After chugging down a lot of medicine because I’m not feeling well again, here’s what I wrote in a medicine-filled stupor.
home.
i never had a concept
of what “home” was
i’ve simply never felt it.
no,
it’s not that i don’t
have a roof
over my
head.
nor that
i don’t have anyone
to care
for me
it’s just that
all these people
who are in my life
either have a hidden agenda
or just walk away and leave.
it’s always felt so cold,
so lonely,
so dark. i wish this wasn’t the case.
i’ve had no consistent relationships.
i’d always ruin them,
destroy them with all my fears and worries.
i always drive people away.
it’s still so cold.
the space is devoid of happiness,
and everywhere i turn,
only more darkness greets me.
but once i moved out for school,
out of that lonely structure
i’m forced to call “home”
i thought it would end. i thought the nightmare
was finally over.
but it never left.
always watching, always lingering.
empty of any warmth i had thoughts
thoughts to end it all.
maybe finally succumb
to what has been waiting for so long.
it took me a while
before i realized the few bonds
that i did have
were strong
and genuine.
finally, a spark erupted,
and for the first time
i truly felt warmth.
the only thing that kept me from taking my life.
one more bond came along,
and that was stronger than any other bond
that i could’ve imagined.
it was genuine. so genuine.
the warmth intensified.
and this feeling unbeknownst to me
followed suit.
but it finally felt like what i’ve been looking for.
finally,
i was home.
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I think your blog overall is really great because it has a personal touch. I really liked how you chose to do a poem for your last post. It is super creative. I think it would be great if you could do an in-depth analysis of the poem, how you came to write it, etc. Just a thought for next time!
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