Rhetorical Analysis Draft and Speech Outline

What if I told you that seals, gorillas, and bears will all be fables of the past and nothing more than a mere memory to our future generations–would you care? What if I told you that by the time I have finished giving this speech, approximately four species have become extinct–would you care then? Saying this now sounds absurd, but in actuality, these situations are more than probable. More and more, innocent animals around the world are becoming extinct and we have only ourselves to blame. Scholz and Friends created the BUND campaign, “Every 60 seconds, a species goes extinct” which shows a gray seal trapped between the minute and the hour hands of a clock, to show that every minute, another species dies out. The campaign does this to not only stress the severity of species extinction, but also to raise awareness for the dwindling of species on our Earth. The campaign uses lenses such as establishing trust, visual rhetoric, and commonplaces to tug at the viewers heartstrings, convey their message of sustainable practices, and motivate them to make a change. The end goal of any campaign or advertisement is not only to catch the audience’s attention but also to connect with the viewers and hopefully persuade you to invest in or purchase what they are selling. But nobody wants to hand their money over to just anyone–they want to make sure it’s going to someone trustworthy.

Scholz & Friends, which is the organization that created the BUND campaign, was established in 1981 and is one of Europe’s largest advertising agencies, which establishes the company’s credibility. Everyone has felt like a minority at some point in their life, so this feeling of underrepresentation can be related to by the audience. The campaign also helps the audience relate to the seal on an emotional level. The seal is clearly in pain and everyone can relate to this basic emotion on some level. Anyone can assume that the animal is screaming, but because the ad is an image there is no sound. This silence represents the lack of representation that many species have who are yet to be discovered or that we do not fully understand. It is very difficult to estimate the full impact that humans are having on the environment and this silent scream represents that.The campaign does more than just speak at the audience about the problem–it puts a face to mass extinction. By doing this, it is asking the audience to have empathy for these animals and it creates a deeper connection between the audience and the image. It would be hard for an audience not to emphasize the position that the seal has been placed in, through no fault of its own.Although disturbing, the detailed imagery and visual rhetoric used in this campaign most certainly helps the audience to understand the severity of the message through the use of symbolism, small font, and object placement.

The clock is a man-man made artifact, which symbolizes not only time but humans’ involvement in the matter. The size of the clock also emphasizes how urgent the matter is, while doubling as a shield against the people who are causing Earth’s biological timer to speed up.The other major symbol is the seal. It puts a face to this crisis but also acts as an ambassador for all of the other species on Earth whose species are dwindling, especially those that are underrepresented. By comparing the size of the two symbols, this under-representation may be seen visually as well. BUND used small text and a serious tone to write “Each donation counts”, which indicates that only someone who thought that the ad was of importance would read the fine print. BUND did this in hopes that if one cared enough to read the small font, they’d care enough to make a donation. The small lettering also insinuates that this message is more than just words and that in order to understand the severity of the topic, one must see it with their own eyes.The primary colors used within the ad are black and gray, which communicate a dark and somber mood. The only different color is the red of the minute hand, which can be associated with the blood of the seal. This color symbolism contributes to the feeling of urgency communicated by the ad. 

 

Outline:

Introduction

Hook:

  • “What if I told you…”
  • Saying this now sounds absurd, but in actuality, these situations are more than probable

General Info:

  • Introduce Scholz and Friends + campaign
  • Stress severity of species extinction and raises awareness for mass extinction 

Thesis:

  • The campaign uses lenses such as establishing trust, visual rhetoric, and commonplaces to tug at the viewers heartstrings, convey their message of sustainable practices, and motivate them to make a change.

(Transition to establishing trust)

Topic 1: Establishing Trust

Ethos

Credibility: Scholz & Friends, which is the organization that created the BUND campaign, was established in 1981 and is one of Europe’s largest advertising agencies, which establishes the company’s credibility. 

Relatability:

  • Minority and feeling of underrepresentation can be related to from the audience
  • Relate to the seal on an emotional level
  •  Silence represents the lack of representation of other species

Pathos

Empathy:

  • Puts a face to mass extinction
  • Creates empathy for these animals + deeper connection between the audience and the image

(Transition to visual rhetoric) 

Topic 2: Visual Rhetoric – Describe the advertisement

Symbolism:

Clock:

  • Clock is a man-man made artifact–symbolizes not only time but humans’ involvement
  • The size of the clock

Seal:

  • Ambassador for all of the other species on Earth whose numbers are dwindling
  • Represents the under-represented

Font

Small lettering:

  • “Each donation counts”
  • Only someone who thought that the ad was of importance would read the fine print
  • Care enough to make a donation if you read it.
  • Ad is more than words 

Color Theory:

  • Black and gray–dark and somber mood
  • Red of the minute hand–associated with the blood of the seal
  • Creates feeling of urgency communicated by the ad.

(Transition to temporal thinking)

Topic 3: Meta-Competency

Temporal Thinking: 

  • Define temporal thinking
  • Set stakes, create sense of urgency
  • “Every 60 seconds…”
  • Forces audience to think long term

Conclusion

  • Re-establish thesis
  • Brief overview of everything
  • Call to action
  • Closing remarks + thank you

How to Deal with The Sunday Scaries

How to Fight Off the Sunday Scaries – Cleveland Clinic

One of the least fun feelings in the world is dealing with the dreaded feeling of the Sunday Scaries. It can be quite a daunting experience that never fully allows you to enjoy your last day of the weekend, knowing that you have to return to your obligations the next day. And I know I for one like to savor my Sundays without having to think about the impending tasks I have to complete for the week ahead.

I’ll admit it, this Sunday, I had a lethal case of The Scaries. So with this blog in mind, instead of laying around in bed all day and not being productive, I decided to do things that would help me prepare for the week ahead. If all you can think about is the upcoming week ahead on one of your few days off, I’m going to be sharing a couple tips to help rid the Sunday Scaries away and to make your Sundays a little less overwhelming (hopefully). 

The first thing that I did was I figured out what was causing these said “scaries” and I planned my schedule for the week. Even just by completing such a simple task, I was able to ease my stress by a landslide. This helped me make sure that I had a solid and reasonable plan and definitely made me feel more prepared stepping into the new week. By planning out your tasks, it helps reduce stress, increase productivity, promote mindfulness, and most importantly, it helps you achieve your goals.  

The second thing that I did was I cleaned and organized my room. I know, gross. I’ll be the first to admit that I hate cleaning, but likewise, I feel better about myself when I get to come home to a clean space. So I did some laundry, watered my plants, dusted a little, and put on a fun playlist to try and make the time go by a little quicker. 

The last thing that I did, and my favorite of them all, was simply doing nothing. If and when I can, I like to relax at the end of my days. So after being productive and preparing for the week, I decided to treat myself. I put on a facemask, comfy clothes, my latest Netflix obsession, and let myself unwind. This is the best way to end your day and is such a healthy way to clear your head and put yourself first.

When it comes down to it, I found that preparation is key to dealing with the Sunday Scaries and that you don’t always have to hit the books to help ease the stress of the impending week. I hope this post has given you some ideas to better deal with that dreaded Sunday feeling and that your next Sunday is anything but scary, and always remember to take care of yourself :).

RCL Introduction

 

WWF Tigers on Twitter: "i am neither a rug NOR medicine. And I am only a  status symbol when I am ALIVE and adding beauty to nature.  http://t.co/RYiIR3gZ" / TwitterBUND Seal

What if I told you that in the amount of time that it will take for me to pitch this proposal, a species will have died out–would you care? What about if I told you that tigers, rhinos, and elephants will all be fables of the past to our future generations–would you care then? Saying this now sounds absurd, but in actuality, these situations are more than probable. More and more, innocent animals around the world are becoming extinct and there is only one person to blame–us. The BUND campaign and The World Wildlife Fund created these advertisements to stress the severity of species extinction and to raise awareness for the dwindling of species on our Earth. Both campaigns use lenses such as establishing trust, visual rhetoric, and commonplaces to tug at the viewers heartstrings, and motivate them to make a change. 

 

The Pina Colada Song

Escape (The Piña Colada Song) - Wikipedia

When I was in sixth grade, I took my very first major exam, a midterm to be exact. I had never taken a test as long or important as this one up until this point in my life. I studied, I read, I reviewed, and did all the things that I thought were absolutely necessary for me to do well on this exam. I did not in fact do well on this exam, and unfortunately for me, this is when I realized that I am an awful test-taker. Luckily, this was also the day that I realized something much more valuable than doing well on any test or midterm that I might encounter–I learned a way to cope with failure. 

When I went home and told my parents the dreaded news, I expected a bit of disappointment, but to my sixth grade self’s surprise, they had a completely different reaction. They were happy that I had tried my best and did all that I could do. This was lovely to hear, and I was happy that they weren’t upset, but I still felt like I had let myself down. So I sat down on our brown leather couch and I simply just layed there. 

I layed there as my mom cooked dinner in the kitchen while listening to her music as she always did. On this particular night, she happened to be listening to what would later become my forever favorite stress relieving tune–The Pina Colada Song by Rupert Holmes. I don’t know what it was about this song, whether it was the beat, the lyrics, the rhythm, or everything combined, but it seriously made all of my stress go away in just a short four minutes and fifty-six seconds. You might even say that it was absolute music to my ears ;).

But this was the day that I learned that music can not only be an immediate stress reliever, but also that it can have a profound impact on us and our emotions. I don’t know if everyone would consider listening to music a way of engaging in self-care but I know that I do. Music is a way to distract ourselves and our minds from anything that might be going on in our lives, and it is actually proven to reduce our anxiety and blood pressure, and improve our moods. 

I got the idea for this blog after I was walking to my second class of the day after missing my first because I locked myself out of my dorm this morning. My day started off far from great and I knew that, if nothing else, I could rely on Mr. Rupert Holmes to give me a little boost of serotonin. 

So next time you’re feeling down, having a bad day, or simply just need a way to escape reality for a little, listen to your forever favorite stress relieving song to ease your mind and take care of yourself (you already know what song I’d suggest :)).

Journaling

I had a very rough day today. 

I honestly wish I had more reasons that could validate how I’m feeling in this moment. I wish I could say that I stubbed my toe too hard, or that the worker at Roots got my order wrong at lunch, or that the ground caved in from under me when I was walking back from class. At least this way, I wouldn’t feel so guilty when I say that I had a bad day. Because in reality, it wasn’t an Earth shatteringly awful day, and I know that I’ve got it pretty easy compared to a lot of people–I’m simply just stressed. The most stressed I’ve probably ever been in my life. I’m still learning how to go about this college thing, as most of us are. I’m figuring out the right times to study, the right times to work ahead, and especially the right times to just take a break. With this blog in mind, I tried something new today, a new form of self-care…I journaled!

I had absolutely no expectations going into this. With an open mind, I grabbed the nearest pen and paper I had, and I just started to write. I wrote about every single little detail and thought that could’ve possibly popped into my head. The comical ones; the important ones; and even the most minute ones. I wrote for about 20 minutes or so until I couldn’t think of anything else I had to say. 

By the end of it, I can confidently say that I felt less stressed. It was a way for me to process all of the emotions that I’ve been feeling for the past month and release them, which I haven’t genuinely done since coming to college. I quickly realized that I could be as blunt, harsh, and honest as I wanted to be and I didn’t have to worry about the opinions from anyone else. I didn’t have to censor what I said or fear what someone else would think, and I LOVED every second of it!

There is no question that the first semester of college is the hardest of them all. We’re all trying to navigate our way around and figure out what works best for us, in hopes that we’ll graduate, get a good job, and do all the things. I’m not special for the stress that I’m feeling, and I know that close to 46,000 others who surround me on this campus are feeling the same way that I am. But if I can gain anything from doing this blog, I hope to learn how to manage any negative feelings that may arise during this year. I also need to remember to make myself, and my well-being, a priority, and I hope that anyone who reads this remembers that too.

Elevator Pitch Feedback

A student’s elevator pitch that intrigued me was Leo’s. His hook was not only relatable, but it was humorous and caught the attention of the entire audience. He skillfully used imagery and descriptive wording to set a scene that the whole class could picture instantly. I don’t remember his exact words, but he asked us all a question at the end of his hook, and I remember how it made me feel: inquisitive and uncomfortable. 

I was familiar with the Kendall Jenner Pepsi commercial disaster, but not to a great extent. Leo quickly and effectively broke down the entire advertisement, explaining what was going on, what the attempted purpose of it was, and why it was a complete flop–all while simultaneously keeping his entire pitch light-hearted, which is impressive considering the topic. I also like that he chose an artifact that was of relevance and included someone (Kendall Jenner) that everyone in the class was familiar with. 

Another reason that his pitch stuck out to me was because it was different from everyone else’s in the sense that it analyzed the failure of a civic artifact, not the success. He talked about how the commercial used the rhetorical situation lens and the negative reactions it received from those who watched it–so bad to the point where Pepsi had to release a formal apology. 

All in all, Leo’s elevator pitch provided a meaningful connection between his topic and the audience. He was well prepared, knew the information that he was presenting, and never lost my attention once.

Elevator Pitch Proposal

Every 60 Seconds a Species Dies Out | Rhetoric and Civic Life

In the amount of time that it will take for me to pitch this proposal, a species will have died out. Scholz and Friends is a company based in Berlin who created the BUND campaign to stress the severity of species extinction. This relates to Sustainable Development Goal 15, which addresses the promotion and protection of habitat diversity loss. The ad shows a graphic image of a gray seal, which is an endangered species, getting crushed between the minute and the hour hands of a clock to show that every minute, another species becomes extinct. 

Although disturbing, the detailed imagery and visual rhetoric used in this campaign most certainly helps the audience to understand the severity of the message by appealing to pathos. Scholz and Friends is one of Europe’s largest advertising agencies and they are extremely credible, which helps to establish the readers trust through ethos. The ad uses font and text to get their primary goals across, which are to raise awareness for the dwindling of species on our Earth, and also to persuade the viewers to make a donation to help support the cause. BUND used small text and a serious tone to write “Each donation counts”, which indicates that only someone who thought that the ad was of importance would read the fine print. BUND did this in hopes that if one cared enough to read the small font, they’d care enough to make a donation. The small lettering also insinuates that this message is more than just words and that in order to understand the severity of the topic, one must see it with their own eyes. By putting a face to the issue, it tugs at the viewer’s heartstrings and creates empathy within them, which means they’ll be more likely to do something to make a change. Another way that the campaign uses visual rhetoric is through symbolism. The seal is trapped between the two hands of a clock, showing the time is of the essence, and it is running out quickly. The fact that the seal is stuck in a clock, which is a man-made artifact, also insinuates that species dying out is from human causes. 

The purpose of the ad “Every 60 Seconds A Species Dies Out” is to raise awareness for the species that are becoming extinct, but on a broader scale, to promote the urgency of the protection of habitat diversity loss around the world. Not only does this ad use a Ways of Establishing Trust Lens, but it also uses a Visual Rhetoric Lens as well. 

The analysis I’ll reveal is relevant to society today because it is an urgent issue and extinction rates are the highest that they have ever been, and they are only continuing to increase. Despite this, there is still time. There is still time to change our behaviors, help restore and protect animal populations, and turn back the clock. 

Thank you. 

 

Questions: Is my language choice too casual in the beginning? Is there anything that I didn’t touch upon that I should talk about more?

 

Self Care

Self care. 

Two words that I realized I used to take for granted until coming to college. Before coming to Penn State, all I had was time. Time to waste trying out new skin care products, mindlessly watching reality television until my eyes fell out, or even napping whenever I pleased. At the time, I viewed these habits as lazy, and for lack of a better word, careless. The irony is that these actions couldn’t have been less careless and that they were indeed necessary for my well-being.  

I love self care. In fact, I look forward to when I get to have a little “me time” and do absolutely nothing for a little while. That being said, I think that there is often a misconception when it comes to self care–that it’s selfish. In society, if we are not being active or doing something “productive” with our time, we can be seen as lethargic. Engaging in any form of self care improves one’s overall quality of life, and it can help prevent burnout (which I worry I’ll experience sometime during my time here). 

It’s easy to get swept up in everyday life, and especially being a college student, I find myself lucky if I have any extra time to do anything besides the bare necessities. But, it is important to remember to always prioritize yourself above all else. I personally believe that the key to living not only a happy life but a healthy one too, is taking the time to engage in self care. Even the busiest person on Earth can take five minutes to practice deep breaths or journal for a little while. Self care looks different for everyone, and what might work for you might not work for another, but that’s the best part about it! Whenever you feel overwhelmed or like you just need to take a step back, there are countless ways that one can engage in self care and do something that eases your stress. Exercising, meditating, taking a shower, listening to your favorite music, hanging out with friends, and yes, even sleeping are all simple forms of self care that can make all the difference in one’s life. 

Taking care of and reminding yourself that you are just as important as all of the other things that you have going on in your life is essential. When you partake in any form of self care, you are sending a message to yourself that you deserve to be cared for. We want to make sure that throughout life, our best foot goes forward. Self care ensures not only that, but also that you care for your mind, your body, and your soul.

Commonplaces in Advertising

There are so many hiccups that marketers run into when creating  an advertisement. They need to not only reach their target audience, but must appeal to their emotions, influence them to buy the product, and be better than their competitors, all before losing your attention. But that’s why marketers use commonplaces in their ads; because they are an effective way to compel and persuade the people watching to buy what they’re selling. Or even just to have their message resonate with the audience.

If you have an online shopping addiction (it’s ok I do too), you’ve probably seen an ad from Revolve at least once in your life. Their slogan is “If you love it, buy it <3 (before someone else does). This little tagline that they use is so effective for many reasons. The main one being that it ignites a sense of obligation in the viewer that they have to buy this product and they have to buy it QUICK before anyone else gets their hands on it! We’ve all heard of FOMO and no one ever wants to feel like the person who won’t fit in because they won’t have that new top that the were browsing earlier and didn’t buy.

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I don’t know if appealing to an audiences fear of missing out is always the most effective way to advertise, but it sure worked for Revolve. Their slogan creates a sense of urgency in the audience because they know that you don’t want to be the one who isn’t in on all of the newest trends. Fashion brands in general know how to persuade and they do it well because they know that everyone needs clothes. But Revolve, along with the majority of other fashions brands, have taken to social media because they know that it’s a quick and extremely effective way to get a viewers attention fast. You don’t even need to watch a commercial, just stare at your screen and read the words…it’s that simple!

Possible Passions

What am I passionate about?

What I thought would be a simple question, had me sitting here for way longer than I’d like to admit, thinking deeply about what I care about. I soon realized that this is tough because I care about a lot of things. When I started trying to come up with ideas, I found myself confusing my interests with my passions. But the longer I thought about it, I came to the conclusion that a passion holds much more significant meaning and importance in my life and they make me who I am. So, with much deliberation, I’ve narrowed it down to two topics that bring me genuine joy every time without fail.

For my first topic idea, I would talk about the importance of prioritizing self-care and call it something like “Self-Care Isn’t Selfish”. Since coming to Penn State, now more than ever, I’ve realized the importance of taking care of yourself first. Mainly because before college, all I had was time. Time to waste doing face masks, mindlessly watch reality television for hours, or even just nap when I felt tired. But now, I find myself lucky if I can carve out time to do anything besides my homework. There is an underlying theme in society that we must constantly be productive. We must constantly be active, busy, or engaging in some form of activity, and if we aren’t, we’re seen as lethargic. I see this as a complete misconception. The most productive thing that we as humans can do for ourselves is simply to put ourselves above all else. Taking time to engage in self-care is crucial to living a happy and healthy life and has so many benefits on our mental, physical, and emotional health. And as corny as this may sound, life is beautiful and it deserves to be savored, and you can only love everything around you as much as you love yourself. Sooooo, prioritize self-care!

For my second topic idea, I could talk about the value of watching movies. I know that may sound dumb but just hear me out. When COVID first happened, I was not only bored constantly, but I found myself needing an escape. Of course I had watched movies before the pandemic but I truly began to appreciate film when I had nothing better to do but sit in my living room with my family and binge watch movies together until our eyes fell out. They became a free form of therapy for me, and I knew that, if nothing else, I could always count on Netflix or HBO Max to improve my mood and get me out of my head (even if just for an hour or two). I personally think that movies are the best form of entertainment and they always help me relax when I need it. For the blog, I could call it something like “Movie Buff” or “The Blog of a Film Junkie” (details are still being worked out lol).