RCL 5- Rough Draft

In 1955 one of the most iconic companies of all time was founded. A brand that would be recognized around the world. Two golden arches that would mean cheap and easy food, around the world. Yes, that company is McDonald’s. Since McDonald’s was founded, it has grown into a worldwide power opening over 30,000 restaurants across the world. With this amount of worldwide success, it is in the ranks with other super power companies like Coca-Cola and Apple. But even with McDonald’s great success there are many issues that proceed the company.

McDonald’s has many bad commonplaces about itself as a company. One in particular is that it is considered to be some of the worst and least health food that you can eat. Many of the popular sandwiches on the menu can have upwards 800 calories in them, which is more than a third of what the average person should consume on a daily basis. Even salads at McDonald’s can be found with high calorie counts and high in sugars and fats. There are also a lot of questions as to how McDonald’s makes there food and what it is made of. People often question if the chicken nuggets are actually chicken or what is a McRib made out of? While McDonald’s often claims these allegations are false and puts out information showing the truth, it is still in a lot of question. It is not only McDonald’s products that are in question, the company itself is usually viewed in bad light. The company is often considered to be money hungry and not caring about its reputation as long as it is making money. One example is that McDonald’s put out information saying that a person could live working at McDonald’s but the company didn’t care to consider people paying for things like electricity and heating bills. The information also said that a person would need to work overtime every week. While McDonald’s gets a bad rep in many situations, they still find ways to make tons of money.

McDonald’s finds ways to make money even when the get a lot of hate as a company. McDonald’s mascot is a clown, Ronald McDonald. A clown often is usually used as a sign of comedy or fun. McDonald’s uses there mascot to market their restaurant as a fun place to go. This also the reason why they market using bright colors and often use a smile on packaging. McDonald’s is also consistently adapting to try to get what people like. The consistently run sales to market to increase their income. One example of this is during Lent, McDonald’s runs specials with the Filet-o-Fish. They also try to introduce new menu items to keep up with constant food trends like burgers with sriracha when that grew in popularity.

McDonald’s has always struggled with the issue of being healthy versus being cheap and covenant. Originally being marketed as being quick and cheap, McDonald’s grew at a rapid rate but when people started caring a lot more about what they were putting into their bodies. Overnight personal health became the people’s civic duty and McDonald’s was stuck in between two very different markets and decide to work both sides. They started offering healthier options but the quality of the food was questioned because people felt like it was their responsibility civilly to care what they were putting in there body.

McDonald’s as a company had become a national icon and plays an important part in what people choose to eat. Nowadays people care a lot more about what they eat and McDonald’s has to adapt to that. They have many strategies put in place to improve the company as a whole and as of now, the company is still on top of the fast food industry.

RCL 4- Civic Artifact Draft

Intro: Picture this, you go out to dinner one night with a few friends. You decide that you want to get a cool, refreshing soft drink. If you are like me then without opening the menu to see what actual drinks they have you will say can I have a Coke? Since the Coca-Cola Company came about in the late 19th Century, it has became one of the most iconic and most argued about brands in existence. As for myself, my parents always kept a bottle of Diet Coke in my house at all times so the company has became one that I see every single day to the point where I can totally picture the memorable and clean cursive writing of the logo.

 

Transition 1: Even with all the time I drank Coca-Cola products I can see the problems with there products.

 

#1: Problems with Coca-Cola

  • Unhealthy, Cut out of healthy lifestyles
  • Has Caffeine, Not drinking at night

 

Transition 2: These are issues that clearly effect Coca-Cola’s products but they still succeed by selling thousands of units of product everyday.

 

#2: How Coca-Cola Succeeds

  • Markets drinks to keep up with common trends. Ex. Diet Coke, Coke with Splenda
  • Often puts out studies saying why Coca-Cola drinks are the best

 

Transition 3: One of the most famous studies is of the most famous rivalry in the world of soft drinks, Coke vs Pepsi

 

#3: Coke vs Pepsi: A Civic Duty

  • Everyone has an opinion, even though the argument is nearly pointless
  • (Show Data on how many people care)
  • People get angry and defend it

 

Conclusion: While the Coca-Cola company has grown into a household name that often holds a lot of negatives to its aspects of health, it has became possibly the most recognizable drink brand in history. So the next time you want a drink, remember, ask for a Coke.

RCL #3- It’s What I Do

In It’s What I Do by Lynsey Addario, the reader is constantly hooked on the journey through Addario’s life story. There are many parts which can invoke emotions and feelings in the reader from the power of Addario’s writings. Out of all of the book one part specifically stuck out in part II as being very vivid and compelling.

 

On page 93 Addario talks about the invasion of Iraq. She starts off by hooking the reader with the line, “The invasion began on March 19”. This is a line that automatically gets the reader interested on what the topic is. Addario then follows up by describing the invasion with vivid imagery, stating that they “…rained cruise missiles…” on the enemy. She also describes the war from her perspective, stating that “I didn’t know the language of war.” Describing the invasion in this amount of detail while still stating her views at the time really allowed me to envision what was happening in the battle. Addario uses this writing strategy of hooking a reader in with a good topic sentence and then using vivid details and imagery to keep the reader involved.

 

In my passion blog, I could use this writing strategy to help enhance my blog. I should start off my paragraphs with something that would draw a reader in like a players jaw dropping stat or a interesting fact. This would keep the reader of my blog much more interested in learning more about the player and reading deeper into the blog. Also the more vivid description I can give of the football player, the more that the reader can get a mental picture of what the football player is like. Addario really uses these writing strategies perfectly and other readers and myself should implement these strategies into our writing to make our pieces better.

RCL #2- It’s What I Do

During part 1 of It’s What I Do by Lynsey Addario, she mentions a story that her grandmother told her. The story was about how even though her grandmother was happy with her husband Ernie, he never filled her with the same passion that a prior boyfriend, Sal did. Lynsey Addario mentions this because not only does it pertain to Lynsey’s current situation with Uxval, it also relates to Lynsey’s choice of occupation. While Lynsey could have a standard profession, she chooses to pursue what makes her happy and is her passion.

 

My passion for sports has been around since I was little. I never really remember a specific time in which it became my passion. It was a passion that was ingrained in me from my first memories. As for my passion of Psychology, there is one specific time I can recall that changed my view of the study.

 

When I was a Sophomore in high school, I was kind of a trouble maker. One time my friend had just finished completing his homework where he had to answer fill-in the blank question. I thought it would be funny if I would white out all the answers he just wrote. I had done this to a couple other friends and all there reaction would just get annoyed and give playful punch. This one friend took this event in a completely different direction. He took the notebook in front of me and proceed to start ripping pages out of it (I would have been upset by this but it wasn’t my notebook so I found it hilarious). It was this reaction that made me take more interest in how certain people acted. In my upcoming passion blogs I want to hear what makes the people on my floor into the football players they are now and what they are outside the sport.

RCL #1- It’s What I Do

Passion, as defined by Merriam-Webster, is “a strong liking or desire for or devotion to some activity, action or concept”. In other words a passion is something that makes you very happy. As a young man that just moved 422 miles away from my home to join a new community, it feels as if my passions are sometimes the only thing that can keep me from being bogged down in this overwhelming experience.

 

My love for sports comes to mind very quickly when I think of my passions. Sports have always been something I enjoyed learning about, playing, and watching. It was never just on the surface level either, I read about stats, how players interacted with one another, and the stories behind the players themselves. It is that last point which leads into another one of my passions which is Psychology and more specifically, how people act. I often find myself wondering what makes people act certain ways. Questions can come to mind like why does one person get there work done right away while I procrastinate till the last minute or how can someone say Tom Brady isn’t the greatest quarterback of all time? It’s important questions like these which draw me into wanting to understand more about how people act.

 

With these passions two blog ideas came to mind. My dorm room happens to be on the same floor where the majority of the freshman on the football team stay so my first idea was that I could interview one of the players per blog and write about what motivates them and what are they like outside the sport. My other idea was that I could talk about important injuries in sports and how they affect the team the injured player is on.