It’s What I Do Part 4

Throughout “It’s What I Do,” Addario’s photographs nicely supplemented the story of her travels around the world as part of her job as a photojournalist. The inclusion of photographs in a book centered largely around photography allowed me to visualize the circumstances Addario experienced and the places she visited. Two of the images I considered the most powerful did not directly include conflict, but show the lives of people affected by conflict around them.

I liked the photograph of Addario’s Afghan driver about to pray at sunrise, but the landscape around him is barren as a result of the shells and landmines that struck the area during Afghanistan’s decades of war. While I would otherwise consider the landscape ugly, the dim lighting at sunlight makes it appear almost magical. The sunrise symbolizes, to me, the fact that each day offers a new beginning despite everything that may have occurred before. Even if the current landscape offers little hope, the possibility of renewal makes it beautiful. The photograph conveys the fact that conflict causes long-lasting, wide-ranging devastation, but human life has a way of persevering. Although war may have taken their homes, it can never deprive people of their faith or will to live unless they choose to resign themselves to the tragedy of the situation. The other photograph I found impactful was the one of a Congolese rape victim sitting behind a mosquito net with her two children. Like in the photograph of the driver, Addario uses lighting to great effect. The faces of the three subjects are lit only from the sunlight in the window while they look out at something invisible to the viewer. I also appreciated this photograph for its depiction of survival in the face of adversity.

In my passion blog, I would use photographs to illustrate events or concepts that the reader would otherwise have trouble understanding. For example, I find that people can better relate to anecdotes or descriptions if they have a photograph to supplement the words. If I have relevant photographs from my own life, I would like to incorporate those, since they provide more concrete evidence that I actually had a certain experience or as proof of my commitment to an activity. Interesting cover photos could serve as a hook for the reader, teasing the subject of the blog.

 

Rhetorical Analysis Speech Outline

  • Discuss how often American teenagers use technology (up to 10 hours a day of screen time)
  • How does technology affect the way we relate to one another? Positive/negative effects
    • important for our generation given how much time we spend on devices
    • skills matter more than ever in college
  • Introduce background behind Jablonski’s speech
    • pulls audience in by asking them to put down their cell phones for next four years
    • audience: teenagers raised with social media, beginning new chapter of their lives
    • speaker: older person, must establish credibility with audience (ethos)
      • Uses cultural references
      • anecdotes (Sparks, successful undergraduate student)
        • “important to absorb everything”-goes against current information consumption patterns, which emphasize quick takes/lots of information from all sides
        • Logos and ethos-more credible coming from another student
  • Audience wants to achieve great things with new freedom and opportunity of college life
    • Jablonski reassures them of their abilities (comparing human brain vs. computers)
      • powerful analogy: people think of computers as all-powerful, nothing compares to people’s inherent power
        • pathos
    • repetition of phrases and parallel structure establishes the number of opportunities and different niches available at Penn State
      • sends message that Penn State truly has a place for everyone — reassuring students of their ability to succeed
    • appeals to forward-facing outlook of college freshmen using sweeping, poetic language
      • “Now is not the time to retire into the safety of your screens.”
      • “I don’t want you to miss the magic of your mashup because you were looking at your cell phone.”
  • Conclusion: effective motivational speech, battles common perception among millennials about need for constant connectivity via devices
    • relies heavily on emotional appeals, related to purpose of speech (to persuade and entertain)

Rhetorical Analysis Rough Draft

Today, the average American teenager spends up to 10 hours a day in front of screens, whether TVs, computers or increasingly, their smartphones. The increase in screen time correlates almost exactly with advances in smartphone technology, as today’s cell phones allow their users to instantly check their social media feeds, surf the internet and sometimes do both at once. Given the inescapable presence of technology in our society, the effects of our favorite electronic devices on the way we interact with one another has become a relevant topic of significant interest. During Penn State’s 2017 convocation, anthropology professor Nina Jablonski requested that students “put away” their cell phones throughout their four years at Penn State. She claimed that while technology serves as our primary means of socialization, it can also isolate us from new people and experiences. In contrast to Jablonski, Verizon appeals to the potential for technology to connect complete strangers, in an advertisement marketing its services to millennials while advocating opposite views. Both pieces of rhetoric attempt to reach young adults using current cultural references, creating a personal connection by example and appealing to their hopes and expectations.

Young people, the intended audience of the two pieces of rhetoric, have a distinct set of values and preferences, and with youth generally comes a skepticism of condescending adults unfamiliar with their culture. At the outset of their presentations, Jablonski and Verizon seek to establish credibility with their audience by demonstrating that they “get” millennials. Jablonski immediately follows her request by clarifying that she does not oppose the use of technology or discount its advantages, but rather opposes its excessive application. For many millennials, the stereotype of the elderly relative annoyed with today’s kids and their screen addictions has undeniable currency, which compels Jablonski to separate herself from the group. Throughout her convocation speech, she makes reference to the lure of Snapchat and other social media apps on the typical student’s cell phone. Thus, she appears to sympathize with the struggles of her audience as they experience constant distractions from their phones.

Verizon also deploys common cultural references in the service of selling its products. The ad depicts a group of young friends waiting for food at a food truck, but struggling to get a data signal. They meet a young man who takes the opportunity to inform his new friends about Verizon’s largest nationwide 4G network. Although considered lower class for much of the 20th century, food trucks have experienced a resurgence in popularity among millennials looking to enjoy authentic ethnic cuisine and fast food delivery. However, the friends can’t enjoy their food properly without the signal necessary to post their meals to social media, an all too common problem for millennials on the go. In the ad, Verizon attempts to relate to its audience by indicating that it understands their lives and has the solutions they need. Instead of acting as the bland, outdated corporation, Verizon is the fresh, dynamic business in tune with the demands of young people.  The average phone service user today isn’t bound by a landline, but remains carries their device in their pocket. Verizon takes the rhetorical situation into account, knowing that millennials want service that complements their mobile lifestyles, symbolized by the food truck in the background.

Anecdotes and examples of ten enhance a rhetor’s message by demonstrating the validity of their statements using relatable characters their audiences want to emulate. This strategy appeals to the logical side of the mind, offering guarantees that the speaker’s claims are not just unsubstantiated theory, but practical advice. To remind students of what they could accomplish at Penn State unburdened by their devices, Jablonski tells the story of “Sparks,” a physics undergraduate who began as a lab assistant and eventually went on to conduct original research. She quotes him as saying it’s “important to start slow and absorb information,” a rebuke to the internet’s information saturation. While hearing the same advice from an older adult would generate eye rolls, the messenger lends more credibility to the message. Sparks, a millennial raised in the same technology-rich environment, found his passion by relearning the old ways of processing information and asking questions. Since not all freshmen at commencement have interests in STEM fields, she diversifies the appeal of her speech by also including examples of opportunities at Penn State available to students of every field. The fact that others in their same position have achieved success and belonging at Penn State reassures students that they can do the same if they only look beyond their screens.

Likewise, Verizon presents its audience with an idealized version of themselves in the form of the characters who appear in the ad. The friends dining at the food truck are well-dressed and enjoying life in the city as young people with few responsibilities. The only thing that prevents them from enjoying that life fully is their lack of data service. They have lives similar to those of the company’s target demographic, and they need Verizon’s 4G LTE network to complete their lives. The interloper in the group represents the generic everyman, the nice guy who gets along with everybody he meets. While he begins as an outsider, he works his way into the center of attention with ease. His knowledge of Verizon’s services allows him to gain access to the group of friends, implying that people gravitate to those have the technological connections that serve as the lifeblood of millennial society. To venture from the network of cell phone users constitutes social suicide, since the friends’ panic over their lack of service reflects the modern fear of missing out.

The two rhetors tap into commonplaces held among young people today about the kinds of lives they expect to lead and utilize kairos to construct their arguments. In Jablonski’s case, the audience consists of students in the unique position of belonging to the social media generation and preparing for a new phase in their lives. They are venturing into unknown territory, a situation which inspires either fear of change or great expectations for what they can accomplish on their own. She specifically addresses the universal human impulse to retreat back to the familiar-in our age, the world of social media. However, she follows by arguing that by sticking with the tried and true, people miss exciting new things happening around them. As newly independent people, freshman college students have an unprecedented opportunity to mold and define their own identities. Jablonski tells them that they have the power within them to accomplish whatever they want independent of their devices, so long as they put in the effort. Employing wordplay, she inverts the commonplace that cell phones and computers represent the best of human creation. The human mind, she says, is “the original supercomputer” which does not need to rely on a second-rate replica. After years of waiting to leave home, her audience finally has a greater degree of freedom to determine its individual paths and Jablonski’s words of empowerment plays into their desires.

Verizon lures its millennial audience by promising the constant connectivity they expect as young Americans and often take for granted until it becomes unavailable. Today, a rising number of municipalities are offering free wifi service on the grounds that an internet connection is a human right. Non-governmental organizations working in third-world countries consistently list expanding internet access among their goals. According to modern logic, internet is the means by which the world conducts its business, so to deprive a person of the internet is to effectively cut them off from the world. Although Jablonski frames technology as in barrier to human relationships, Verizon embraces the idea that the permeation of technology in every area of our lives makes them better. The juxtaposition of the friends struggling with their useless phones and the cheerful young man confirms millennials’ assumption that they need a signal to enjoy themselves. Most millennials can empathize with the scenario and would never want to repeat the experience. The content of the ad establishes that rather than being self-absorbed brats, millennials have every reason to want to stay connected.

The current millennial generation faces an essential choice. It must decide whether to embrace technology wholeheartedly or keep it at a healthy distance, a shift that will define its relationship with the world. As their generational predecessors try to convince them of following either path, consistent patterns appear in their rhetoric and the ways in which they engage millennials. In their respective appeals, Jablonski and Verizon first display their qualifications for speaking to young people by showing a familiarity with the hallmarks of youth culture. This conveys a willingness to understand the audience rather than talking down to them about their elders’ learned wisdom. However, the generational differences between the speakers and their audiences can only be bridged so far by dropping cultural references. To better connect to millennials, both invoke images and anecdotes of young people that support their arguments. The two pieces of rhetoric also take advantage of kairos and different commonplaces held among millennials. The dialogue around the role of technology in 21st century life reflects the state of millennials, both in terms of the culture they have built and the generational identity they have yet to mold.

Rhetorical analysis essay introduction

Today, the average American teenager spends up to 10 hours a day in front of screens, whether TVs, computers or increasingly, their smartphones. The increase in screen time correlates almost exactly with advances in smartphone technology, as today’s cell phones allow their users to instantly check their social media feeds, surf the internet and sometimes do both at once. Given the inescapable presence of technology in our society, the effects of our favorite electronic devices on the way we interact with one another has become a relevant topic of public debate. On one side, some state that excessive technology use causes people to lose their human connections, becoming sheltered from the real world. However, the opposition sees technology more as a means of breaking down boundaries between people than as its own barrier. During Penn State’s 2017 convocation, anthropology professor Nina Jablonski requested that students limit use of their cell phones throughout their four years at Penn State. She claimed that while technology serves as our primary means of socialization, it can also isolate us from new people and experiences. In contrast to Jablonski, Verizon appeals to the potential for technology to connect complete strangers, in an advertisement marketing its services to millennials. Both pieces of rhetoric attempt to reach young adults using current cultural references, creating an emotional connection by example and appealing to their hopes and expectations, while promoting opposite claims about the benefits of technology. 

 

 

Rhetorical Analysis Outline

Hook: Mention how nearly all members of America’s millennial generation have smartphones, contrasting views of how they play into social interactions – good or bad?

-Provide overview of relevance of the debate to Penn State students and young adults generally

Introduce Nina Jablonski speech and her proposal for students to put aside their cell phones for the next four years, get to know opportunities and people on campus

– Rhetorical strategies she uses to convince students of the importance of putting away devices

  • Presents herself as not just anti-technology, concerned for welfare of students (ethos)
  • People can do amazing things – taps into optimism and potential of college freshmen (pathos)
  • Lists the diversity and volume of new experiences available at Penn State (logos)
  • Social media and electronics are familiar but stunt social growth
  • Commonplaces: college is a place where students experience the formative years of their lives, but it’s upt to them to seize the chance

Summarize content of Verizon ad, represents a counterpoint to Jablonski’s speech

-Rhetorical strategies employed in the advertisement

  • Appeals to human desire for connections (pathos)
  • Depicts millennial actors doing hip millennial stuff-eating at food trucks, checking phones (ethos)
  • With Verizon, people can stay connected to their friends all the time with 4G LTE data (logos)
  • Commonplaces: millennials expect to stay connected to the world via their mobile devices while they are on the go, society is moving too fast to even miss a minute of news or social media post

-Mention similarities between the two pieces of rhetoric:

  • Both target millennial audiences
  • Incorporate culture, values and expectations of millennials
  • Do cell phones hinder development of young people or help it? (reiterate question)

It’s What I Do, Part 2

“It was my proximity to the action that got me the job…I often had to intuit the story of the day on my own. I got up before dawn; I went to bed at midnight. I worked every waking hour so that I could be at the right place at the right time (71).”

I found this passage from Part 2 of “It’s What I Do” especially evocative of the true depths of Addario’s commitment to becoming successful in her field. While she writes about her experiences with happiness, the sacrifices she makes to achieve her dreams are implicit in her words. Addario strikes a balance between relishing the excitement of doing work she loves and acknowledging the struggles that come with it. The repetition of sentence structure in this passage emphasizes the grueling schedule Addario followed while trying to establish herself. To me, Addario does not seem whiny or angry, but it is clear that she feels compelled to put herself under significant stress.

Comparing the views Addario expresses in this passage and her early perspectives, I was able to track her personal development throughout the first part of “It’s What I Do.” In the beginning of her photography career, she based her travels on wherever she felt compelled to shoot. However, I noticed that her passion took her freedom-in both the literal and figurative sense. She traveled with the tides of current events instead of her personal impulses and regiments her life to comply with the demands of news bureaus. She found herself unable to say “no” to assignments, regardless of her own convenience and comfort.

To make my blog readers understand my sense of drive for activities I have a true passion for, I would also highlight the difficulties I endured to satisfy my personal drive. For example, during high school, I volunteered to photograph a district swim meet that nobody else wanted to attend. It didn’t help that I had minimal photography experience and no experience photographing sports. However, I was motivated by commitment to the school newspaper and my general interest in documenting the world around me. Following Addario’s example, I might mention how I drove one and a half hours through rush hour traffic to get to La Salle University for the meet. As soon as I got out of the car, I saw snow begin to fall and my hands soon began to freeze while I hefted the 10-pound camera bag. Walking down the dark streets of Philadelphia, on the way back to my car, I felt a strange sense of contentment as the cold air hit my warm skin.

The key to writing about a passion is showing both sides: the hardship and the payoff. Without one or the other, the reader can never truly grasp how passion drives the sacrifice and sacrifice confirms one’s passion.

It’s What I Do, Part I

Addario’s choice to include an anecdote about her grandmother’s first love reflects her views about her career path and the nature of life. In the story, Nana forgoes a marriage to her first boyfriend because she perceives him as too much of a risk, then he marries her best friend instead. Because of the difficulty of breaking into the field and the unpredictable lifestyle of a photographer, she grew up with the idea that photographers are aimless rich kids, that she should pursue a career with better prospects. In this regard, her former attitude toward photography was much like Nana’s attitude toward her first love. They wanted to follow their passions, but fear the risks that come with listening to their hearts. By using Nana as an example, Addario implies that many of the sacrifices she made for her career were because she wanted her story to end differently. As we see in her account of how she became an established photographer, Addario relied on her ability to seize opportunities as they arrived and seek people willing to accept her work. 

During my college search, my dad confessed to me that he hated his job and would have retired already if he didn’t have my brother’s college education to think of. He told me that despite my mom’s constant urging for me to enter pharmacy or become a radiologist, he would support whichever career path I chose. He then said that parents worked hard in jobs that were difficult but well-paying so that their children could follow their passions. Even though he followed up his advice with a joke about his legal consulting fees, I realized then that money alone can’t create a happy life. Whatever my passion turns out to be, I plan to take my dad’s word to heart when deciding my life’s path.

 

An Underdog (well, cat) Runs for Congress

Billowing American flags. Ripe fields of wheat. A booming narrators’ voice begins by praising the American way of life and the country’s unique character. The advertisement speaks effectively to an audience of potential voters, and campaign donors by appealing to Americans’ patriotic instincts. At the end, the candidate makes a direct call for support and says…nothing. In fact, the ad doesn’t tout the merits of a regular human politician, but the Senate hopeful in question is a Maine Coon named Hank.

The entire goal of Hank’s campaign was raising money for animal rescue in his home state of Virginia, using unconventional yet powerful means to curry donations. In January 2012, the 30-second “Hank for Senate” video debuted on YouTube, during the middle of a contentious election season. Alluding to a continuing news event relevant to its audience, the ad gains the viewer’s attention by subverting their expectations. “Hank for Senate” serves as a parody of standard campaign ads and their lack of substance, implying that if those platitudes can even work for a cat, their speakers aren’t saying much at all. Given the “election fatigue” people often experience during an election year, the joke of a cat running for U.S. Senate resonates with people who feel tired of seeing numerous campaign ads. Although complaining about politicians is a favorite pastime of Americans, they would be most predisposed to spite their representatives during election season, even if just by donating to Hank’s Senate campaign. Hank also brings much-needed levity after all of the bitterness that accompanies campaign politics. For all those disaffected with traditional politicians, the ad would likely generate discussion, thus raising awareness for the cause.

While the ad includes references to some of the best known commonplaces of traditional American culture, it also reminds us how divided the country has become. When addressing a bipartisan public, “Hank for Senate” avoids any reference to political agendas, instead focusing on creating feel-good sentiment. With the election dividing friends and neighbors, Hank provides a common point of discussion for both sides of the political spectrum. People may not agree on policy, but at least they can share in their love of an adorable cat. In a time when every area of life seems infused with politics, “Hank for Senate” offers the opportunity to build unity behind a good cause. Five years after its release, the ad speaks to what we need most in American politics: the ability to find common ground despite all the conflict around us and celebrate cute animals together.

Update: Unfortunately, Hank died in 2014. However, he earned over 4,000 votes and placed third in Virginia’s 2012 Senate race.

Analysis of Commonplaces in Dawn Saves Wildlife

After the most recent Gulf of Mexico oil spill, the dish soap company Dawn began airing ads featuring volunteers using its product to clean oil from animals. While most consumers likely don’t put much consideration into their choice of dish soap, Dawn tries to change the public’s mindset by highlighting the good the company does in rescuing wildlife. The ad leans heavily on emotional appeals and establishes a narrative for the audience, meanwhile creating a positive association between Dawn and the cleanup effort. In the beginning, the ad features images of the oil-contaminated beaches and animals drenched in oil then progresses to footage of rescue workers using Dawn soap. The animals receive a bath in soapy water and the ad concludes with the rescue workers releasing them back into the wild. The viewer is reminded that for each bottle of Dawn purchased, the company will donate an additional bottle to animal rescue.

One of the most obvious commonplaces that Dawn appeals to is the idea that humans have an obligation to serve as stewards of nature. Humans share an innate connection with wild places and their inhabitants-therefore, conserving the environment is to our benefit. Furthermore, our presence makes a substantial difference in the lives of wildlife impacted by environmental disasters. The ad reflects this assumption in its depiction of ducklings quacking happily after their baths and rescued animals rushing back to the ocean. The inclusion of “before and after” shots of the animals leads the audience to become emotionally invested in the outcome of the rescue (and by extension, Dawn’s role in it) and relieved when the animals return home.

In the modern day, people have many ways to indirectly contribute to causes they support. Dawn reinforces the commonplace that charity does not need to involve a significant investment of time or money. Multiple people working together, each making a small difference, can create meaningful change (preferably by buying Dawn soap). Most viewers presumably buy dish soap for their household needs, so why not switch to a company that shares their concern for wildlife? Dawn implies that a small change in everyday behavior can better the world, which makes “Dawn Saves Wildlife” an especially effective piece of marketing.

It’s What I Do

What do I do? I must confess, at this point in my life, I have not yet found the all-consuming passion of the kind that drives Addario across war zones thousands of miles away. As a matter of principle, I prefer to fixate on the little things, how the numerous tiny factors that form my world all come together to create the reality I experience. I look at every decision I make, the people around me and the environment I inhabit. Call me neurotic, but I can never bear not knowing where the parts intersect, which tiny gears drive the large ones into motion.

For example, I recall the moment I reached into the pocket of my backpack and realized I left my headphones at home. Until the day I had to walk to class without the sounds of a podcast or music in my ears, I didn’t understand how much those tiny plastic beads had influenced the way I went about my life. Instead of plugging my ears during my daily walks to class or meals in the dining halls, I sought out new acquaintances and found time to converse with old ones. Beyond the limits of my everyday life, I hope to investigate the overlooked forces that have changed the world as we know it today.

One of my passion blog ideas would be combining two of my interests, geology and history. Though I always thought the two operated on completely different planes — we measure the former on the scale of millions of years while the latter occurs in hundreds — the people who live on the Earth’s surface live at its mercy. Geology informs where people settle, the way they adapt and the cultures they develop over generations. Another idea I have would be to blog about the effect of marketing on the way people view issues, and how both choice of language and confirmation bias play into that.