Monthly Archives: September 2012

Potential Idea for Rhetorical Analysis? Thoughts?

http://www.eulogyspeech.net/famous-eulogies/Winston-Churchill-Eulogy-for-King-George-VI.shtml#.UGSQZ7SSK8o

 

Here, we have Winston Churchill’s eulogy for King George VI, which I plan to rhetorically analyze for our second assignment.  The idea of a eulogy appealed to me because its heavy emotional content; rather than sharing an idea, a eulogy shares a life, respect for a person, and a selfless opportunity for speech using rhetorical tools.  This eulogy’s purpose is to not convince somebody to do something, but rather to feel something. Furthermore, the end of the speech turns the spotlight onto the queen, and encourages the people of England about their future. That, above all, is the purpose to the people, I believe. In addition, the prime minister’s weighty speech caters to an incredibly large audience, for it is the death of royalty; therefore, its effects are far-reaching in that the message reaches both pop culture and politics alike.  Finally, the context is interesting; King George died in his sleep in 1952 after suffering from a lung condition for some time. Note also that the date is in the early 1950’s–a few years after the end of World War II.

 

Winston Churchill emerged after the war, especially in regards to American perception, as a great man of character and a key figure and ally throughout the war.  He was well-liked, and his powerful demeanor and ability to connect with the people presents itself in the eulogy.  He, like the essay on page 323, uses emotional appeals above all to convey a familiarity and sense of unity–this was their king.  He also articulates his close connection with the king as a result of recent events (the war), which he uses as a way to back up his relationship with the late royal.  He, unlike many in the wide audience, actually knew the man on a personal level. Like the essay, it builds trust; it builds honesty.

 

The essay breaks down and analyzes what makes a disconnected person feel something–empathy, or perhaps a call to action.  Because a eulogy too features so much pathos, or emotional appeal, learning how to pull out these specific features that incite emotion or feeling is essential.

PSY’s Gangnam Style

Gangnam style – why has it caught our attention so? Why this video, and not so many others lurking around YouTube?

 

I think Crystal Anderson in her most recent blog post regarding this phenomenon offers some good points as to why this video has blown up across all mediums of media.  However, I believe her attributing its success to Americans’ love for Asian disrespect, proves to be a bit too cynical.  She’s right by essentially claiming that this video wouldn’t be nearly as entertaining to Americans if it featured Americans.  However, I don’t think we should attribute that all to the fact that Asians are comical to us.

 

But, it is still due to racial discrimination.

 

I believe the majority of its entertainment value comes from the fact that the actions and scenes in the video contrast so much to Americans’ perception of Asian society.  Americans do not have much exposure, if any, to Asian “hip hop culture”–personally, I didn’t know such a thing existed.  Our perception of Asian culture is one of persevered academics, competition, and supreme hard work; no part of this video exhibits such commonplaces of a society.  Rather, the video portrays a culture featuring an ideology that luxury comes first–luxury, wealth, and pleasure.  The video does not depict the “serious Asian culture” that so many Americans believe in, and it is this contrast that leaves our eyes glued to the screen. It seems so out of place that it becomes comical.

 

Also, it is important to keep in mind that Americans are more or less viewing this completely out of context, whereas Koreans perceive this video for what it actually is: a satire of the wealthiest district in South Korea.  Until Anderson’s blog post, I was completely unaware of what “Gangnam” actually was; I surely did not know it was referencing a real place.  If anything, my first view of the video left me with the impression that PSY was satirizing Western culture.  That fact in itself demonstrates the fact, though, that this video is purely entertainment to us Americans–we don’t bother to understand what it’s real message is.  We just laugh at PSY “dancing like a horsey.”  Meanwhile, it actually offers us an interesting point about the socioeconomic status of Korea.

 

Who would have known, though?

From the View of an Optimist: Facebook

How many hours have we spent trolling pages, stalking near-strangers, or looking at pictures when we should be doing homework?  Writing blogs?  Doing laundry?

Yeah, ask me what I was doing five minutes ago.

 

I was on Facebook.

 

Easily one of the best distraction tools around (after all, just a click away), Facebook offers us instant connection to the world around us and those who are a part of our lives.  Its addictive nature stems from the fact that millions of people invite others to “get to know them” through the objects, photos, words that they post–the life they paint on screen for the world to view.  However, while many try to throw blame at Facebook for promoting a false image of one’s own life, its benefits of connecting the world and loved ones far outweighs those who use the site for vain purposes.

 

While Facebook certainly is a method to snapshot one’s life and identity, its core value comes from its ability to c-o-n-n-e-c-t everybody to a common place, even if that place is simply a News Feed.  From miles away, I can easily see what my best friend’s college campus looks like, and also what going to college there looks like.  Looking through my roommate’s posted pictures of her trip to Greece this past summer gives me the chance to see and understand (and also, consider for the future) what a trip to Greece would be like.  In this way, Facebook offers an opportunity to live vicariously, or to experience what you yourself don’t have the time or the resources for. Facebook is about sharing–not just words, or funny videos, or pictures you took of yourself on PhotoBooth at two in the morning–but also about sharing experiences. Can you not relate? I personally love how Facebook creates a medium for me to connect and share my life with loved ones back in the Wild Wild Wex (that’s Wexford, PA, for all you non-Pittsburgh folk), as well as my friends currently immersed in their own college journeys.

 

Before you finish commenting and type facebook.com into your browser…would you tell me what you think?

From the View of an Optimist: The Glorified Ivies

Let me begin by qualifying that I am not, in fact, super pro-ivy.

Why would I be? I truly believe I am getting a quality education here at a public state university, and I don’t believe that my opportunities are any less my chances of success any poorer.  Also, let’s not forget the fact that I am by no means dropping six digits for my four years here at Penn State.  And–sorry, Ivys–I think I’ll do just fine without your prestige backing my name and my degree.

However, I am not bitter about their existence.  Since a college education these days is almost a given (or at least more so than in the past), education has kind of evolved into a market, and markets are governed by economics.  Ivy League schools certainly have the demand.  While I don’t know the exact numbers, Ivy League schools receive a grand number of applications per year.  Therefore, no one can expect them to shell out scholarships in order to attract prospective students–they have enough already.  There are reasons behind the price tag, and if you’re applying to an Ivy League school, you know what you’re getting yourself into.  That said, I do know that some schools (Princeton comes to mind) that supposedly feature adjustable tuition based on family income, and thus can end up being more affordable than many lower-tier private institutions.  There also exists the argument that an Ivy League degree opens doors to the best kind of networking; this may be true, but I do think there is something to say for the networking available from big universities such as Penn State as well.  Studies surely have been done.  But just take a look at our Career Fair, our alumni base, our resources, our yearly scholarship…

 

I think we’ll all be just fine.

 

 

First Week Speeches

Honestly, we have some orators.

Given what I saw on Tuesday with the Civic Life speeches, I am actually thoroughly impressed with how well people have prepared for their couple minutes in the limelight.  Not only were many merely informative and interesting, but experiencing many of those speeches allowed me to realize how fortunate we as a class are to house so many different racial and ethnic backgrounds.  A couple students interviewed older relatives of theirs that were not actually original U.S. citizens; it was intriguing to hear what these not-so-foreign-ers had to say about what their second impression of a country was–their impression of America.  The differences in what citizenship means here in the United States versus elsewhere in the world is certainly thought-provoking, and I’m curious to see whether any other classmates will provide a similar approach and topic to the assignment.

Beyond content, though, I was pleasantly surprised regarding the presenters’ confidence and presence in the front of the room.  I could clearly tell that all were prepared adequately, and certainly nobody was nervous to the point of utter shame.  The first couple presentations certainly set the bar high, but that’s a good thing; they also, as a result, completely kept my attention!

Rocking the Vote

Recently (as in, approximately three hours ago), Penn State students gathered to reap the benefits of attending a large public university.  Tonight, that benefit was a Jack Johnson concert–excuse me, a FREE Jack Johnson concert–as a part of a traveling program called Rock the Vote.  Rock the Vote tours the nation, making frequent stops at university campuses like Penn State, in order to raise interest and hype about voting in the upcoming election.  The non-partisan program effortlessly draws in hundreds of students by featuring big names in music for zero cost to the poor college student (hence, the ridiculously long line protruding from the Eisenhower Auditorium this afternoon for ticket pick-ups).  Yet, that line was precisely where the real civic duty was encouraged: registering to vote here in State College.

If you’ve hovered around the HUB even a couple times during these first couple weeks on campus, you have probably been approached by a clipboard-clad student volunteer seeming to just have popped out of the bushes.  Next, they always ask, “Hey guys, have you registered yet to vote here in State College?”  Maybe some–maybe you–have lied and responded with a nod in order to get Clipboard Kid off your case because a) you just want to enjoy eating your eleven-dollar paid-per-ounce HUB salad bar salad, b) this is precious catch-up time with your freshman friend who lives in East, or c) you have less than an hour to finish this assignment for class at 1:25 and stressing out big-time.  However, what if Clipboard Kid came up to you while you were standing in line, and you were probably going to stay in that line for over an hour solely to pick up your precious Jack Johnson ticket? You would be dying for anything to break up the monotony; you may even wave over Clipboard Kid (now Clipboard Staff) so that you may spend the two minutes you’ve been putting off to register to vote.

This exact scenario was my afternoon. While I still don’t fully understand what Jack Johnson has to do with my voting (other than create hype), I must admit, I may have never gotten around to actually registering to vote–my utmost duty as a citizen of my country–had I not been corralled into a line for over an hour with nothing else better to do.  While corralling college kids may not have been the original intended strategy, the Rock the Vote planners had a vision in mind, and that vision was to simply promote voting among the students of State College. Rock to Vote undeniably promotes civic engagement in college students, and it appeals to them to do so through the medium of music.  Also, I got an awesome free concert out of it.  Isn’t civic engagement fun?

Design Plan

While I have not yet found my artifact (i.e. flyer or website) for my Civic Life oral presentation, I have thought somewhat about how I would like to go about giving the presentation; for example, I would like my message to take on an informal, extemporaneous-like form.  I want to be able to connect with my audience–the rest of my English class, my fellow freshmen–in that way: an equal basis.  That said, I plan on developing an ethos that exhibits confidence and comfortability; in short, I want the audience to like me and feel comfortable with me enough to actually listen and engage.  I, as the rhetor, must establish this right away and in the beginning, and so I would like to open in a funny, quirky yet relevant manner. We shall see how that fits in with the artifact.  My exigence (beyond earning a good grade) will ideally be to show my classmates the effect a mere piece of paper can have–it can elicit emotion, plant an idea, or successfully plea for participation.  That all said, it simply depends on artifact being examined.  I will be on the lookout.

From the View of an Optimist: Friendship

 

L  o  n  e  l  i  n  e  s  s.

What a fantastic way to start out a blog about optimism, right? Stick with me. I have a point.

Lonely has a number of shades of meaning–many different hollows based on the contexts, the situation, the people involved.  At one point in life, you will feel lonely–whether you physically stand alone without human contact or, perhaps even worse, you feel loneliness in a throng of people.  Even as the optimist, I too have felt lonely.  Many of you may feel lonely now as you map out your new life, your new place and niche, here at your new home of the next four years. But amidst all you may have felt or are feeling there in that low point, there is a remedy.

People.  Friendship.  I’m not talking talking about the fluffy let’s-make-small-talk-and-only-be-friends-while-inebriated friendship.  The real stuff.  The people who you let get deep into your soul and your lives; they are the people who know everything from your Starbucks order to your family members’ weird tendencies to what makes you laugh, or cry, or become incredibly pissed off.  Friends are your backbone; friends can be your sanity; friends help you pick up the pieces when

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Human beings have a need to connect as well as a need to belong.  A psychologist with some sort of supporting research could tell you that, or any person who has lived a day could tell you that.  Even the recluse finds friends, just perhaps not in the conventional way.  Friendship provides the truest and often most receptive means for advice, for friends are often the only ones qualified to call you out when needbe–and maybe actually even be heard.  Without friends, we revert to our own minds and worries and fears, with no one to bring us back to reality–no resource for peace of mind.  People are more important than money, than work, than most other things; friendship embodies the connections of all people.  How could you give up on something so fulfilling as a best friend?

Do the Right Thing

The featured movie Do the Right Thing proved to be different than I had anticipated; that said, I think it made a point better than I had anticipated as well.  The movie aptly incorporated different aspects of rhetoric in order to issue an entertaining plea to participate in civic life by “always doing the right thing”.  The character that epitomized this the most was Da Mayor, for although he indeed was human (labeled a drunkard by Mother Sister, not everyone wanted him around, etc.), he personified this idea of civic participation in that he put others first.  The movie was full of examples: he brought flowers to Mother Sister even though she was cruel, saved the little boy from the car, and offered to sweep Sal’s outside sidewalk even before offered pay.  Beyond his actions of civic responsibility, he preached with leadership his convictions–most notably, when he told Mookie to always do the right thing.  According to Schudson–who defined civic life as fulfilling duty, honoring the public good, and finding value in reflection–Da Mayor would be regarded as an outstanding citizen to his community.

Furthermore, beyond using characters as models of the message, the movie rhetorical goals were achieved using the rhetorical model (i.e. intrinsic proofs).  While I cannot offer, using my own common knowledge, the credibility of the director before the movie was created, I do know that it was received as a fantastic film.  Hence, its ethos proof.  Most notable, though, is the film’s pathos appeal; with so much tension and so much eventual tragedy, the viewer himself feels the destruction that arises with the hate portrayed in the movie.  Finally, the logos proof is portrayed subtly, yet I believe also in a way open to interpretation.  For instance, after the night of chaos, Sal and Mookie discuss things outside the burnt-down pizzeria and attempt to explain their logic for doing things.  For Sal, breaking the radio demonstrated his authority to make his own rules in his own pizzeria.  For Mookie, the thrown trash can was justified because of Radio Raheem’s unnecessary death.  Each character lays out his reasons, and yet it all turned to chaos regardless.  Take your own logic from that–in the end, it’s still just messy.