents at football games, diplomas hanging in offices

-the purpose of college has evolved since the founding of the higher education system in the Middle Ages: misconception of ivory tower, separate from society — in fact, colleges subject to societal and governmental pressure

-In the beginning: religious education, mainly preservation of knowledge from generation to generation — about training students to assume roles of religious leadership

-Later: German research university (very specialized education, students only learn about their major) vs. English colleges (learning about a core curriculum of the humanities)

-Morill Land Grant universities (including Penn State!): established to educate the residents of a state for low cost, main focus on technical skills

-Up until 1950s, higher education in the U.S. was reserved mainly for society’s upper classes and a select few who were considered gifted enough

-GI Bill provided funds for thousands of veterans to attend college after World War II, explosion in numbers of students and federal aid

-As demographics of college students and societal forces changed, colleges changed their character to reflect the diversity of their students (backgrounds and demographics)

-dropped Latin and Greek requirements for admissions — allowed for students who weren’t private school graduates

-shift away from core curriculum and other course requirements for students

-colleges became less about instilling specific traits or ideals in students, more about letting students find themselves and take advantage of opportunities on their own

-talk about Penn State: we might say we are Penn State, but what makes us Penn State? Ask audience to name things Penn State students share in common.

-everyone is studying different subjects, taking different classes, involved in their own niche on campus

-we’re all students on this campus, but we all want different things out of our education and Penn State provides us the chance to realize our objectives.

-remains to be seen how the college experience will change

 

 

Inside the Mind of A Master Procrastinator

In “Inside the Mind of a Master Procrastinator,” writer Tim Urban recalls his struggles overcoming academic procrastination during his college years and the underlying problem of procrastinating in life. This is one of my favorite TED Talks because of its simplicity and relevance to my own life.

As a fellow procrastinator who is admittedly writing this blog post the night before class, I related to Urban’s thought process as he delayed work on his thesis from the beginning of the year to three days before the deadline. I have never written ninety pages in three days (yet!), but his visuals depicting the hypothetical “climb” of work required to finish his thesis under a six month, three month and three day timescale effectively illustrated the problems with procrastination. The scenarios become more and more impractical, however, the procrastinator convinces themselves that they can pull it off because they have done it before.

A significant portion of the audience is likely procrastinators, or people who have experience dealing with procrastinators, so Urban’s humor helps them feel open to considering something society considers a shameful habit. While he stands at a podium surrounded by hundreds of adoring listeners, he shows a rare sense of humility that establishes his personal credibility on giving advice to help the audience live their best lives. He jokes that his thesis was one of the best the university ever saw, and I inwardly rolled my eyes because that’s how every cheesy internet story ends. When he confessed to the audience that the thesis was terrible, I felt more willing to listen to him because he has the honesty to admit his mistakes and the intelligence to learn from them. I saw him not as an expert giving a dry explanation of the negative effects of procrastination, but as another person who deals with the same mental hurdles I do.

Once Urban promised to show the audience diagrams of the procrastinator’s brain, I braced myself to absorb complex depictions of brain activity charts and what each feature demonstrated. It took me a few replays to appreciate his bait-and-switch style of speaking. The childlike drawings of the instant gratification monkey, the rational decision maker and the panic monster proved more engaging than colored pictures of brains. Seeing my motivations boiled down to such simple players helped me make sense of why I procrastinated and how procrastination was really giving in to weaknesses rather than playing to my strengths. In the past, I tried to explain away my procrastination by telling myself that my procrastination made me smarter because it taught me how to work under pressure.

The overarching message of Urban’s TED Talk introduced a novel way of thinking of procrastination as not just a student thing, but an issue all people face as they pass through their lives. Even though I still have decades to live, the boxes on the screen showing every week of a 90-year life  put into perspective how few weeks we have to waste. By putting off what we want to accomplish another week or another year, it becomes easier to never do it at all. I liked that the speech turned what seems like a topic relevant only to one demographic (procrastinators) into a message everyone can benefit from.

 

Paradigm Shifts

For my paradigm shift essay, I’m considering writing an essay about the changes in the role college plays in the development of young adults. On one hand, abundant student loans and the large number of higher ed institutions makes college more accessible to learners from diverse backgrounds. As a result, college is becoming a familiar part of the path from teenager to workforce. However, some are concerned that the oversupply of students and the profit incentives of colleges have made college more of a factory for perfectly-credentialed graduates than a place to define your identity. I have no idea on my views of the topic, so most of my early research would focus on reading as much material as possible from each side, then formulate my own position.

Given my obvious interest in the issue as a college student, I want to look at how the evolving job market and college application process have changed the way students view their high education years. I recently read the memoir “Privilege,” the story of the author’s years at Harvard and his disillusionment with the school’s lofty reputation. I would include research from the book, as well as accounts from other authors, both contemporary and past, of their college years.

In that case, my essay would focus mainly on personal accounts, though I would use statistics to provide an idea of the situation. I think the most effective means of conveying my thesis, whatever it becomes, will be through the eyes of people who have been through the system. Personal feelings are best expressed through stories, rather than one-phrase survey responses or numbers.

A secondary I have is to look at the college admissions process, how the “ideal” student has changed over the years. During my time applying to 11 colleges last year, I worried endlessly about this topic, tailoring my essays to fit the aesthetic of each school while trying to distinguish myself just enough from the crowd. Even though I wasn’t born at the time, I tried to think of the years when students didn’t have to write numerous essays or win top awards to get into college. I can’t imagine Brown having only seven students to fill its massive campus (actually happened, according to tour guide), which is why I would like to explore the issue further. Given the large numbers of students whose applications pass through admissions offices, the essay would have to be more numbers-heavy.

Rhetorical Analysis Speech Outline

  • Discuss how often American teenagers use technology (up to 10 hours a day of screen time)
  • How does technology affect the way we relate to one another? Positive/negative effects
    • important for our generation given how much time we spend on devices
    • skills matter more than ever in college
  • Introduce background behind Jablonski’s speech
    • pulls audience in by asking them to put down their cell phones for next four years
    • audience: teenagers raised with social media, beginning new chapter of their lives
    • speaker: older person, must establish credibility with audience (ethos)
      • Uses cultural references
      • anecdotes (Sparks, successful undergraduate student)
        • “important to absorb everything”-goes against current information consumption patterns, which emphasize quick takes/lots of information from all sides
        • Logos and ethos-more credible coming from another student
  • Audience wants to achieve great things with new freedom and opportunity of college life
    • Jablonski reassures them of their abilities (comparing human brain vs. computers)
      • powerful analogy: people think of computers as all-powerful, nothing compares to people’s inherent power
        • pathos
    • repetition of phrases and parallel structure establishes the number of opportunities and different niches available at Penn State
      • sends message that Penn State truly has a place for everyone — reassuring students of their ability to succeed
    • appeals to forward-facing outlook of college freshmen using sweeping, poetic language
      • “Now is not the time to retire into the safety of your screens.”
      • “I don’t want you to miss the magic of your mashup because you were looking at your cell phone.”
  • Conclusion: effective motivational speech, battles common perception among millennials about need for constant connectivity via devices
    • relies heavily on emotional appeals, related to purpose of speech (to persuade and entertain)

Rhetorical Analysis Rough Draft

Today, the average American teenager spends up to 10 hours a day in front of screens, whether TVs, computers or increasingly, their smartphones. The increase in screen time correlates almost exactly with advances in smartphone technology, as today’s cell phones allow their users to instantly check their social media feeds, surf the internet and sometimes do both at once. Given the inescapable presence of technology in our society, the effects of our favorite electronic devices on the way we interact with one another has become a relevant topic of significant interest. During Penn State’s 2017 convocation, anthropology professor Nina Jablonski requested that students “put away” their cell phones throughout their four years at Penn State. She claimed that while technology serves as our primary means of socialization, it can also isolate us from new people and experiences. In contrast to Jablonski, Verizon appeals to the potential for technology to connect complete strangers, in an advertisement marketing its services to millennials while advocating opposite views. Both pieces of rhetoric attempt to reach young adults using current cultural references, creating a personal connection by example and appealing to their hopes and expectations.

Young people, the intended audience of the two pieces of rhetoric, have a distinct set of values and preferences, and with youth generally comes a skepticism of condescending adults unfamiliar with their culture. At the outset of their presentations, Jablonski and Verizon seek to establish credibility with their audience by demonstrating that they “get” millennials. Jablonski immediately follows her request by clarifying that she does not oppose the use of technology or discount its advantages, but rather opposes its excessive application. For many millennials, the stereotype of the elderly relative annoyed with today’s kids and their screen addictions has undeniable currency, which compels Jablonski to separate herself from the group. Throughout her convocation speech, she makes reference to the lure of Snapchat and other social media apps on the typical student’s cell phone. Thus, she appears to sympathize with the struggles of her audience as they experience constant distractions from their phones.

Verizon also deploys common cultural references in the service of selling its products. The ad depicts a group of young friends waiting for food at a food truck, but struggling to get a data signal. They meet a young man who takes the opportunity to inform his new friends about Verizon’s largest nationwide 4G network. Although considered lower class for much of the 20th century, food trucks have experienced a resurgence in popularity among millennials looking to enjoy authentic ethnic cuisine and fast food delivery. However, the friends can’t enjoy their food properly without the signal necessary to post their meals to social media, an all too common problem for millennials on the go. In the ad, Verizon attempts to relate to its audience by indicating that it understands their lives and has the solutions they need. Instead of acting as the bland, outdated corporation, Verizon is the fresh, dynamic business in tune with the demands of young people.  The average phone service user today isn’t bound by a landline, but remains carries their device in their pocket. Verizon takes the rhetorical situation into account, knowing that millennials want service that complements their mobile lifestyles, symbolized by the food truck in the background.

Anecdotes and examples of ten enhance a rhetor’s message by demonstrating the validity of their statements using relatable characters their audiences want to emulate. This strategy appeals to the logical side of the mind, offering guarantees that the speaker’s claims are not just unsubstantiated theory, but practical advice. To remind students of what they could accomplish at Penn State unburdened by their devices, Jablonski tells the story of “Sparks,” a physics undergraduate who began as a lab assistant and eventually went on to conduct original research. She quotes him as saying it’s “important to start slow and absorb information,” a rebuke to the internet’s information saturation. While hearing the same advice from an older adult would generate eye rolls, the messenger lends more credibility to the message. Sparks, a millennial raised in the same technology-rich environment, found his passion by relearning the old ways of processing information and asking questions. Since not all freshmen at commencement have interests in STEM fields, she diversifies the appeal of her speech by also including examples of opportunities at Penn State available to students of every field. The fact that others in their same position have achieved success and belonging at Penn State reassures students that they can do the same if they only look beyond their screens.

Likewise, Verizon presents its audience with an idealized version of themselves in the form of the characters who appear in the ad. The friends dining at the food truck are well-dressed and enjoying life in the city as young people with few responsibilities. The only thing that prevents them from enjoying that life fully is their lack of data service. They have lives similar to those of the company’s target demographic, and they need Verizon’s 4G LTE network to complete their lives. The interloper in the group represents the generic everyman, the nice guy who gets along with everybody he meets. While he begins as an outsider, he works his way into the center of attention with ease. His knowledge of Verizon’s services allows him to gain access to the group of friends, implying that people gravitate to those have the technological connections that serve as the lifeblood of millennial society. To venture from the network of cell phone users constitutes social suicide, since the friends’ panic over their lack of service reflects the modern fear of missing out.

The two rhetors tap into commonplaces held among young people today about the kinds of lives they expect to lead and utilize kairos to construct their arguments. In Jablonski’s case, the audience consists of students in the unique position of belonging to the social media generation and preparing for a new phase in their lives. They are venturing into unknown territory, a situation which inspires either fear of change or great expectations for what they can accomplish on their own. She specifically addresses the universal human impulse to retreat back to the familiar-in our age, the world of social media. However, she follows by arguing that by sticking with the tried and true, people miss exciting new things happening around them. As newly independent people, freshman college students have an unprecedented opportunity to mold and define their own identities. Jablonski tells them that they have the power within them to accomplish whatever they want independent of their devices, so long as they put in the effort. Employing wordplay, she inverts the commonplace that cell phones and computers represent the best of human creation. The human mind, she says, is “the original supercomputer” which does not need to rely on a second-rate replica. After years of waiting to leave home, her audience finally has a greater degree of freedom to determine its individual paths and Jablonski’s words of empowerment plays into their desires.

Verizon lures its millennial audience by promising the constant connectivity they expect as young Americans and often take for granted until it becomes unavailable. Today, a rising number of municipalities are offering free wifi service on the grounds that an internet connection is a human right. Non-governmental organizations working in third-world countries consistently list expanding internet access among their goals. According to modern logic, internet is the means by which the world conducts its business, so to deprive a person of the internet is to effectively cut them off from the world. Although Jablonski frames technology as in barrier to human relationships, Verizon embraces the idea that the permeation of technology in every area of our lives makes them better. The juxtaposition of the friends struggling with their useless phones and the cheerful young man confirms millennials’ assumption that they need a signal to enjoy themselves. Most millennials can empathize with the scenario and would never want to repeat the experience. The content of the ad establishes that rather than being self-absorbed brats, millennials have every reason to want to stay connected.

The current millennial generation faces an essential choice. It must decide whether to embrace technology wholeheartedly or keep it at a healthy distance, a shift that will define its relationship with the world. As their generational predecessors try to convince them of following either path, consistent patterns appear in their rhetoric and the ways in which they engage millennials. In their respective appeals, Jablonski and Verizon first display their qualifications for speaking to young people by showing a familiarity with the hallmarks of youth culture. This conveys a willingness to understand the audience rather than talking down to them about their elders’ learned wisdom. However, the generational differences between the speakers and their audiences can only be bridged so far by dropping cultural references. To better connect to millennials, both invoke images and anecdotes of young people that support their arguments. The two pieces of rhetoric also take advantage of kairos and different commonplaces held among millennials. The dialogue around the role of technology in 21st century life reflects the state of millennials, both in terms of the culture they have built and the generational identity they have yet to mold.

Rhetorical analysis essay introduction

Today, the average American teenager spends up to 10 hours a day in front of screens, whether TVs, computers or increasingly, their smartphones. The increase in screen time correlates almost exactly with advances in smartphone technology, as today’s cell phones allow their users to instantly check their social media feeds, surf the internet and sometimes do both at once. Given the inescapable presence of technology in our society, the effects of our favorite electronic devices on the way we interact with one another has become a relevant topic of public debate. On one side, some state that excessive technology use causes people to lose their human connections, becoming sheltered from the real world. However, the opposition sees technology more as a means of breaking down boundaries between people than as its own barrier. During Penn State’s 2017 convocation, anthropology professor Nina Jablonski requested that students limit use of their cell phones throughout their four years at Penn State. She claimed that while technology serves as our primary means of socialization, it can also isolate us from new people and experiences. In contrast to Jablonski, Verizon appeals to the potential for technology to connect complete strangers, in an advertisement marketing its services to millennials. Both pieces of rhetoric attempt to reach young adults using current cultural references, creating an emotional connection by example and appealing to their hopes and expectations, while promoting opposite claims about the benefits of technology.