I think that my points were fine- I don’t think that they were amazing, but they were at least decent. I was a little nervous about my pronunciation of kairos and I actually cannot remember how I pronounced it in the speech- I did about five tries before getting that particular slide finished how I liked it. I do agree with Chris’s comment that I needed better tonal indicators- that’s definitely something for me to improve upon in the future. I think that my breaking it up into slides corresponding to my topic in the parts of the speech was really good for me, as if I messed up something I didn’t have to redo the entire thing. I was worried about getting it up to snuff time-wise, but I didn’t have any issue and even went over into grace period.
I took inspiration from you when crafting my speech and broke mine apart, which was super helpful for me! Your speech was great and don’t look down on yourself, you did a great job!
I think you did a great job on your speech! You made plenty of excellent points regarding what you think you could improve, but I definitely think it’s important to recognize where you did well, too! 🙂
It’s great to hear that you agree with my feedback! When I was watching your speech, I didn’t know that you used so many slides because you found they made it easier to break up your ideas. That seems like a tip I might implement in the future.