Introduction Paragraph Revision

In order to be an Olympic athlete, a tremendous amount of hard work, time and energy has to be invested. This work ethic is similar to that of the hardest job in the world; being a mom. Proctor and Gamble’s “Olympic Mom” commercial draws upon this well-known fact in order to portray how important a mother’s job is. The commercial utilizes the virtues and emotions related to moms to influence the audience to purchase these products.

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