I am looking through some of these comments and i come to a person with the username “davric”. This person states that she is a current serving teacher and instructor. She agrees with the article for multiple reasons. Something that stood out to me was when she said “The first one I saw was that teaching is a skill which needs to be developed over a number of years and in a nurturing environment.” I find this significant because majority of ameture teachers have problems teaching kids with bad behaviors where more experienced teachers with ten or more years of experience do not have to deal with these problems due to experience in the class rooms for so long. You also need to develop professional skills over the years so your not being taken advantage by the students in the class. But i seen another comment from a guy named Eddie G. His point of view seemed to be very racist in a way when it came to different ethnicities in the classroom. He stated that middle-classed whites and asians were in more advanced classes than blacks and hispanics. He has no scientific facts to prove that so in my eyes, i feel that most of these comments i’ve been reading or more opinion than factual. It seemed that the comments coming from instructors, teachers, and former teachers seem to be more similar and realistic.

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Dr. Womack

English 15

4 September 2013

Profile Essay

So what was the greatest time or activity of my life? Well there is a few moments and experiences that I have encountered over my eighteen years living on earth. The activity I will be talking about is winning the state championship back in 2009. It was the greatest moment of my life and I remember every second of it. The excitement and joy this event brought to the whole team, as well as the families was incredible. The experience was far greater than any holiday or even my birthday. Being able to be called state champions was one of the best feelings in the world. For all the hard work it took the team and I, it was well worth it in the end.

Baseball is one of the most popular sports today. It is America’s past time when it comes to sports. Basically every single American kid grew up at least tries to play the game once or so in their childhood. Some continue to play it through Elementary School, Middle School, High School, and even at the Collegian levels. In my opinion, baseball is the best sport ever invented. Most of it is just my opinion but there are also a few facts to support that. For example, in terms of money, baseball is the highest paid sport over hockey, football and basketball. The number one hardest thing to do in sports is to hit a fastball. I was always told, ninety percent mental, ten

 

percent skill. Baseball is also the hardest sport to succeed in. It’s something like two through four percent of baseball players in the United States actually make it into the big league. The road to the state championship game was a very long journey. It was a life time goal of mine to play in a game that means so much and that time eventually came.

So as a kid, I started off at five years old playing down the Leedom Little League right around the corner from my house. It turned out that my dad knew that I might be something in baseball later on in life, so he decided to work with me all the time at the younger ages. I moved up to the machine pitch from seven years old till I was ten. My dad coached the team I was on so he worked with me more than enough to be the best kid out there. All my friends from school were on that team also so I had a lot of fun playing the sport I loved with my good friends. My dad was sculpting me into a good ball player. He would bring me out into the field next to my house and hit me fly balls and ground balls for hours until I made perfection. He would also pitch dozens of balls to me to get me ready for the next level of the game. As I got older, around ten years old, I grew like crazy and was the tallest on the team. Back as a kid, it was always a little contest of who was taller which affected the way some people played. But the last year of pitching machine/kids pitch was over and it was time to face better, faster pitching.

As I grew up, I realized the league I have been playing in my whole life had the age limit of twelve. So it was time to start searching for another team to play with. I was in Middle school at the time and I heard that Swarthmore Wood had a good baseball program so at twelve, I decided to join two teams. It was the first time I ever played multiple teams. It was a challenge

 

to me because I never played with or against any of these kids before. So I started off doing good hitting two homeruns my first game against the best team in the Swarthmore Wood league. I had a breakout season for both teams and did really good. I was asked to join the Cal Ripken all-star team and without a hesitation, I immediately said yes. As a team, we practiced every morning through the summer heat until we became almost perfect. As a team, we made it to sections that year but lost to a strong Langhorn team. We decided that next year we will fight a little harder and go farther in the tournament.

The year was 2008 and I was thirteen. It was time to make the transition from little league field dimensions to major league. As the summer of 2008 progressed, playing for three teams was a bit of a struggle. But the only thing on my teammates and I’s mind was getting another shot at making it to the state tournament. We soon got out Ridley thirteen year old Babe Ruth team back into action. As a team, we continued to practice all summer in the hot morning and afternoon heats. The team and coaches approached practice in a little bit more serious way. We wanted that championship more than anything. Soon later, the district tournament started and hosted at our home field. We played Broomall Newtown, UDHL, Springfield and Haverford Township. I cannot remember if there were any other teams in it. My team came out on top winning every single game in the tournament. Districts were not much of a problem considering we were a very well prepared baseball squad. States were held two weeks later up in Gettysburg Pennsylvania. During the duration of the two weeks, we practiced harder than ever. Unfortunately, we ended up losing two games to Mifflin County and State College. State College ended up winning the championship just a few games later.

 

Since the loss in the state tournament back in 2008, my team went hard to work. We practiced all fall and winter for the next opportunity we could get. Playing for three teams once again in the spring and summer of 2009 was a bit of a routine. Everyone had gotten a little stronger and learned a lot more than the previous year. Soon again, the district tournament started up again. I was so excited to play. We lost our first game to Media but bounced back out of the loser’s bracket shortly after. We took down Broomall and UDHL with ease. A few games later, we were back in the championship against Media, the team that beat us in the first round. We came out in all force, pitching our best pitchers, and playing our best players. The bats came around and our team destroyed Media 16-5.

Two weeks later, I was on the road heading west to play in Franklin Township, in Lehigh Pennsylvania. Weather was a big factor in the tournament. The first two days were complete rain outs. But soon enough, we were back at it. We took down Springford, Franklin Township, Aston Valley and Middle town with no competition what so ever. The following day we played Mifflin County. They pitched the same kid that beat us last time. But we were ready. We steamrolled Mifflin 7-2 in the semi final game, taking us to the championship game with the former state champions. There was so much excitement on the field and the bystanders watching the game. The game proceeded. Our pitcher was doing a great job until he took a line drive off the chest in the sixth inning. The ambulance came and took him off the field, but he refused to leave the game even though he was on the verge of almost dying. The game was inch to inch. We would score a run, than they would score a run. It was like that through the whole game until our pitcher was struck with the ball. At that time I thought to myself “we are over,

 

there’s no possible way we can win.” We put in a nervous but very confident pitcher. He retired the side in the last inning. Our team was the home team so we had the last chance in the game. The top of the line-up was due. Our lead-off batter hit a double in the left field gap. The following batter hit another double but the runner on second held at third due to a close play. Our third batter was intentionally walked to load the bases to get to me. The nerves in my body shot from my head to toe in seconds. I looked over to see my whole family in the stands cheering me on. All the sudden, everything became quiet the second the first pitch was thrown. You could latterly hear a cricket chirping. First pitch I took a strike. My nerves shot up at an all time high. Second pitch I took a curve ball, ball one. The third pitch I took high for another ball. The count was now two balls, one strike. The pitcher wound up and threw a high fast ball just where I like it. I swung my oddly heavy bat and connected, hitting a laser line drive to left center field. Runner touched home and I touched first base and just like that, the game was over. I had hit the game winning hit to win the state championship. I was tackled by all my teammates with excitement. I actually got a black eye from being piled on. The cheers from the fans were amazing. I could not believe that the under dogs in this tournament beat one of the best teams in the state.

Putting in countless hours and effort, the team and I done what we dreamed of doing. Looking back at it now, I still remember every second of that day. It was the best day of my life and it always will be. I forget a lot of things over time but that moment will never be forgotten. The effort and time the team and I put into this goal was a huge amount. If I never picked up a

 

baseball as a kid, this moment would never be sealed into my head. I believe that this amazing moment made a big impact on my life. It is something my team and I will never forget.

Reading the profile “Consider the Lobster” by David Foster Wallace was very hard to follow in terms of what was going on through out the story line. The “MLF” or Maine Lobster Festival is held every year in july on the western side of Penobscot bay. Pretty much the point of the festival is to show the mass production of the lobsters out of Maine. Back in 1840’s, meat use to be the more expensive choice of food where lobster was basically a poor mans food because it was so cheap. In present days, lobster is always at the top of the menu in terms of price. There is many different types of ways to cook a lobster but the most famous way has to be boiled. Some people prefer their lobster cooked baked, boiled, steamed, grilled, or even microwaved. Some people say that it is cruel to kill animals and the way lobsters are killed is told as cruel and unusual. The live lobsters are thrown into a huge kettle of boiling hot water where it takes approximatly 35 to 45 seconds to kill. During that period of time, they try to escape out the top and bang claws against the sides of the kettle. Wallace than talks about the morals of eating an animal. If it comes to not suffering any longer than it should be ok to eat the animal of your choice in any circumstances.

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John Gorgone

Dr. Womack

English 015

4 September 2013

Commencement Summary on Steve Jobs

On June 14, 2005, Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple computer and Pixar animation studio, delivered a very strong and powerful commencement speech to the graduating class at Stanford University. During Job’s fifteen or so minute speech, he told three separate stories. The first story consisted of his childhood and how he developed his education in an oddly fashioned way. Jobs quoted it as “The first story is about connecting the dots” (Jobs). Now the second story was about love and loss. Love and loss explaining how he was fired after the finest Macintosh computer was produced and sold. The third and final story jobs told was about death. Jobs were diagnosed with a rare form of pancreatic cancer than was later told he was on his death bed with basically no cure for it. But death was not getting in-between his career and his life for the Apple and Pixar companies. Steve Job’s commencement speech back in 2005 was inspirational for the young adults out in the world that do not have the money to afford college and to not stop pursuing their dreams.

The main idea in Job’s commencement speech at Stanford University was to show the newly graduated students how a man with little money pursued his dreams to become one of the wealthiest men in the world. He explained all the obstacles in life and what he went through himself. For example, in the first story Jobs spoke, he talked about how he was adopted by

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parents that the mother did not graduate college and father did not graduate high school. But they promised his biological mother that he will attend college and receive a good education when Steve is grown up. Steve did attend Reed College seventeen years later but was very expensive for his middle class parents. Steve saw no comfort with that so after six months, Steve dropped out of college. “The minute I dropped out, I could stop taking required classes that didn’t interest me, and begin dropping in on the ones that looked interesting” Urges Jobs. Basically what Jobs did was went around school policies and did things a lot differently. Majority of students stay in school and have to take required courses where Jobs dropped out, by-passed them rules and took what classes he wanted to take, not what he was told to take. He did this for eighteen months. If Jobs were to have never dropped out of college, the Mac computer might have never existed along with a windows personal computer (laptop). He took what was most interesting to him especially the calligraphy course he took. “Of course it was impossible to connect the dots … but it was very, very clear looking back ten years later.” Secondly, Jobs was lucky he found out what he wanted to do at a young age. Jobs and Woz took flight on Apple in Jobs parent’s garage. Ten years later, two hard working men turned apple into a multi-billion dollar corporation with having greater than four thousand employees. Jobs turned thirty and were fired from his own company. Board members favored a more talented man that took jobs spot and kicked him out. He loved what he did so much, “so I decided to start over again” quoted by Jobs. It was one of the best decisions every made because he eventually invented NeXT and Pixar that joined forces with Apple to make Steve on top again. Furthermore, Jobs was to soon face death. He knew he wouldn’t last forever. “There is no reason not to follow your heart” (Jobs). What Jobs tries to explain is that if you follow your heart, you can pretty much do anything you put your mind to.

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Job’s in 2004 was diagnosed with cancer. There was a tumor located on his pancreas which is found as a very rare form of cancer that could not be cured. But it turned out that the rare form of cancer can be prevented by a simple surgery method. He was soon cancer free. “Your time is limited, don’t waste it living someone else’s life.” Emphasized by Jobs.

I agree with this source highly for a few reasons. The first reason is that how he came about forming the business and how large it grew within ten years. If someone drops out of college you would not expect them to continue taking courses and to soon become a millionaire. Starting everything just right of out his garage with one friend is a crazy story line. Another reason is that he came off of getting fired from his own company and devastates himself upon it but pretty much says oh well, time to start over. And that’s what he did, inventing two other multi-million dollar businesses and soon taking back his original business. A final reason is how he escaped cancer and continued to fight and stick with doing what he loved. That made this commencement speech more outstanding than any other address.

Job’s address back in 2005 was a great influence on the student body as well as young adults trying to seek further education to follow their goals, strive to achieve and become successful in whatever careers they pursue in. I find this address so significant because not many people can tell the Stanford class of 2005 that they started out slow, became multi-millionaires, fired from their own business, invented two more businesses than buys his old one back. Steve Jobs life was very unique with all the struggles and hard work he put into everything he did.

 

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Works Cited

Jobs, Steve. “You’ve Got to Find What You Love; Jobs Says.” Stanford Report.

Stanford University. 14 June 2005. Web. 4 September 2013.