This project was a little hard because I am not confident in telling stories/narratives, so I revised maybe 5 times. I think my finished project was much better than my first, but it could always be better. At first, I wasn’t really sure how I was going to craft the speech and I was going to do it on cheering, but I realized art was a little more relevant in my life today than cheer was. My first draft was more of like a personal is political blog post, so I cut a lot of things out and tried to make the piece more like a story and what the process of stippling brought me to believe. I had many of my friends read it and they really helped me in improving the story. That is all!!!
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I think that your story was really good I love the way that you told it and I feel like the revisions you made were good and it helped the story flow a little bit better. I enjoyed listening to you This I Believe and I really like the drawings that you ended up with. You are really talented not only in your drawings but also your writing!!
This was really good! First, I love your drawings. The technique and long determination to complete it is amazing. The story was clear and smooth so it was all on track. This was really insightful and great to hear. Grea job!
Wow, you are so talented!!! Your drawings are beautiful. I also wrote about my perfectionism in my speech. I love how you went about it and how you found confidence through art. Your writing really captivated me being that it flowed so nicely. I think you really nailed this assignment!!!