Reflection and Brainstorming

I believe I did a good job overall on my TED-style talk performance. I think it was evident that I was very passionate about and did a lot of research on my topic. Because of this, I was able to deliver my speech extemporaneously and not use any notes. I did struggle with not giving the speech in front of a live audience though. I like to bounce off the energy of my audience when I am speaking, but I found I could not do this with a computer screen. I had to work much harder to seem lively and use gestures because I was receiving no reactions or feedback from an audience. Despite this challenge, I think I did a good job and am proud of my speech.

One idea I have for the History of a Public Controversy assignment is to talk about sex education in high schools and universities. This has been a major point of discourse for a long time. Some people believe we should teach comprehensive sex education, including contraceptive options and sexually transmitted infections. This way, young adults will know about all of their options and not face any surprises when they become sexually active. However, other Americans think we should only teach abstinence and not talk about contraceptives or safe sex practices, as they promote sex within children. This issue focuses on a lot of American values and tradition, as many religious Americans do not like the idea of promoting sex before marriage. However, many progressive Americans believe that sex is inevitable, so young adults should at least be as educated as possible on the subject.

This can also tie into the topic of abortion, which would be another good controversy to focus on. Abortion also centers around the difference in American values and is argued over what policies should be implemented surrounding this issue. I believe both topics involve a lot of material worth analyzing and discussing in our assignment.

TED Talk Draft Slides

https://www.nydailynews.com/sports/football/bears-blow-redskins-73-0-1940-article-1.2440679

Acknowledge football’s importance in American culture, talk about how it is our favorite and most popular sport, thesis talking about the shift over time within the sport surround head injuries and concussion, highlight how they started with no helmets but eventually wore thin pieces of leather, no thought or regard for head safety

https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2014/11/the-first-plastic-football-helmet-often-broke-on-impact/382383/

Helmets became mandatory in 1943, plastic helmets were soon adopted and used league-wide by the end of the 1940s, over the years the league made gradual safety improvements such as incorporating heavier plastic, padding on the inside, and more protective facemasks, showed that the league was making more strides towards player safety

 

https://apnews.com/article/5989949470a24800ac482a207d07408b

In the 1990s research started rising about the serious side effects caused by repetitive brain injuries, NFL commissioner said in an interview that concussions weren’t even a real problem, just a “pack journalism issue”, NFL eventually created a brain injury committee in 1994 but it wasn’t led by a brain doctor, many fans at the time weren’t sympathetic with players’ concussion issues, said it was just part of the game and was part of their job

 

(Slide with quote in big text)

Quote from hall of fame runningback Eric Dickerson, “You are supposed to be tough. You are supposed to play through pain. You are not supposed to cry. We are taught that early on in the game as kids. Tough sport. Brutal sport. It’s like the gladiator. People want to see the big hits. They wind up on Sports Center. And as a player, you don’t want to admit you are injured.”, people saw players as entertainment instead of real people, football players are supposed to be tough and have a stigma around admitting they’re hurt

https://www.forbes.com/sites/scottmendelson/2015/11/11/concussion-review-will-smith-scores-touchdown-with-grim-nfl-expose/?sh=a61e1e666cec

Dr. Omalu’s groundbreaking study linking concussions to CTE, NFL tried to deny and discredit his work but eventually the truth came out, Dr. Omalu’s findings went mainstream after the making of Concussion starring Will Smith, public became much more aware of the dangers within the game of football

https://howtheyplay.com/team-sports/4-Things-to-Know-Before-You-Sign-Up-Your-Child-For-Youth-Football

NFL now takes concussions very seriously and are much more open about players’ injuries, have very strict protocols before players can return to play, trickled down into high school sports where there are very strict concussion protocols as well, possible implications of this shift in awareness and precaution: decline in youth participation in football, less people planning to make a career out of football, possible decline and eventual demise of America’s favorite sport?

Unit 2 Sources

For my unit 2 project, I am focusing on the shift in awareness of head injuries caused by physical contact sports. I plan to focus on how we were initially unaware that these injuries caused long-lasting effects, the National Football League’s cover-up attempts once science came out surrounding CTE, and the subsequent focus on head injuries today. I am also going to examine how this awareness today is leading to extra safety precautions and a decline of participation in youth contact sports (like football).

 

Sources:

TED Talk and Assignment Ideas

Unsurpisingly, my favorite TED Talk that I found was about hockey. You can view it at https://www.ted.com/talks/seth_wyatt_manning_how_hockey_taught_me_to_smile_more_and_worry_less I assumed there would be no TED Talks on hockey, so I was pleasantly surprised when I found this. It is titled “How Hockey Taught Me to Smile More and Worry Less.” I really enjoyed the way the speaker delivered his speech. He used many hand gestures and was very vulnerable within his speech. This allowed me to see just how passionate he is about the sport and kept me more engaged in his speech. I also like how he explained important life lessons through the story of hockey, as it’s something I can understand and relate to more instead of a motivational speaker just telling me not to stress. Overall, I thought this was a great speech due to the way that the speaker was able to personally connect with his audience.

 

 

I want to research and analyze a paradigm shift within the sports community, as I am very passionate about sports as a whole. My first choice is to analyze the change in the stigma around mental health within the sports community. I would research players from previous decades, like the 70s and 80s, and find interviews where they talked about past mental health issues. This would help me show that mental health issues have always been around, they were just never openly talked about. I would then move into players from today and show how more and more athletes are speaking up about their mental health. I would use examples of Robin Lehner, Naomi Osaka, and most importantly Simone Biles. Analyzing Simone’s voluntary time off during the Olympics would be a great way to show how a new discussion around athletes’ mental health began.

Another idea is to show the shift in discussion around concussions and head injuries in sports, specifically within the NHL and NFL. I would start by providing example of older players who have become permanently impaired or who have even passed away from head injuries. I can then discuss how the leagues tried to ignore the problem and sweep it under the rug. Finally, I can talk about how concussion protocol is taken much more seriously today and how this stand seeped into youth sports, including the decrease of children deciding to play football.

Speech Reflection

Overall, I believe I did a good job on my speech. I took a lot of time researching and practicing in order to make sure I had the confidence needed to deliver my speech. My peers agreed with this, as they all had similar comments about my speech. I also believe I had very good content and analysis within the speech itself. I made sure to include many analytical sentences and thoroughly explain all of my thoughts.

I made a few verbal mistakes throughout my speech, including stutters or mispronunciation of words. However, I do not believe these few simple mistakes took away from the overall message of my speech. I also had a hard time staring directly at my camera, which can be seen at times in my video. It was hard to stare at such a small dot for such a long time, and my eyes often wondered to my face on the screen or the walls of my dorm room.

One of the things I would change for next time after watching my peers’ speeches would be to change the angle of my camera. I would tilt the camera to show more of my upper body instead of just my head. This way, my gestures would be more noticeable, and it would be more like watching a speech delivery in person. In general, I was proud of the content and overall delivery of my speech. I just have a few simple mistakes due to the unfamiliarity of using VoiceThread that I will work on fixing in time for our TED Talks!

Essay Draft and Revised Speech Outline

Rhetorical Analysis Essay Draft:

What if I told you one of the most popular feminist icons and commonplaces was in fact created by men as a way to manipulate women to do their bidding? Ironic, I know. However, this is the history behind the famous Westinghouse “We Can Do It!” poster and Rosie the Riveter figurehead that circulated in the United States during World War II. The war created a higher demand for products such as ammunition, weaponry, uniforms, helmets, and much more. This higher demand of manufactured goods then led to a higher demand of workers, however there was one problem. Most of the able-bodied men who would typically take on these jobs were busy fighting the enemy overseas. Quite frankly, there was nobody left in the United States to work besides the women. The original artist and manufacturing executives who later spread the poster had a great understanding of the rhetorical situation. The poster uses the depiction of a woman to establish ethos, utilizes inspiring visual rhetoric to entice the viewer, and plays on the kairotic opportunity of the current rise of feminism and patriotism within the United States.

Although the original idea behind the creation of Rosie the Riveter had nothing to do with World War II, she soon became the posterchild (literally) of what a woman should be doing to help the war effort. The exclamation “We can do it!” convinces the female audience that they can, in fact, help win the war. The use of the word “we” establishes trust within the audience by making it seem like a woman is the one sharing this claim. Females at the time would be more likely to listen to a woman about her experience rather than a man who had no idea what it was like to be a working woman in America at the time. This creation of “Rosie the Riveter” successfully set in place the level of ethos needed to persuade its female audience. Because Rosie was a figurehead that woman could see themselves in, or aspired to see themselves in, it effectively manipulates the audience in believing that joining the workforce at the time was exactly what they were meant to do.

The visual rhetoric and artistic choices behind the poster also aid in the persuasion of the audience. Rosie is illustrated as the perfect balance between masculine and feminine to resonate with her audience. Rosie is depicted with a full face of makeup on, including mascara-darkened eyelashes, rosy blush on her cheeks, and bright red lipstick on her lips. This look signifies that women do not need to sacrifice any part of their femininity in order to join the workforce. This may have been a point of hesitation for many young women, but Rosie showcases that you can be a valuable member of the working class and still look like a beautiful, feminine lady. The poster also characterizes the opposing side of this idea as well. The artist contrasts her lady-like makeup with sharp facial features and a stern look on her face. Rosie has sharp cheekbones and a very strong jaw, all set in the glare of a woman who means business. She also has her sleeve rolled back to reveal her flexed bicep muscle. These illustrations effectively appeal to the other side of the audience, showcasing that woman can be just as productive as men and are not considered weak. Rosie is proof that women can have the best of both worlds in their work: not losing any of their womanhood while still being just as strong and valuable as the men. The colors Rosie is wearing, the red, white, and blue of the American flag, resemble the patriotism she has, which segues into my next point.

During this point in history of the United States, there was a heightened sense of patriotism and nationalism within the population. Propaganda poster were everywhere, and wartime advertisements were impossible to avoid. Because of this, everyone was willing to do whatever they could to help the war effort. This provided the perfect kairotic opportunity for the mass circulation of this poster. The poster plays on the pathetic values of the audience by convincing them that in order to help their country win the war, they must join the manufacturing workforce. The poster also takes advantage of another kairotic opportunity at the time: the rise of the feminist movement. Women were trying to prove that they could be valuable assets in the labor workforce and could handle more than just domestic roles. The creator recognized this and thus, Rosie was born. This is exactly what women at the time were looking for. A strong, working female telling them that they CAN do it. They CAN help their country win the war. They CAN handle working in manufacturing plants and shipyards. They CAN be just as productive and valuable as men. The message in the main phrase of this poster, “We can do it!”, draws on these desperate desires of the audience at the time. They exploit the pathetic values of these women in order to get them to do exactly what they want them to do: work at their companies. Whether or not this was a progressive choice is up for debate, but one thing is certain. The rhetorical choices made within the poster definitely got the job done. More recently, Rosie has been reclaimed by the feminist movement and is recognized as an icon today, which can be seen in my second civic artifact.

The street mural, titled “Yes She Can!”, depicts Malala Yousafzai, a young girl who was attacked by the Taliban for trying to attend school. Malala is depicted in the same position as Rosie the Riveter, with her arm flexed and her face strong. While the Rosie the Riveter poster showcased many types of appeals, the Malala rendition only plays on one appeal: the commonplace of Rosie herself. As outlined above, Rosie was created as the perfect American woman. She then became the icon of the feminist movement. Today, she is universally recognized as the epitome of patriotism and strength in an American female. She is the woman. By depicting Malala as Rosie, the artist immediately establishes ethos and creates pathos within the mural.

By illustrating Malala as such an iconic American commonplace, the audience is now instantly willing to get behind her cause because they are associating her with a beloved icon. Just through an artistic choice as simple as a pose, the artist instantly establishes Malala’s credibility. This also forces the viewers to see Malala in the same light they see Rosie: strong, brave, and part of a cause that is fighting for what is right.

After seeing the painting of the Malala/Rosie mash-up, the viewer’s eyes are drawn to the quote beside the mural. It reads, “All I want is education, and I am afraid of no one.” This relays Malala’s grand message in such a seemingly simple way; however, the persuasion is in the art, not the quote. The audience now knows what Malala’s cause is, and they are willing to support her due to the ethos and pathos already utilized through the homage to Rosie the Riveter.

The original Rosie the Riveter poster establishes ethos, uses persuading visual rhetoric, and takes advantage of a kairotic opportunity in order to convince American women to join the workforce. Rosie has since become an American and feminist icon, and it is through this credibility that the “Yes She Can!” poster is able to have such a strong effect with very little words or pictures. This is a testament to how powerful civic commonplaces are, especially those that are deemed patriotic in the United States.

Revised Speech Outline:

  • Attention grabbing first line (Same question as in the intro paragraph)
  • Identify my civic artifact (“We Can Do It!” poster)
  • Introduce rhetorical situation (World War II, female audience, need for more workers)
  • Discuss use of ethos to establish trust and credibility (coming from another woman, women can see themselves in Rosie, use of the word “we”)
  • Discuss visual rhetoric and style (both masculine and feminine representation of a female worker, use of flag colors)
  • Discuss kairotic opportunity of the rising feminist movement and heightened patriotism (women already looking to prove they can handle more than just domestic roles, trying to enter the workforce, willing to do anything they can to help the United States win the war)
  • Brief conclusion and afterthought of how this can be considered “performative activism” and how that is increasingly popular today

 

Essay Introduction and Speech Outline

Rhetorical Analysis Introduction:

What if I told you one of the most popular feminist icons and commonplaces was in fact created by men as a way to manipulate women to do their bidding? Ironic, I know. However, this is the history behind the famous Westinghouse “We Can Do It!” poster and Rosie the Riveter figurehead that circulated in the United States during World War II. The war created a higher demand for products such as ammunition, weaponry, uniforms, helmets, and much more. This higher demand of manufactured goods then led to a higher demand of workers, however there was one problem. Most of the able-bodied men who would typically take on these jobs were busy fighting the enemy overseas. Quite frankly, there was nobody left in the United States to work besides the women. The original artist and manufacturing executives who later spread the poster had a great understanding of the rhetorical situation. The poster uses pathetic appeals of the patriotism found within their audience to make them feel like a part of the war effort, utilizes bright and inspiring visual rhetoric to entice the viewer, and plays on the kairotic opportunity of the current rise of feminism within the United States.

 

Brief Speech Outline:

  • Attention grabbing first line (Same question as in the intro paragraph)
  • Identify my civic artifact (“We Can Do It!” poster)
  • Introduce rhetorical situation (World War II, female audience, need for more workers)
  • Discuss use of pathetic appeals (makes women feel like a part of the war effort, helping the United States win the war, patriotism)
  • Discuss visual rhetoric and style (bright yellow colors, masculine representation of a female worker, use of the word “we”)
  • Discuss kairotic opportunity of the rising feminist movement (women already looking to prove they can handle more than just domestic roles, trying to enter the workforce)
  • Brief conclusion and afterthought of how this can be considered “performative activism” and how that is increasingly popular today

Martina’s Marvelous Elevator Pitch

I found Martina’s elevator pitch very intriguing. Not only was the artifact itself very interesting, but Martina’s phenomenal delivery made the speech that much more interesting. She made great eye contact and kept a very steady and strong tone.

The arrangement of her speech also made her ideas and thought process very easy to follow. I liked how she pointed out other times this commonplace has been used throughout American history. I never really realized how popular it was until hearing all of the examples back-to-back like this. We really apply this phrase to all of our problems! I think it would be really interesting to compare this poster with another time this phrase was used and analyze the difference in rhetorical situations. This might work well in an expansion of the civic artifact essay.

I also think it would be a good idea to perform an in-depth analysis of the visual rhetoric of the poster.  The art has an ominous, almost disturbing feeling to it. The United States flag being the symbol of division in the poster is definitely an odd choice. It feels like it is conveying the wrong message. For this reason, I think it would also be beneficial to add some criticism of the poster. Does it really do a good job at getting the point across? Personally, I find the poster confusing and vague. I also don’t understand the “promise” that we are trying to beat. I think analyzing these strange choices made by the artist would make for an excellent speech and essay!

Elevator Pitch: The Original Performative Activism

What if I told you one of the most popular feminist icons and commonplaces was in fact created by men as a way to manipulate women to do their bidding? Ironic, I know. However, this is the history behind the famous Rosie the Riveter poster that circulated in the United States during World War II.

The war created a higher demand for products such as ammunition, weaponry, uniforms, helmets, and much more. This higher demand of manufactured goods then led to a higher demand of workers, however there was one problem. Most of the able-bodied men who would typically take on these jobs were busy fighting the enemy overseas. Quite frankly, there was nobody left in the United States to work besides the women.

At the time, women were not typically accepted to work in factories, let alone encouraged to do so. However, the U.S. needed all the help they could get, which is where Rosie the Riveter came in. This propaganda poster was created as a way to encourage women to join the workforce and help the war effort by manufacturing necessary war equipment in factories.

The creator of this poster really understood his exigence and audience. They needed women to join the workforce, and at the time, there was a heightened sense of both patriotism and feminism within the female community. He played on these values in order to make women feel empowered. They were willing to do anything to help their country win the war, and they were also dying to prove that they could handle more than just domestic roles. He appealed specifically to this audience by depicting a strong female telling other women that “We can do it.”

For this reasoning, I am aiming to analyze the rhetorical situation surrounding this civic artifact. I also want to analyze the visual rhetoric of the poster itself to examine the stylistic choices that were made to appeal to the progressive female population of the time.

This poster also provides a great example of how companies or firms might use performative activism as a way to attract their audience. While the “We can do it” phrase has now been reclaimed by the feminist movement, its origins weren’t really about fighting for women’s rights, but rather for the country’s gain. This is very common in today’s world. Companies will promote progressive ideas not to actually support the cause, but to garner support and customers. Because of this, I believe it is important to be able to analyze these types of advertisements and determine whether they are sincere or not. Can you think of any examples of companies only partaking in performative activism? Thank you for your time and feedback.

You Can Do It Now! (Because Men Said So)

When we hear the phrase, “We can do it,” we immediately think of the feminist movement. While today this commonplace is often interpreted as empowering and meaning that women can do anything men can do, its original context is a little less pure.

The famous “Rosie the Riveter” poster was originally produced as World War II propaganda as a way to entice women to join the workforce. At the time, many of the able-bodied men in the country were deployed and fighting overseas. As a greater demand for war products arose, there were less and less men back home to produce them. This led to higher-ups having to resort to their last option—women.

J. Howard Miller’s “We Can Do It!” poster from 1943.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/We_Can_Do_It!#/media/File:We_Can_Do_It!_NARA_535413_-_Restoration_2.jpg

After analyzing this poster, I have to give props to the creator, J. Howard Miller. The persuasiveness of the message is outstanding, and he thoroughly understood the rhetorical situation. The exigence of the poster is fairly obvious. They needed more goods manufactured, and there weren’t enough men around to do it. Moreover, the timeliness of the message is perfect. Not only were all U.S. citizens extremely patriotic and would do anything to help the war effort, but more importantly women were fighting for equal rights and respect in the workforce. These heightened feelings of patriotism and feminism within the audience made it the perfect time to release this persuasive, urgent call to action.

The creator also knew the audience they were looking to attract. They needed women who were willing to roll up their sleeves (pun intended) and get the job done. “Rosie” isn’t depicted as overtly feminine. In fact, her hair is tied back, she has a determined look on her strong facial features, and she is even muscular. Female activists who wanted to break their gender stereotypes and domestic roles at the time would be instantly drawn to this. Rosie enthusiastically yelling “We can do it!” adds a special sense of enthusiasm. The use of the word “we” in this commonplace, especially since it is being delivered by another woman, would make any girl at the time feel like she belonged in the factory too.