Unit 2 Sources

For my unit 2 project, I am focusing on the shift in awareness of head injuries caused by physical contact sports. I plan to focus on how we were initially unaware that these injuries caused long-lasting effects, the National Football League’s cover-up attempts once science came out surrounding CTE, and the subsequent focus on head injuries today. I am also going to examine how this awareness today is leading to extra safety precautions and a decline of participation in youth contact sports (like football).

 

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Chicago Blackhawks Sexual Assault Allegations

I hate how every time I post about a news update in the hockey world, it always seems to be negative. I’ve written about deaths in the hockey community, and the racism, classicism, and drug/mental health neglect that is sadly still present in the NHL. While it breaks my heart to write about these topics and deep dive into all the negative aspects of the NHL, I know it must be done. It is important to shine a light on these injustices so that we can eradicate them from the game for good. This is exactly why I chose today’s blog post topic.

Over the summer, two anonymous players made sexual assault accusations against former Chicago Blackhawks video coach, Brad Aldrich. The former Chicago players alleged that Aldrich sexually assaulted them and threatened to end their careers if they did not comply. The anonymous victims filed a lawsuit against the Chicago Blackhawks organization, claiming that they reported the abuse when it first happened, but no action was ever taken. They also alleged that many coaches and executives knew the abuse was occurring.

When the lawsuits became public in the summer, former head coach Joel Quenneville denied having any awareness about the abuse when it occurred in 2010. However, official investigation findings released yesterday stated that Joel, along with many other coaches, did in fact know about the abuse but chose not to act on it in fear of “ruining team chemistry” during their 2010 Stanley Cup run. I find it absolutely disgusting for a coach and organization as a whole to value a chance at a Stanley Cup more than the safety of a player. While Blackhawks general manager Stan Bowman has since stepped down, I believe it is necessary for Joel Quenneville to do so as well. Quenneville is the current head coach of the Florida Panthers, but there is no place in the game of hockey for someone like that.

Since the release of the initial investigation findings, the National Hockey League has fined the Chicago Blackhawks organization 2 million dollars for their mishandling and neglect of the situation. While $2 million seems like a lot to us, it is nothing to a franchise worth $1.09 billion. I believe the league needs to hand out a harder punishment, and I believe the Blackhawks need to clean house of everyone who worked with the team during the 2010 Cup run. The amount of time for any type of action to be taken was too long, and the eventual action taken was even more appalling.

Roughly three weeks after the Blackhawks won the 2010 Stanley Cup, Aldrich decided he was going to move on from Chicago. You heard that right; he was never fired. In fact, horribly enough, he took a coaching position with a youth hockey team after receiving a glowing recommendation from the Chicago Blackhawks. Here, Aldrich sexually assaulted two underage boys. It is absolutely heartbreaking to know this could have been prevented if the Chicago Blackhawks would have just done the right thing. There is no undoing this terrible, terrible situation. I believe all parties involved should be tried in court, and the Blackhawks organization as a whole should be placed on suspension until they completely clean house. Hockey cannot be a community that fosters and protects sexual offenders. We must protect and believe victims.

TED Talk and Assignment Ideas

Unsurpisingly, my favorite TED Talk that I found was about hockey. You can view it at https://www.ted.com/talks/seth_wyatt_manning_how_hockey_taught_me_to_smile_more_and_worry_less I assumed there would be no TED Talks on hockey, so I was pleasantly surprised when I found this. It is titled “How Hockey Taught Me to Smile More and Worry Less.” I really enjoyed the way the speaker delivered his speech. He used many hand gestures and was very vulnerable within his speech. This allowed me to see just how passionate he is about the sport and kept me more engaged in his speech. I also like how he explained important life lessons through the story of hockey, as it’s something I can understand and relate to more instead of a motivational speaker just telling me not to stress. Overall, I thought this was a great speech due to the way that the speaker was able to personally connect with his audience.

 

 

I want to research and analyze a paradigm shift within the sports community, as I am very passionate about sports as a whole. My first choice is to analyze the change in the stigma around mental health within the sports community. I would research players from previous decades, like the 70s and 80s, and find interviews where they talked about past mental health issues. This would help me show that mental health issues have always been around, they were just never openly talked about. I would then move into players from today and show how more and more athletes are speaking up about their mental health. I would use examples of Robin Lehner, Naomi Osaka, and most importantly Simone Biles. Analyzing Simone’s voluntary time off during the Olympics would be a great way to show how a new discussion around athletes’ mental health began.

Another idea is to show the shift in discussion around concussions and head injuries in sports, specifically within the NHL and NFL. I would start by providing example of older players who have become permanently impaired or who have even passed away from head injuries. I can then discuss how the leagues tried to ignore the problem and sweep it under the rug. Finally, I can talk about how concussion protocol is taken much more seriously today and how this stand seeped into youth sports, including the decrease of children deciding to play football.

Flyers Season Debut

Since last week’s blog post, the Philadelphia Flyers have played their first two regular season games of the 2021-2022 NHL season. The two games contrasted one another in almost every way possible, but the second game was definitely the better of the two, which gives many fans hope for upcoming games.

The first game was against the Vancouver Canucks. After playing a great first period, the Flyers were up 1-0. We came out strong on the puck, fast, and had some great opportunities in the offensive zone. However, things quickly turned south in the second period.

The Canucks were up 4-2 at the end of the second. It really seemed like the hockey gods weren’t on our side, as every goal they scored was some type of fluke or weird bounce. The first goal bounced off of the glass behind the goal, off of goaltender Carter Hart’s left skate, off his right pad, and then in. The next two goals were also strange. One bounced slightly squeezed between Hart’s skate and the goalpost, leading to another disheartening goal.

Shortly after, the Canucks scored again off of an accidental redirect. Travis Sanheim, a fairly young Flyers defensemen, tried to quickly clear the puck out of the goal crease to prevent yet another goal. However, Sanheim’s clear attempt was quickly met by an opposing player’s skate. Hart had no time to react to the unfortunate and unlucky ricochet, and let in another goal. By the end of the second period, the Vancouver Canucks were up 4-2, and the Philadelphia Flyers looked like they had no energy or determination left.

To much surprise, they came out and scored two unanswered goals in the third period to tie the score up 4-4, however this wasn’t enough to get the job done. Neither team scored in the 15 minute 3-on-3 overtime, forcing a shootout to occur. Not a single Flyer scored in the shootout, so we ended up losing 5-4. While the end score doesn’t look bad on paper, the way the Flyers played made man fans worried we had reverted to our horrible ways of last season. Many fans online were especially worried about Carter Hart having a terrible season again. The Flyers themselves though weren’t worried at all.

On Monday, the Flyers played their second game versus the Seattle Kraken. This game was a complete juxtaposition to the first. The Flyers ended up winning 6-1, with all six goals coming from different players. This is a great sign that the Flyers are back on track and have depth to their offense. Carter Hart also faced twenty-four shots on goal and only allowed one in. He had a phenomenal game and quickly silenced all of the Twitter haters who had been badmouthing him since their loss to Seattle. While I was doubtful on his return after his performance against Vancouver, I always believe he can come back better and hope the best for him. This season is already looking like a major improvement from last season, so I am excited to see what the 2021-2022 season brings us.

Speech Reflection

Overall, I believe I did a good job on my speech. I took a lot of time researching and practicing in order to make sure I had the confidence needed to deliver my speech. My peers agreed with this, as they all had similar comments about my speech. I also believe I had very good content and analysis within the speech itself. I made sure to include many analytical sentences and thoroughly explain all of my thoughts.

I made a few verbal mistakes throughout my speech, including stutters or mispronunciation of words. However, I do not believe these few simple mistakes took away from the overall message of my speech. I also had a hard time staring directly at my camera, which can be seen at times in my video. It was hard to stare at such a small dot for such a long time, and my eyes often wondered to my face on the screen or the walls of my dorm room.

One of the things I would change for next time after watching my peers’ speeches would be to change the angle of my camera. I would tilt the camera to show more of my upper body instead of just my head. This way, my gestures would be more noticeable, and it would be more like watching a speech delivery in person. In general, I was proud of the content and overall delivery of my speech. I just have a few simple mistakes due to the unfamiliarity of using VoiceThread that I will work on fixing in time for our TED Talks!

Hockey’s Back! (And on ESPN?)

Wednesday night was a huge night in the hockey world. Not only was it opening night for the 2021-2022 NHL season, but it was also the first time hockey aired on ESPN since 2004. When ESPN gave up the broadcasting rights in 2004, NBC picked them up and bought them. NHL games have been shown exclusively on NBC in the United States until last season when they decided not to renew the rights. NHL on NBC was all I’ve ever known. I’ve watched games on NBC almost every day for over half the year for as long as I can remember. Because of this, I developed an emotional attachment to all of the commentators and segments on NBC.

Sean McDonaugh was the play-by-play announcer for the first game last night, in which the Pittsburgh Penguins played the Tampa Bay Lightning. You may be familiar with Sean’s play-calling even if you didn’t necessarily know it was him at the time. He called many college football games throughout the years on ABC and ESPN, and he was also the announcer for the Boston Red Sox. While his skillset in those sports in undeniable, it didn’t exactly transfer to his hockey-narrating ability. His tone wasn’t very exciting, and he rarely got louder when a team made a great play or scored. He made the game seem boring, which should never happen with such a fun game like hockey. In fact, he seemed as though he wasn’t able to keep up with the fast pace of play. I do wish that ESPN would have assigned someone to the game with prior hockey experience, however I am hopeful that Sean will get better as the season goes along.

Thankfully ESPN added some familiar faces to their team, including Brian Boucher and AJ Mleczko. Brian Boucher was a goaltender in the league, most notable for his time with the Philadelphia Flyers. He started his broadcasting the career with the Flyers on NBC Sports Philadelphia but was soon promoted to national programming in 2015. From then until last season, he served as the “Inside the Glass” reporter for NHL on NBC. Bouch, as many in the hockey community refer to him, has been one of my favorite analysts my whole life. I grew up listening and learning with him, and his passion and knowledge of the game shines through his commentary. Bringing him on was one of the best decisions ESPN could have made.

AJ Mleczko was a gold and silver ice hockey Olympic medalist. She also previously worked at NHL on NBC, where she had many groundbreaking achievements. AJ was the first woman to commentate an NHL playoff game, and to think she did it so recently is shocking. She continues to pave the way for female reporters in hockey, and she is a great role model for young girls who wish to enter the field. She is walking proof that the stereotype that women don’t understand hockey is simply not true. Her knowledge of the sport and in-game color commentary is extremely insightful and makes the broadcasts much more interesting. I am so thankful that ESPN added AJ to the team and will continue to take hockey in a more inclusive direction. Overall, I am super excited for the season and can’t wait to see what else ESPN brings to the table!

Robin Lehner Rocks the League

Four days ago, Las Vegas Golden Knights goalkeeper Robin Lehner made comments that shook the hockey world. Lehner is known for his outspoken and candid press conferences and his just as impactful Twitter threads. This particular thread contained shocking accusations made against many executives and coaches within the National Hockey League. If proven true, these accusations could definitely take the league by storm.

Robin Lehner prides himself in being open and honest, and he is never one to shy away from tough topics. On June 19th, 2019, Robin delivered a moving and heartfelt speech at the NHL Awards Ceremony. He was selected as the winner of the Bill Masterton Memorial Trophy, which is awarded to the player who “best exemplifies the qualities of perseverance, sportsmanship, and dedication to ice hockey.” Lehner came back to the game and had his best season to date after battling addiction and mental illness, so he truly did exemplify perseverance. Lehner discussed his addiction, bipolar disorder, depression, anxiety, and PTSD. He ended his speech with tears in his eyes saying, “I’m not ashamed to say I’m mentally ill, but that does not mean I’m mentally weak.” Saying this in front of the hockey community, a community known to foster toxic masculinity, was huge. Since then, Robin has been a huge advocate for mental health awareness.

As part of his campaign, Robin often exposes malpractices or wrongdoings throughout the league. While all of the other players are afraid to speak up about these issues in fear of losing their career, Robin isn’t afraid of anyone. Recently, Robin exposed the malpractices of the team doctor and staff of the Buffalo Sabers, citing his bad treatment of his broken ankle. This situation was further proved to be true by the current Jack Eichel situation (which I hope to explore in an upcoming blog post).

In his Twitter thread posted four days ago, Lehner accused NHL organizations of administering prescription painkillers, including Benzodiazepine and Ambien, to players without a prescription from a doctor. Benzos and Ambien are used to treat disorders such as severe anxiety and insomnia because they shut down many receptors within the brain. Not only are these extremely dangerous when not taken properly, but they can also become highly addictive. Lehner stated that some coaches went as far as to make players take this medicine without telling them what it was in order to get them back and playing from an injury as soon as possible.

Alain Vigneault, the head coach of the Philadelphia Flyers, was called out specifically by Lehner. Lehner said he has proof of Vigneault distributing these undisclosed drugs to players, including to some of his friends. This tweet made many to believe Lehner was referring to former Flyers and current Knights player, Nolan Patrick.

Patrick suffered serious head trauma from multiple concussions throughout his past few seasons with the Flyers. These injuries lead to a severe migraine disorder, which decapacitated Patrick and prevented him from playing for almost an entire season. To everyone’s surprise, Nolan came back for games at the end of the past season, but it was clear he was not back to his full strength. AV and Patrick were rumored to have a strained relationship before he was traded, and this is leading to even more speculation surrounding the drug accusations. Was AV forcing unprescribed painkillers upon Patrick to get him back faster from his migraines? Is this same issue really happening all over the league like Lehner states?

While I really hope that these allegations are not true, I do believe the league should launch an investigation. Even if AV is proved innocent, I would not be surprised to learn that other franchises are committing these same malpractices. There is a point where valuing toughness so much in a sport can lead to unhealthy and dangerous habits, and this is definitely at that point.

Essay Draft and Revised Speech Outline

Rhetorical Analysis Essay Draft:

What if I told you one of the most popular feminist icons and commonplaces was in fact created by men as a way to manipulate women to do their bidding? Ironic, I know. However, this is the history behind the famous Westinghouse “We Can Do It!” poster and Rosie the Riveter figurehead that circulated in the United States during World War II. The war created a higher demand for products such as ammunition, weaponry, uniforms, helmets, and much more. This higher demand of manufactured goods then led to a higher demand of workers, however there was one problem. Most of the able-bodied men who would typically take on these jobs were busy fighting the enemy overseas. Quite frankly, there was nobody left in the United States to work besides the women. The original artist and manufacturing executives who later spread the poster had a great understanding of the rhetorical situation. The poster uses the depiction of a woman to establish ethos, utilizes inspiring visual rhetoric to entice the viewer, and plays on the kairotic opportunity of the current rise of feminism and patriotism within the United States.

Although the original idea behind the creation of Rosie the Riveter had nothing to do with World War II, she soon became the posterchild (literally) of what a woman should be doing to help the war effort. The exclamation “We can do it!” convinces the female audience that they can, in fact, help win the war. The use of the word “we” establishes trust within the audience by making it seem like a woman is the one sharing this claim. Females at the time would be more likely to listen to a woman about her experience rather than a man who had no idea what it was like to be a working woman in America at the time. This creation of “Rosie the Riveter” successfully set in place the level of ethos needed to persuade its female audience. Because Rosie was a figurehead that woman could see themselves in, or aspired to see themselves in, it effectively manipulates the audience in believing that joining the workforce at the time was exactly what they were meant to do.

The visual rhetoric and artistic choices behind the poster also aid in the persuasion of the audience. Rosie is illustrated as the perfect balance between masculine and feminine to resonate with her audience. Rosie is depicted with a full face of makeup on, including mascara-darkened eyelashes, rosy blush on her cheeks, and bright red lipstick on her lips. This look signifies that women do not need to sacrifice any part of their femininity in order to join the workforce. This may have been a point of hesitation for many young women, but Rosie showcases that you can be a valuable member of the working class and still look like a beautiful, feminine lady. The poster also characterizes the opposing side of this idea as well. The artist contrasts her lady-like makeup with sharp facial features and a stern look on her face. Rosie has sharp cheekbones and a very strong jaw, all set in the glare of a woman who means business. She also has her sleeve rolled back to reveal her flexed bicep muscle. These illustrations effectively appeal to the other side of the audience, showcasing that woman can be just as productive as men and are not considered weak. Rosie is proof that women can have the best of both worlds in their work: not losing any of their womanhood while still being just as strong and valuable as the men. The colors Rosie is wearing, the red, white, and blue of the American flag, resemble the patriotism she has, which segues into my next point.

During this point in history of the United States, there was a heightened sense of patriotism and nationalism within the population. Propaganda poster were everywhere, and wartime advertisements were impossible to avoid. Because of this, everyone was willing to do whatever they could to help the war effort. This provided the perfect kairotic opportunity for the mass circulation of this poster. The poster plays on the pathetic values of the audience by convincing them that in order to help their country win the war, they must join the manufacturing workforce. The poster also takes advantage of another kairotic opportunity at the time: the rise of the feminist movement. Women were trying to prove that they could be valuable assets in the labor workforce and could handle more than just domestic roles. The creator recognized this and thus, Rosie was born. This is exactly what women at the time were looking for. A strong, working female telling them that they CAN do it. They CAN help their country win the war. They CAN handle working in manufacturing plants and shipyards. They CAN be just as productive and valuable as men. The message in the main phrase of this poster, “We can do it!”, draws on these desperate desires of the audience at the time. They exploit the pathetic values of these women in order to get them to do exactly what they want them to do: work at their companies. Whether or not this was a progressive choice is up for debate, but one thing is certain. The rhetorical choices made within the poster definitely got the job done. More recently, Rosie has been reclaimed by the feminist movement and is recognized as an icon today, which can be seen in my second civic artifact.

The street mural, titled “Yes She Can!”, depicts Malala Yousafzai, a young girl who was attacked by the Taliban for trying to attend school. Malala is depicted in the same position as Rosie the Riveter, with her arm flexed and her face strong. While the Rosie the Riveter poster showcased many types of appeals, the Malala rendition only plays on one appeal: the commonplace of Rosie herself. As outlined above, Rosie was created as the perfect American woman. She then became the icon of the feminist movement. Today, she is universally recognized as the epitome of patriotism and strength in an American female. She is the woman. By depicting Malala as Rosie, the artist immediately establishes ethos and creates pathos within the mural.

By illustrating Malala as such an iconic American commonplace, the audience is now instantly willing to get behind her cause because they are associating her with a beloved icon. Just through an artistic choice as simple as a pose, the artist instantly establishes Malala’s credibility. This also forces the viewers to see Malala in the same light they see Rosie: strong, brave, and part of a cause that is fighting for what is right.

After seeing the painting of the Malala/Rosie mash-up, the viewer’s eyes are drawn to the quote beside the mural. It reads, “All I want is education, and I am afraid of no one.” This relays Malala’s grand message in such a seemingly simple way; however, the persuasion is in the art, not the quote. The audience now knows what Malala’s cause is, and they are willing to support her due to the ethos and pathos already utilized through the homage to Rosie the Riveter.

The original Rosie the Riveter poster establishes ethos, uses persuading visual rhetoric, and takes advantage of a kairotic opportunity in order to convince American women to join the workforce. Rosie has since become an American and feminist icon, and it is through this credibility that the “Yes She Can!” poster is able to have such a strong effect with very little words or pictures. This is a testament to how powerful civic commonplaces are, especially those that are deemed patriotic in the United States.

Revised Speech Outline:

  • Attention grabbing first line (Same question as in the intro paragraph)
  • Identify my civic artifact (“We Can Do It!” poster)
  • Introduce rhetorical situation (World War II, female audience, need for more workers)
  • Discuss use of ethos to establish trust and credibility (coming from another woman, women can see themselves in Rosie, use of the word “we”)
  • Discuss visual rhetoric and style (both masculine and feminine representation of a female worker, use of flag colors)
  • Discuss kairotic opportunity of the rising feminist movement and heightened patriotism (women already looking to prove they can handle more than just domestic roles, trying to enter the workforce, willing to do anything they can to help the United States win the war)
  • Brief conclusion and afterthought of how this can be considered “performative activism” and how that is increasingly popular today