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A Clean Performance about Toothbrushes – RCL Speech 1

I think I performed well, but there is always room for improvement in every performance. This was by no means a perfect performance, but I think I am heading in the right direction.

To start, I think my strong suit was eye contact. When preparing for this speech, I tried to memorize what I wrote, that way I could just speak straight to the camera. There were moments when I would look down to read some notes to get myself back on track, but I made good eye contact for the most part.

Although, memorizing the speech also lead to some uncertainty in my annunciation. There were many times when I would say “um” or pause because I was uncertain about the line to follow. I could have improved upon this by doing a better job of memorizing my speech. There were moments where I would speak really well because I remembered that part of the speech better (overall enjoying that part of the speech more), and then there were moments where I would constantly trip up my speech.

Another mistake I made with annunciation was speaking “from my throat.” When I say this, I mean that I began to speak in a timid way that made my voice sound stressed. This made my speech sound a little less smooth. I could have improved upon this by becoming more comfortable while I was speaking, and I could have taken more time to stop and breathe.

One part I did not notice till after was that the angle of the camera was a bit unflattering. I had the camera a bit below my face, so it was in a bit of an awkward angle. This could have been fixed by having the camera level with my face.

Watching my performance has been helpful for fully understanding how I performed. Using the insight which I just gained, I now know what I can improve on in speeches that I will give in years ahead.

A Clockwork Orange is a Thrill Ride on Acid

Never in a million years would 7-year-old me believe that I would eventually enjoy reading a 450 page book. When I was young, I had a really difficult time learning to read. I would have a hard time processing what I read; I would say the words but not actually know what I was saying. I would have to read slow to process, and I’d still miss stuff in between. Throughout elementary and middle school, I would get really frustrated with myself because of this, and I came to detest reading.

Although something began to click in high school. As I read more (because of required reading) and as I became older, my comprehension began to improve. What was most pivotal was that we began reading good books: Fahrenheit 451, Frankenstein, The Great Gatsby, Catcher in the Rye, Catch-22. I began to understand and visualize what was happening in these books. I could see, smell, taste, sense, hear, feel. Reading became a form of getting away from the real world, immersing in a new world. But the book that pushed it over the edge for me was Anthony Burgess’s 1962 novel, A Clockwork Orange

A Clockwork Orange is an extremely complex book with symbolism running rampant and suspense that causes brain aneurysms. The plot is extremely enticing every step of the way.

I won’t get too deep into the plot, but the portion I found most enticing was the Ludovico technique. Alex, the protagonist that lives in dystopian England where the youth overtake society with violence each night, is taken to jail and selected for this Ludovico technique. For this “technique”, Alex is forced to view videos of violence and sex while injected with a poisonous substance, conditioning Alex to correlate being sick with acting immorally. After all the scenes of violence and rape that are performed by Alex and his gang, these scenes where Alex is forced to watch these videos feels the most gruesome yet. This ties into the concept that Alex is also the narrator, and he cleverly convinces his audience to root for him despite the horrible deeds that he commits. Afterwards, the technique works, and Alex becomes sick every time that he thinks of committing an immoral act. This then dives into the question of being human and the concept of a clockwork orange: to be human means free will to choose both bad and good, being only good or only bad would no longer make us human. I just found this whole portion of the book to be extremely tantalizing, making me really ponder my own humanity and excited to find out what happens next.

But this novel is so much more than just the plot. Symbolism and easter eggs are planted throughout the novel. There are so many that I can’t cover all of them, but I figured I’d talk about the ones I love the most.

First and foremost, the novel inside of a novel just astounds me. During his prime in raiding houses and causing mischief, Alex and his gang raids the house of an author, named F. Alexander, of a book named A Clockwork Orange. Yes, the book is inside a book. And yes, the author has a similar name to the narrator, Alec, of the actual novel. The contents of the book inside the book are never truly revealed except for a definition of a clockwork orange. This suggestion of some connection between the two characters is never fully answered, leaving great ambiguity for the reader to interpret. I found this to be mind boggling, leading the reader to want more and drive deeper into analysis and debate.

Oh yeah, there is also essentially a whole new language, called Nadsat, within the novel. Nadsat is a slang used among the mischievous youth in the novel. This adds a layer of disorientation for the reader at the beginning of the novel, but the reader comes to learn this language. This is much more convoluted than it seems. The concept of Nadsat is used as a motif throughout the novel, adding a dimension of character identity and establishing new means for both character divisions and connections. In learning the language, the reader is further connected with the narrator Alex because this slag gives us a way to understand and think like Alex. Not to mention the language also adds a layer of comedy, as the people who speak in Nadsat sound ridiculous.

All this only brushes the surface of the amazing aspects of this book. For a book of such magnitude (in terms of content), there are years and years’ worth of analysis that go into fully depicting the novel’s entirety. A Clockwork Orange is a thrill ride on acid. Once you start reading it, you’ll constantly be thinking about it, debating what you just read and wanting to read more.

Reading is amazing, there is so much that can be depicted through the written word. Whole new worlds can be comprised within a novel. Books can be anything you want them to be and there is so much variety that you can choose what fits you best. Anything from learning history to contemplating philosophical life questions. Reading allows us to indulge in the human condition and understand everything that we face in humanity. Although it may take some, like me, more time to adjust than other, I think everyone can come to appreciate literature at some point.

Toothbrush Speech – Outline

  1. Intro
    1. Hook: Could you ever imagine using a twig to clean your teeth? For somebody like you or me, the only way to clean your teeth is with a toothbrush.
    2. Transition: In the Western world, the toothbrush is a staple of the modern home, everyone is expected to brush their teeth twice a day with a toothbrush. Although the role of the toothbrush varies around the world. There are many parts of the world don’t use the alleged “modern methods” of oral hygiene. Furthermore, the toothbrush is a genius idea, but it also isn’t completely perfect for the future of our environment.
  2. Body
    1. Quick History (Extrinsic Proofs)
      • Kairos: Toothbrush is the product of the need to stay healthy >>> oral health
      • Egypt and “chew sticks” (twigs from certain trees with natural chemicals in them that help with cavity prevention and whitening of teeth)
      • 13th century China >>> first toothbrush made of bamboo
      • William Addis, 1780 >>> first mass-produced toothbrush
    2. Toothbrush Today (Intrinsic proof as evident by the experiences of the audience)
      • Possible child’s dentist video to demonstrate toothbrush commonplaces
      • New advancements >>> now synthetics and plastics
      • Civic: Everyone owns a toothbrush, everyone is expected to have a toothbrush
      • Ideology: You must have clean teeth, and the only way to do that is with a toothbrush: freshens breath, removes food remnants from teeth, cleans sugars off teeth (which is vital for a common American diet that is loaded with processed sugars)
      • Commonplace: “brush twice a day” is conditioned into the minds of the nation at a young age. White teeth as “beautiful” teeth
    3. “Non-toothbrush Nations” & Waste from Toothbrushes (Extrinsic Proofs)
      • The toothbrush takes on different levels of relevance across the globe
      • Modern chew sticks: parts of Africa and the Middle East (specifically known as “miswak” in Muslim cultures, taken from arak trees)
      • Being made of plastics and synthetics, toothbrushes are contributing to the world’s huge landfill of plastics
      • Eco-friendlier means needed >>> i.e.: bamboo toothbrush
  3. Conclusion
    1. Summary: Here in the U.S. we have become accustomed to everyone brushing their teeth with a toothbrush and toothpaste. Oral hygiene is vital, and the toothbrush a great means for doing so.
    2. CTA: But this isn’t all as peachy as it may seem. There are millions and billions of toothbrushes in the world, and likewise they don’t necessarily disappear. Unlike the chew stick and the miswak, discarded toothbrushes aren’t exactly the best for the environment. The need for oral hygiene is still very prevalent and growing, and so is the demand for toothbrushes. Likewise, it is important to keep people brushing their teeth, but it is also important that we, as a society, seek out and be open-minded to ways of making the toothbrush eco-friendlier.
    3. THANK YOU!

The Emotion Upheaval-Trance of Queen’s “Bohemian Rhapsody”

Music, it’s universal. It seems as though there is some type of music for everyone, there is so much variety that there enough to go around. Well, not for me, at least not four years ago.

When I was in middle school I never really got into music. Sure, I would listen to it when it was on the radio during bus rides and stuff like that, but I never really went out of my way to just listen to music. It wasn’t until I went to high school and met new people, and then the question came up: “what type of music do you listen to?” This is when it hit me, I was missing out on music. I started asking my friends for some songs, but my love for music hadn’t solidified till the day of my last midterm of freshman year. Leading up to these midterms, I had been super stressed because I had never taken exams of such magnitude. Strenuous two hour exams back to back for a full week, constant hours of study, I was exhausted. After completing the exams and returning home, I was in utter nirvana. The first thing I did when I got home was turn on a song from my friend Anthony called “Bohemian Rhapsody.” This song coupled with my built-up emotions from the week prior absolutely blew my mind.

In listening to “Bohemian Rhapsody,” I found myself in a trance. The ominous yet enticing intro plays, striking a question of reality versus fantasy after a chaotic event. Then a narrative of a person who views himself as a child begins as he addresses a life mistake he has made, his apology, his acceptance of the repercussions, and his struggles with all of life. The inflection in the voice of the speaker illuminates the deep distress of the situation. Everything mixes so well in this song to the point that it brings the listener into a different reality, an emotional rollercoaster. The constant shifts in melody and lyrical tone lead each part to be more intense. Shifting from classic rock to opera to hard rock. The shift from opera to hard rock is, for me, the overarching volta of the song, breaking from strain and question to upheaval and invigorating fury. Whether or not you are a fan of hard rock, you become engulfed by the power that this part of the song manifests. And then with one last shift to a calm pace and a hit on a gong, the listener is brought back to reality. Within six minutes, the listener has witnessed every emotion of life.

My ignorance towards music was history after hearing this song. My eyes have been opened to the cosmic power that music can hold. Music is so much more than sounds. Music can bring feelings, emotions, experiences, stories, image, and more. Music really is universal, there is a reason that cultures all over the world and all throughout history have taken music into such great consideration. An artist can depict ways of life and views of the world through music. Art is all about sending a message, and music can do so in many ways. This can be indirect, like adding to the ambiance of a wedding, or direct, like “Bohemian Rhapsody.” Queen, specifically Freddie Mercury, takes on this concept of messages in music by incorporating the strain and difficulties of life that he has faced into this song.

Needless to say, I’ve gotten into music ever since then. The Beatles, Led Zeppelin, Seal, Tame Impala, John Mayer, MGMT, Pink Floyd, and a bunch of other songs from random bands. I’ve most recently been listening to Coldplay as a throwback, “Paradise” and “The Scientist” are probably my favorites so far. I’ve also gotten a splash of classic music, but that may be a story for another time. Music is really good; everyone should go and explore different music. Try new things, you may never know what you like till you try it.

Brush Twice a Day, or Just Stop by Your Local Arak Tree

The toothbrush – a staple of the modern home. Brush your teeth twice a day, don’t forget to rinse out after. But how much of a “staple” is it? Maybe in the Western world, but toothbrushes are not as widespread as you’d think. Here in the U.S. we have become accustomed to everyone brushing their teeth with a toothbrush and toothpaste, but many parts of the world don’t use the alleged “modern methods” of oral hygiene.

But let’s start with the origin of the toothbrush, or more specifically oral hygiene. Oral hygiene has been in existence for a long time, but in different form then what we see today. Dating back to ancient Egypt in 5000 BC, people used to clean their teeth with “chew sticks,” which are twigs that are chewed on to create a frayed end. These sticks were often picked from certain trees with natural chemicals in them, like fluoride, to help with cavity prevention and whitening of teeth. As oral hygiene began to spread, different civilizations adapted means for cleaning their teeth. It wasn’t till the 13th century in China that an object similar to the modern toothbrush was created, made of stiff boar hairs attached to bamboo sticks. As this appliance was replicated through the ages, the first official toothbrush was created with a bone and boar hairs by an Englishman named William Addis while he was in prison. After leaving prison, Addis began to mass-produce these contraptions, establishing the household appliance that is the toothbrush. From there, the toothbrush continued to grow throughout the ages, becoming an essential in Western Culture. Now, most toothbrushes are made of synthetic materials and different varieties have been created, such as the electric toothbrushes.

Here in the U.S., the toothbrush is necessity. This commonplace of “brush twice a day” is conditioned into the minds of the nation at a young age. And rightfully so, brushing your teeth is very helpful in everyday life. It freshens breath, removes food remnants from teeth, cleans sugars off teeth (which is vital for a common American diet that is loaded with processed sugars). This also ties into the commonplace that white teeth are beautiful. Not to mention the prevention of oral damage is very beneficial when trying to maintain good health.

Although, this is only one very specific lineage of oral hygiene specific to Western Culture. There have been several mechanisms/means for “brushing your teeth” throughout the world. In fact, chew sticks are still widely used in parts of Africa and the Middle East (specifically known as “miswak” in Muslim cultures, taken from arak trees). Just like many other artifacts, the toothbrush is continuing to spread with the spread of Western Culture. More and more cultures are adapting the toothbrush into their modern lifestyle.

But this isn’t all as peachy as it may seem. There are millions and billions of toothbrushes in the world, and likewise they don’t necessarily disappear. Being made of plastics and synthetics, discarded toothbrushes aren’t exactly the best for the environment. Unlike the chew stick and the miswak, toothbrushes are contributing to the world’s huge landfill of plastics. The need for oral hygiene is still very prevalent and growing, and so is the demand for toothbrushes. Likewise, it is important to keep people brushing their teeth, but it is also important that we, as a society, seek out and be open-minded to ways of making the toothbrush eco-friendlier.

Party Please! – Penn State as “#1 Party School”

Being voted number one party school in 2009 according to The Princeton Review, it is suitable that Penn State follows many commonplaces of “leisurely” college life. When envisioning college life, partying often comes to mind. People always have these crazy stories of what they did or saw in college. In our society, college is often associated with “living while you’re young.” Penn State is no exception to this commonplace, many students tend to choose Penn State because of its reputation for partying and binge drinking. Moreover, these commonplaces surrounding partying are very prevalent within the student body of Penn State.

Listening to This American Life’s podcast “#1 Party School” did not come as any surprise to me. Many of the commonplaces expressed within the podcast have been brought to my attention before: binge drinking is viewed as “welcomed” and “wholesome,” keep-it-cheap mentality when buying things (specifically drinks), tailgating, extremely hype football games, late night weekends, the list goes on.

These commonplaces form an ideology on Penn State’s campus that living is partying. I remember when I began telling people that I committed to Penn State, the phrase of “big party school, huh?” always came up. This also expands into the commonplace that I have heard on numerous occasions, that Penn State is in the middle of nowhere so there is nothing else to do except party by night. From my experience, you cannot have a conversation about Penn State without mentioning the football games and the parties. And from living on campus, I can tell the mentality of party life is still alive and well, despite the hurdles this year has presented.

It is not that any of this is special to Penn State, every school has an aspect of party life indented into its ideology of campus life. Moreover, Penn State is not limited to its party life. Penn State is bustling with a huge variety of programs and opportunities on campus. Simple commonplaces like DP Dough as the go-to calzone place downtown, and Astro-7n as the video game class, attribute to the ideology of life at Penn State. Penn State, like every other school, may be a party school, but it is also so much more.