Larry Ragan, Director of Faculty Development, asked me to assist in creating a few videos for a workshop that he is running. Here is the first attempt:
Here is the second attempt:
Apart from the eye contact issue (yes, I was reading a teleprompter) does anyone have suggestions on how I can improve?
Wow! That is a very long script.
My first reaction when watching your second attempt was I wasn’t “feeling” what you were trying to say. I guess my suggestion would be to be a better actor – LOL…or practice, practice, practice the script until you know it by heart and can ad lib some stuff to make it seem more real.
Your first attempt was much more believable and natural. Good job!