In our peer review we had someone read what they wrote, then receive feedback based on the plus comments & question mark comments method described. There was good feedback on what was done well, & there was no real negative talk but rather this is good, here’s what I think can make it even better sorts of thinking.

I felt really bad I didn’t have a full draft like everyone else, & I think I should definitely work on being more prepared so I could receive more feedback that will help me out in the future. I received compliments on at the very least having framework for my body paragraphs, but I don’t think that counts as being better, since it still isn’t real content & is more so simply because my brain has trouble writing any other way in a somewhat effective manner.

For revising I definitely have to actually develop & write out the rest of my work, but I think discussion today really helped me find new ideas & sorts of areas for inspiration in however I go about writing the rest of my essay.