When doing peer reviews for our current emerging ideas paper, the most useful feedback I got was how to organize my paper. Before the peer review my paper was all over the place, the reader was not going to properly understand the points I was trying to make. After the peer review my paper is much more organized and straight to the point. The most interesting discovery of I made while researching the shift to fast fashion was the horrible conditions the workers are put through because of the high demand. The most important thing I want readers to take away from reading my papers is the consequences of fast fashion. There are many negative consequences due to this shift and many people choose to ignore it because of the benefits of fast fashion. This project has help me develop my research skills due to the large amount of research needed in this paper. I can recognize which sources are trustworthy and which aren’t.
