The most helpful reviews that I have received from a peer workshop was that I should focus on adding more detail to make sure the reader knows what I wish for the takeaway to be from the paradigm shift.
The most interesting discovery I have made it that in the 1970’s Americans believed that the particles in pollution would buildup to block out the sun and cause a global cooling.
The significance of the paradigm shift from global cooling to global warming is that people all around the world changed their understandings of what was then going to happen to the Earth and scientists could begin to truly tackle how we are going to slow change.
This project, especially the rubrics, have helped me understand what my teacher is looking for in the writings I do. Also the peer reviews have helped me with bettering my grammar and spe
lling.