Dear blog,
After listening to our class’s invigorating elevator pitches, I was posed with the question of which pitch moved me the most. All of the elevator pitches were intriguing and extremely well-spoken. However, Devin’s elevator pitch stood out to me the most. Her delivery was immaculate and the title of her blog, “Would You Care More,” stands out to me because it forces you to think deeper to yourself about her blog content. Devin’s civic artifact speaks to me because of course I care about wildlife animals and preserving their existence, however, I consume fish an excessive amount. I never felt guilty about it prior to listening to her elevator pitch. For some reason, I looked at it with a different perspective rather than consuming cow or chicken. However, I am definitely going to cut back on my shellfish consumption now.
The statistics in her pitch struck me and gave her a sense of ethos because she was invoking credibility in her speech with factual evidence. Devin stated that the fish do not have enough time to reproduce and grow their population in order to sustain the amount that are overfished. She analyzed most people’s thoughts by saying that although we believe the sea is so big for the fish to repopulate, this is not the case.
Lastly, Devin concluded her speech with an extremely meaningful touch. Her sentence that stood out to me the most was, “It is not long before we reach a point of no return.” This forced me to think differently about my choices and to want to act on them. Overall, Devin’s speech was very significant to me and I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it. I cannot wait to indulge in her final product.