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RCL #5- TED Talk Outline

Oral Content

Audience: Females Feeling Dejected in the Pursuit of an Engineering Career 

 

Topic: Evolution of Equality to Equity (Focus on Women Empowerment and STEM Fields with Emphasis on Engineering) 

 

Purpose: Persuade my audience that self-motivation is the key to success in engineering.  

 

Thesis Statement: The shift towards equity in the workforce calls for women to prioritize personal responsibility and self-determination to succeed in engineering careers. 

 

Introduction 

Attention Strategy 

  1. Imagine a world where the halls of engineering firms are filled with a harmonious blend of diverse voices and innovative ideas. Picture a scene where young girls tinker with gadgets and dream of reshaping the future. In this future, equity has erased the barriers that once hindered the full participation of women in engineering. Women confidently lead projects, their contributions celebrated, and their expertise valued without question. It’s a landscape where the collective brilliance of both genders collaborates seamlessly, crafting solutions that address the world’s most pressing challenges. This world is not a dream but a possibility.  
  2. The shift towards equity in the workforce calls for women to prioritize personal motivation to succeed in engineering careers. 

 

 (Although difficult to pinpoint a singular event as the cause of this shift, it is undeniable that World War I from 1914 to 1918 sent shockwaves around the world.) 

 

Body 

  1. Background Information  

    1. World War I was one of the first event where women were introduced to the workplace in roles that had been uniformly male, such as bus conductors and bank clerks, window cleaners and gas fitters, and joining the police and fire services.  
    2. From this event and the Second World War, discussions about women in traditionally male careers gained popularity.  
    3. These discussions then promoted more social justice movements like the Women’s Suffrage Rights Movement, Rosie the Riveter, the idea of a “glass ceiling,” and research and data analysis exploring the underrepresentation of women in STEM. 

 

(From these events, more women evolved from simply entering the workforce to pursuing careers in STEM.) 

 

  1. Explore the current state of gender diversity in STEM fields. 

    1. By 2019, women made up 48% of the US’ workforce and 27% of the STEM field.  
    2. However, this only paints a portion of the bigger picture. Women only represent 15% of workers in engineering occupations, meaning there is a disconnect in passion for engineering specifically. 
    3. But where does this disconnect form? Why are women not interested in engineering? 
  1. Simply put, there is a lack of support for women in STEM careers.  

    1. Suzanne Choney explains that the reasons for girls and women being less likely to pursue degrees in STEM “range from peer pressure to a lack of role models and support from parents as well as teachers, to a general misperception of what STEM careers look like in the real world.” 
    2. But where should this support come from?
      1. From government policies? 
      2. From mentors? 
      3. From parents and guardians?
      4. No. The support should come from yourself.
    3. Too many times have I heard other females saying they felt as though they did not belong in STEM. That they did not feel they would be successful as an engineer. Too many times have I heard other female engineers say little girls were astonished that women could even be in this field.
    4. I was unable to comprehend how such a way of thinking could persist beyond the outdated misogynistic beliefs of the 20th century.

 

(That was until I realized the impact of self-motivation.) 

 

  1. Personal motivation in STEM careers involves proactively owning and directing one’s professional development, actively pursuing goals, and continuously learning. 

    1. I was very privileged in being enabled to freely explore my passions through my elementary school’s STEM classes.  
    2. Additionally, my parents never discouraged me from playing with Legos, “a boy’s toy.” 
    3. I never felt as though I could not be an engineer. I never felt as though I was special enough for the praise of being a women in STEM. I was always just me.   
    4. I look back on my life and I realize the importance of holistic educational practices and the support of guardians.  
    5. These two aspects of early childhood development are key to planting the seeds of personal responsibility, self-determination, and self-confidence within young girls. 

 

Conclusion 

  1. Ultimately, I do not want you to completely abandon the government and its policies and legislation in promoting gender equity in STEM, but rather use it in addition to your own determination. 
  2. As we advocate for a shift towards equity in the workforce, let us recognize the transformative potential of nurturing self-motivation from an early age. 
  3. The journey towards equity in engineering begins with each individual, supported by holistic education and the crucial influence of parents and guardians, creating a future where every aspiring engineer can confidently pursue their passion and reshape the world. 
  4. The time for change is now.

RCL #4 – Focus for Evolving Ideas Essay

Essay 

Topic:

Evolution of Equality to Equity (Focus on Civil Rights Movement and Education)

Thesis:

Due to the gradual recognition of systemic inequities and awareness of intersectionality, America’s mindset shifted from a focus on equal opportunities to one that supported equal outcomes, highlighting the need for holistic education practices.

Audience:

Parents and Guardians of Elementary School Children

Ideas:

From this analysis, the audience should gain a better understanding of major concepts of equality, equity, intersectionality, and their contemporary relevance. Explaining the distinctions between equality and equity will enable the audience to be more aware of the nuances of such a complicated and interconnected topic, thus improving the social and political climate in the United States of America. Specifically, analyzing the 1950s and the Civil Rights Movement until the present time in the 21st century with the affirmative action ban will provide the best scope of information on this topic. As my mom and great aunt used to be elementary school teachers, and I a tutor, I have personally witnessed the catastrophe of the current education system. I wish to bring attention to the horrific shape of education, especially after the COVID-19 pandemic. All too often parents overlook the influence they have over their children and their willingness to learn in a classroom. Parents are a child’s first teachers. Parents can foster a love for learning, language development, and foundational skills in their children. Also, parents should serve as advocates for their children’s educational needs, ensuring that they receive the necessary resources, accommodations, and support.

 

If parents took the initiative to identify learning challenges at home before their child’s enrollment in school, the education system would be able to efficiently provide the necessary tools for its student’s success. Additionally, parents are presented with multiple options for schooling such as private, charter, or public schools and their choice can significantly impact a child’s educational experience and overall development. Having parents’ support for increased investment in early childhood education means the proper resources will be used to address educational disparities by providing children with a strong educational foundation from an early age. For equity to exist in education, schools must implement tailored education. Tailored education emphasizes the importance of personalized, student-centered learning to address individual needs and provide an equitable education experience that considers each student’s unique background and abilities. While parents are indeed crucial in their child’s education, it is important to recognize that education is a collaborative effort that involves teachers, schools, communities, and other support systems. Ultimately, effective partnerships between parents and educators can create the most positive outcomes for a child’s education.

 

With the ban on affirmative action in college, it has become apparent that students of the future can no longer rely on policies to promote equity. Children are unable to speak for themselves at such an early age, unlike their parents who are knowledgeable about the larger systemic issues related to education. These adults can actively engage in addressing these inequities and they can become advocates for policy changes, improved school funding, and reduced disparities in access to quality education. Overall, when parents and guardians understand their role in influencing equity in education, they can contribute to a more equitable educational system and help their children achieve their full potential. There is no better time to set their child on the right path than elementary school. This understanding is essential for creating a positive and impactful educational environment.

TED Talk

Topic:

Evolution of Equality to Equity (Focus on Women Empowerment and STEM Fields with Emphasis on Engineering)

Thesis:

Due to the gradual recognition of systemic inequities and awareness of intersectionality, America’s mindset shifted from a focus on equal opportunities to one that supported equal outcomes; however, women should prioritize personal responsibility and self-determination to succeed in STEM careers.

Audience:

Females Feeling Dejected in the Pursuit of an Engineering Career

Ideas:

To fully comprehend the intricacy of the evolution of equality to equity, one must understand the nuances between the two. Equality focuses on treating everyone the same, regardless of their circumstances or needs to promote fairness. In contrast, equity emphasizes fairness through addressing individual and group-specific needs and circumstances. Although difficult to pinpoint a singular event as the cause of this shift, it is undeniable that World War I from 1914 to 1918 sent shockwaves around the world. World War I was one of the first event where women were introduced to the workplace in roles that had been uniformly male, such as bus conductors and bank clerks, window cleaners and gas fitters, and joining the police and fire services. From this event and the Second World War, discussions about women in traditionally male careers gained popularity. These discussions then promoted more social justice movements like the Women’s Suffrage Rights Movement, Rosie the Riveter, the idea of a “glass ceiling,” and research and data analysis exploring the underrepresentation of women in STEM.

 

Although there is a gap in representation in STEM, many overlook the power of self-determination. It is helpful to analyze the specific challenges women face in STEM careers, such as stereotypes, bias, and a lack of representation, but I also question how far these statics will take women in STEM and even more specifically engineering. I do not want my audience to completely abandon the government and its policies and legislation in promoting gender equity in STEM, but rather use it in addition to their own determination. I want to highlight the significance of mentorship and support systems for women in STEM and how these relationships can foster personal responsibility and self-determination. Additionally, my TED Talk will examine the efforts of corporations and institutions to promote gender equity in STEM and the impact of their policies, diversity programs, and inclusive workplace practices. I want to then pivot to exploring the psychological aspects of personal responsibility and self-determination, discussing how self-confidence and resilience play a crucial role in women’s success in STEM. Essentially, I want to encourage women in STEM to embrace personal responsibility and self-determination while emphasizing the continued importance of equity initiatives.

 

In the world of STEM, where women are underrepresented and face unique challenges, personal responsibility, self-determination, self-confidence, and resilience are critical psychological factors for success. Women who prioritize these aspects can not only excel in STEM but also contribute to a more inclusive and diverse STEM community. Encouraging and fostering these qualities in women pursuing STEM careers is essential for achieving gender equity in these fields.

 

Sources

Love, Alexandria. “When Did We Add the ‘Equity’ to Diversity, Equity, and Inclusion?” Berrett-Koehler Publisher, 15 Apr. 2020, https://ideas.bkconnection.com/when-did-we-add-the-equity-to-diversity-equity-and-inclusion  

The main point of this article is to acknowledge the diverse global society we live in so we can properly face our equitable, inclusive future, which means taking a comprehensive look at the history of the field of diversity, equity, and inclusion. Diversity education started in the 1960s as a result of the civil rights movement, a multiracial coalition made up of African Americans, Latinx and Chicano/a Americans, Asian Americans, and Native Americans. I plan to use this article to provide some background information on the idea of equality and equity in education. 

 

Davenport, David. “Whatever Happened to Equality of Opportunity?” Hoover Institution, 16 June 2023, www.hoover.org/research/whatever-happened-equality-opportunity. 

The thesis for this article is Americans used to believe in equal opportunity rather than in equal results, however, there are suggestions that it be scrapped and replaced with newer ideas such as equity over equality of outcome. Additionally, the article addresses the political state of the United States of America by describing how political division makes government intervention difficult. The evolving idea of equality in America needs to be appreciated for being a point of aspiration, and it would be unreasonable to expect a set of policies or government programs to aid in the implantation of these changing ideals, thus supporting my idea of encouraging parents and guardians taking initiative to support their child’s education. 

 

Hankinson, Simon. “How Discriminatory DEI Ideology Replicates Itself in the Federal Bureaucracy | the Heritage Foundation.” The Heritage Foundation, 17 Oct. 2023, www.heritage.org/progressivism/commentary/how-discriminatory-dei-ideology-replicates-itself-the-federal-bureaucracy. 

Hankinson argues that the military and federal government are increasingly rewarding adherence, and requiring declarations of fealty, to the divisive, discriminatory ideology of DEI. Although not as heavily related to my topic, this article brings an interesting point to the idea of establishing boundaries on the effectiveness of equity. I could use this article to help develop the idea of relying on self-motivation instead of solely on policies.  

 

Silkin, Lewis. “Women in Work: A Brief History of Women in the Workplace.” Futureofworkhub, 6 July 2021, www.futureofworkhub.info/comment/2021/7/6/women-in-work-a-brief-history-of-women-in-the-workplace. 

In this article, Lewis Silkin explores the history of women in waged work through the ages and both the historic and current challenges faced by women in the workplace. I plan to use this article to provide some background information on the idea of equality and equity in the workplace as an overarching idea. 

 

Burling, James. “Moving From Equality to Equity Is Unconstitutional and Hurts Minorities.” Pacific Legal Foundation, 20 May 2021, https://pacificlegal.org/moving-from-equality-to-equity-unconstitutional-hurts-minorities/.  

The thesis statement of this article is centered on the shift from a focus on equality to equity, particularly in the context of government policies and programs, is problematic, potentially unconstitutional, and has negative consequences for minority groups. The article argues that policies promoting equity often led to unfair treatment and undermined the principles of individual rights and equal protection under the law. In the context of my topic, this article would further my point of needing to adopt other methods of supporting equity in education and STEM fields.  

 

Dreher, Rod. “‘Equity’ Is Not ‘Equality,’ Comrade.” The American Conservative, 19 Aug. 2020, www.theamericanconservative.com/equity-equality-woke-revolution-gospel-in-the-factories-stage-live-not-by-lies. 

The thesis statement of the article argues that the emphasis on equity over equality in contemporary social and political discourse, particularly within the context of the “woke” movement, is causing a shift towards ideological conformity and suppression of dissent, potentially eroding fundamental freedoms and the diversity of perspectives in society. The article contends that this shift towards equity can lead to conformity and manipulation rather than fostering genuine fairness and diversity of thought. As a call to action in my TED Talk, it would be interesting to implement this idea to create boundaries and limitations on how the government is not the solution to ensuring equity. 

RCL #3 – Rhetorical Analysis Outline

Original Artifact: Confederate Flag

Contrasting Artifact: https://youtu.be/FJykcB2u_pc?si=bFy427E0SneFcL_y 

Audience: Identity Evropa (May Change)

 

  1. Introduction (1-2 paragraphs)
    1. Ironically, this country was once famously declared “United we stand, divided we fall,” only to find itself divided by a complex tapestry of history, politics, and ideology. 
    2. In recent times the flag has come into question as it was proudly displayed at the Capitol Raid on January 6th, used at a mass shooting in Charleston, South Carolina, and removed from Mississippi’s late-official state flag.
    3. Originally created by the Confederate states during the Civil War to help soldiers differentiate themselves from Union soldiers, the Confederate flag and its meaning have evolved into a sensitive and convoluted topic. For some, the Confederate flag symbolizes the commonplaces of unity and division as some see the flag as southern pride and heritage while for others the Confederate flag is a symbol of slavery and inequality.
    4. America must find a way to embrace its diverse population while preserving a shared sense of identity when tackling the issue of finding a balance between these differing opinions among its citizens. As America still struggles with this, there is no debate as to why unproductive conversation concerning the Confederate flag persists. This useless back-and-forth begs the question: How do we support a respectful, progressive, and healthy conversation about a delicate topic?  The episode “Camp Town Races Aren’t Nearly as Much Fun as They Used to Be” of the Golden Palace finds this perfect balance.
    5. Thesis: Where the directness of the Confederate flag fails, this episode of the Golden Palace thrives as it addresses the issues of representation and public memory, unlike its (adjective) counterpart. 
      1. Representation: lack of representation, misrepresentation, misinterpretation of progress. Who is included and excluded, why, and why does it matter?
      2. Public Memory: collective memory, contestation. The persuasiveness of commemorations, monuments, memorials, museums, etc. in relation to collective identity.
  2. Introduction (2nd Paragraph ?)
    1. In the episode, Don Cheadle plays a hotel manager who confronts Blanche, one of the owners, about her hanging a Confederate flag in the lobby. He explains to her why the flag is offensive and racist to many people, especially African Americans.
      1. Explain the background of the second artifact (in Body 1). Erase the explanation concerning ethos (or other appeals like logos and pathos) and leave for Body 1. Explain kairos (why was this episode, when, where. What was happening during this time?)
      2. Provide a summary of the episode
      3. The episode aired Dec 4, 1992
  3. Body Paragraphs (3-4 paragraphs)
    1. Body 1: Background for Episode/Ethos (might go here OR second intro paragraph)
      1. Although the Golden Palace was filmed in Ren-Mar Studios in Hollywood, the show was actually set place in a hotel on Miami’s South Beach. As Blanche, one of the show’s main characters is originally from Atlanta, Georgia, she obviously has her own opinions and experiences concerning the Flag. For the audience of the show, understanding how her ties to the flag differ greatly from Roland Wilson, a black man, is an important aspect of the effectiveness of the artifact’s purpose. The ethos of these characters in expressing their beliefs enables the artifact to clearly communicate the (STATE PURPOSE OF ARTIFACT). (EXPLAIN MORE on how their race/hometown is necessary). Simply changing their races or hometowns, removes all their credibility and immediately destroys efforts made to promote a healthy conversation. 
        1. Where was this filmed? How did the setting of the show impact its message?
        2. Where are the characters from? How does this also affect the message?
        3. What is the message of the artifact?
        4. Explain the reason for the creation of this episode of what may have been the desired outcome. 
    2. Body 2: Episode Use of Pathos
      1. Blanche and Roland both initially expressed their opinions in a …(was it tense or freely?) way. They were eventually able to have an inviting conversation where they listened to each other’s points of view and calmly expressed their differences whilst also explaining how they would be more thoughtful (not the word) of others in the future.
        1. How does Golden Palace use pathos to develop a compassionate conversation?
        2. Check for the best quote. https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0758219/quotes/?ref_=tt_trv_qu
          1. “The whole world is messed up right now, and I would like to see that get better, but in order for that to happen white people are gonna have to start making positive assumptions when they see People of Color. And People of Color could make positive assumptions when they see white people. Man things are just messed up. Blanche, look, let’s just try and get rid of all the barriers and just trust each other okay?”
    3. Body 3: How People Remember This Episode/Characters/Series/Topic (Contrast against those who recently watched)
      1. “Camp Town Races Aren’t Nearly as Much Fun as They Used to Be” makes an active effort to include the two major opposing populations: those who see the flag as a representation of Southern heritage and those who see the flag as a symbol of inequality.
      2. This episode was recently removed from
        1. Who is included in this conversation? What does this mean for the conversation about the Confederate flag?
  4. Conclusion (Timely)
    1. What is the relevance of this episode in today’s time?  Black lives Matter Movement. What we can learn from this artifact.
    2. Restate Thesis, summarize major points, explain where the Confederate Flag fails in modern times where this artifact thrives.
  5. Works Cited
    1. Golden Girls: 10 Things Even Diehard Fans Didn’t Know About Blanche (screenrant.com)

RCL #2 -Civic Artifact Ideas

I intend to use the Confederate flag as my civic artifact due to its tumultuous history and contradicting interpretations.

 

The Confederate States created the Confederate flag during the Civil War in response to a recurring issue on the battlefield. Many of the Confederate soldiers were unable to distinguish the difference between the Union Flag and the original Confederate battle flag, the Stars and Bars. To reduce confusion, the Confederate States designed a new flag to differentiate their troops in battle.

 

In today’s time, the flag has no use in current times other than to serve as a symbol of Southern pride as the Confederate States lost the war. Despite the intended significance of the flag, this artifact has a multitude of meanings due to its complicated past and interconnected usage with sensitive political topics. Veterans and descendants of Confederate veterans alike used the flag as a sacred and revered symbol of Southern pride. Conversely, other groups have come to associate the flag with spiteful actions. After losing the war, the battle flag was often used in correlation to strict racial segregation and developed a distinct cultural and political identity. Even after the discontinuation of these harmful practices, the flag remained with some arguing it stood for state rights and independence from the federal government.

 

In relation to these arguments, two major commonplaces in the discussion of the Confederate flag center mainly on the different perspectives of the flag’s meaning. The commonplaces are that the flag stands for southern pride, unity, and heritage and the Confederate flag is a symbol of slavery and inequality. As these commonplaces correlate strong beliefs, the artifact is “civic” because it displays a profound sense of nationality within everyone regardless of their standing. Everyone is motivated to push for their beliefs whether for or against the flag, therefore promoting civic engagement.

RCL #1 – Ideology

Throughout its extensive time as a remarkable jean company, Levi’s has made it abundantly clear it values the quality of its clothing. In light of the pressing crisis of climate change, Levi’s is looking to make a much needed change in the production of its world famous jeans.

 

Original 1892 logo for Levi Strauss & Company.

Over the years, Levi’s has updated its logos and slogans to reflect its passion for practicing more sustainable production and sourcing methods, with the most current statement being “Buy Better. Wear Longer.” The advertisement for this slogan clearly demonstrates the saying “One man’s trash, is another man’s treasure.” Although the quality of Levi’s is far from trash, it is apparent the rise of sustainability in recent years has made it a priority for companies to focus on the “life” of its products after leaving the hands of the original consumer.

 

Many are now dedicated to reducing their carbon footprint through the new and exciting trend of thrifting. Reusing items to create interesting and creative articles of clothing has become a niche community with its own dedicated following, demonstrating the importance of quality items. Additionally, the trend of thrifting goes beyond reducing the effects of fast fashion. Thrifting helps combat bigger issues of waste, inflation, and excessive water usage.

 

Levi’s 2021 slogan. Buy Better. Wear Longer.

 

The commonplace Levi’s used in its promotion heavily relates to the United Nation’s Sustainable Development Goals. This slogan draws focus specifically to the United Nation’s goal of ensuring sustainable consumption and production patterns. Highlighting and advocating for a change towards more sustainable practices is an effective persuasive method as it allows Levi’s to reach its current audience and even reach those outside of it. Levi’s target audience includes young adults generally no older than 40, but the addition of  Gen Z influencers and a trending topic retains the support of its initial audience while successfully grabbing the attention of a younger market.

 

Simply put, Levi’s has demonstrated its willingness to change to fit the standards of the time, continuing to prove itself as a dependable and reliable brand for all. Levi’s draws attention to the collective effort needed to better the environment by advertising high-quality products and indirectly persuading its audience to reduce environmental harm. The effectiveness of Levi’s persuasion was only possible through the clever use of commonplace.