Multimedia Rhetorical Argument

Dreams Really Do Come True!

    As  I gleaned out into the bleakness of winter, all I felt was heartbreak and misery. I needed hope for the magical feeling of sunshine and tortured skin. As I started daydreaming about warmth and summer love, I decided my best option was to confront the beasts or better known as my parents. As I pondered what I would say and how I would present my feelings of seasonal depression to my parents all I could think about were the crystal blue waves of Hawaii, I knew at that moment that was my escape to paradisal excitement. I had my plan down now all I needed was a way to implement it. I know I needed to show raw emotion, provide facts, and effectively show my authority. As I planned for the big day, I first needed to get back up, my two annoying sisters, not saying this is good backup but it is still better than nothing. I highlighted my plan and the way we were going to effectively persuade them, as we prepared for the big day butterflies ran throughout my whole body.

The depressing winter in Pennsylvania

    “Mom, Dad come down here,” I screamed. “We are coming,” my Dad yelled back. As my whole blonde haired blue eyed family made their way down to my window lit living room with ceilings higher than you can imagine, I knew I was going to feel one of two ways, sad or extremely happy. As my parents sat down on the stained grey sofa I knew my time was now. I had to effectively convince them that Hawaii was the vacation destination. I had to show my authority over them by being well prepared to discuss my logic and emotions on my feelings about Hawaii. “I am depressed,” I screamed to my family. “I am sorry to hear that,” my dad sneered back at me sarcastically. As the tears flowed down my face I whined about my seasonal depression, I begged that I needed a vacation away from the white powder and frigid temperature. I explained the depressing feeling of waking up at 7am every morning (ew) to attend pointless classes, I needed an escape desperately. “Mom, you need a break from the gross hospital,” I shouted. “I always need a break from there Annabelle,” she proclaimed. “Then let’s go,” I exclaimed. They still were not fully convinced, so plan b was put into action.

A picture I used to convince my parents.

    Of course I had a plan b how dumb would I be without a plan b, I set up a PowerPoint full of facts and pictures. I specifically researched the island of Maui, I created a list of resorts including the costs and benefits of each one. I also highlighted everything we could do for example surfing lessons, zip lining, and the famous Road to Hana. I also included reviews of people’s great experience in Hawaii, many people described it as the “best experience of their lives.” “I am impressed Annabelle,” my dad remarked. “Thank you, so does that mean we can go?” I questioned. “I will think about it,” he remarked. Are you serious? I thought to myself, all this hard work has gone to waste and I was left feeling more upset than before. That night I fell asleep dreaming of the cool breeze at the beach in Hawaii, manifesting my dream to come true.

Picture of a stand outside the Road to Hana.

The waterfalls at the Road to Hana

A beautiful sunset taken on top of a mountain in Hawaii.

    The next morning I woke up feeling defeated, another cold winter morning in Pennsylvania but something was different, a feeling of hope sprang throughout my house. As I made my way downstairs I knew something was up. Both my parents were downstairs in the kitchen whispering about something. As I hid behind the corner of the wall hoping to listen to their conversation, my cover was blown when my sister screamed in my ear hoping to scare me, obviously it did not work but of course she blew my cover. “Girls, we need to talk to you,” my parents announced. We all came running to the cold hardwood floor in the kitchen. “What’s up,” we responded. “Your mom and I were thinking that Hawaii would be the perfect vacation for us,” my dad happily stated. My heart stopped at that moment. I was truly speechless, my hard word actually paid off. “Yay, we love you,” my sisters and I screamed. “We love you too girls,” my parents proclaimed. My dreams were finally coming true and my seasonal depression was soon coming to an end! 

    As I prepared for my upcoming trip to Hawaii, I was so fascinated by the fact that I was able to convince my parents to take us on my dream vacation. As the day swindled down and I spent money on new clothes for the trip, I was so excited to have the opportunity to go to Maui. The 4am wake up call was a bit challenging but it was definitely worth it. After two long flights we arrived in Paradise, everything was like a fake reality, it felt too good to be true. As we stepped foot into the resort they handed us fresh flower leis, it was truly nothing I have ever experienced before. My hard convincing was paid off with sunshine and lukewarm water. We were able to go to all the places I recommend like the Road to Hana, where we went cliff jumping, the next destination was surfing lessons which were by far the best decision. I am so happy that I was able to experience all these amazing memories and events.

My flight to Hawaii!

    This trip taught me so many things, like for example you can do whatever you put your mind to. Whether it is convincing your parents to take you on a trip or pursuing your dreams I know that something as small as a trip should not be compared to huge accomplishments but this trip truly felt like a huge accomplishment. I am glad I was able to learn that going after what you want is one of the best things you can do to better yourself and the people around you. I am so glad I had this opportunity. I hope that you too will have the chance to persuade someone to let you do something that you are passionate about whether it be a trip or just something that means a lot to you. Go after your dreams and never look back.

  

More photos from my dream trip!

Thursday Thought: Media News Item Summary

Image that was included in the article.

“NYT Centers Trans Healthcare Story on Doctors- Not Trans People”

On June 23, 2022 fair.org posted an article containing the way healthcare professionals treat Transgender people. In this article many Transgender people highlight the lack of treatment for Transgender people, including lack of gender clinics and therapy. This article also highlights the inaccurate way doctors are perceived in the media when talking about Transgender people.

The media presents doctors as being in the center of Transgender healthcare. I disagree with the statement being presented because I believe Transgender people should be centered in the Transgender healthcare. I believe this because some doctors don’t believe that Transgender people should be able to truly be themselves and that is truly wrong. Many anti-trans laws are causing hatred towards people in the trans community.

I believe that the violent attacks that have been happening to trans communities is absolutely disgusting. The vandalizations are terrible, I believe that people should be able to live their lives the ways they want to without being harassed and physically threatened. I also think that there needs to be better medical care for all Transgender people. I also think the media needs to keep trans people in the center of trans healthcare not medical professionals.

I think the ethical response to article would be to allow Transgender people to be in the center of their healthcare. I also think the ethical response to this article is to punish people that harass trans communities and to finally put an end to the attacks that happen to all LGBTQ communities. The world needs to change the way they see people that are different, we need to change in order to benefit those people that are different from us. I also believe we need to benefit our healthcare system to allow everyone to feel welcome and well taken care of.

https://fair.org/home/nyt-centers-trans-healthcare-story-on-doctors-not-trans-people/

 

Research Question

An example:

“For Penn State students, controlling for technology use in the classroom, what is the relationship between future preparation and addiction?”

Sample: In this study we are studying Penn state students, this is a big sample so maybe I can generalize it to a certain grade of Penn State students.

Control variable: We are controlling for the use of technology in the classroom, by controlling the technology use in the classroom we can have a better understanding of how the independent variable and dependent variable relate.

Independent variable: In this study, our Independent variable is how technology allows students for future preparation, perhaps we could research the positive effects of technology in the classroom by conducting a survey or performing tests that show if technology actually provides students for future preparation.

Dependent Variable: In this study, our dependent variable is how addicted students are to technology, and specially if using technology in the classroom helps build on to that addiction. To get research we can send out a survey asking students how addicted they feel to technology and another survey asking if using technology in the classroom leads to personal addiction.

FYE- My fun productive week

This week I had a lot of work to do, I worked on an a humorous essay that was about which pet is better dogs or cats. This was a fun essay to write about! I also worked on different assignments for Comm 100, like a research question and Thursday thoughts. I was able to manage my work week effectively this week.

Besides school work I exercised at the gym and took a cycling class. I also did my laundry and went shopping with my friends at Target. I also went out to dinner with my friends. I had a lot of fun this week, I am so sad that I will be moving out next week, this summer went by so fast.

This weekend I had a blast, I went to a Pitbull concert in Hersey. It was so much fun, my friends and I had a great time! We all slept over at my friend’s house who lives five minutes away from Hersey Park. I had a great time and I am looking forward to my last summer weekend here at Penn State.

My friends and I at the concert!