Elevator Speech

“Great moments are born from great opportunity, and that’s what you have here tonight, boys. That’s what you’ve earned here tonight. One game. If we played them ten times they might win nine. But not this game.” Part of the speech the once great hockey coach, Herb Brooks, gave in the locker room just moments before one of the most significant events in American sports history. The Soviets were unbeatable for the most part of twenty years. They were supposed to win gold at those Winter Olympics in Lake Placid. But on February 22, 1980, on that cold winter day in upstate New York, the United States said otherwise.
Nothing can compare to the emotion that went into this game. The Soviets were back as the terror of the world after invading Afghanistan just two months before the games, another cold war was about to begin, not to mention the overwhelming fact that the Soviet hockey team was unbeatable. US confidence was shot and fear had reemerged in Americans. The game that is referred to as, “the miracle on ice,” wasn’t just a hockey game: it was a battle that changed the US. But how were kids going to win? Well, that’s what makes the victory all the more beautiful: the impossible was accomplished. A true underdog story. One can imagine how loud America was on that late February day.

Author: Dan

I am currently a rising senior at Penn State University. Throughout undergrad, I have dedicated myself to a major in economics, which I have supported with a business minor and a 3.2 GPA. This summer I worked as an intern at a financial institution called Mariner Finance. I hope that I can use this experience and the skills I've acquired from undergrad to obtain a job in finance. My role as a student and professional has been shaped by the leadership experiences I have had. These experiences include working as a pool manager and serving as Vice President of my fraternity. I am hopeful to continue my journey as a professional in either Pittsburgh or Columbus, where I can obtain my MBA and succeed in a fruitful career.

One thought on “Elevator Speech”

  1. This was a really good elevator pitch which was loaded with pathos. This was an effective strategy as your civic artifact, the speech, also relies heavily on pathos.

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