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  1. I like the outline overall in terms of content. I feel like the visuals would definitely help establish a sense of audience since it seems like it’ll incorporate some striking quotes, images, and some tweets to read. I would mostly rely on the tone and style of delivery for creating a focus on the audience though, and I know you’re good at that, so I feel like it’ll go well for you. The outline overall seems original and the topic is compelling. I definitely look forward to hearing it because it seems like you’re going to hit a lot of great points. The one thing I would possibly suggest is that instead of making a whole new body point for the solution, I would tie in more into the conclusion and make it like a hybrid. I think you might be able to make it more impactful that way.

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