Question 3: John Fetterman’s Visit for PSU Votes

Pennsylvania Lieutenant Governor John Fetterman discussed how he wasn’t a voter and not civically engaged when he was in college. What do you think makes civic engagement more pressing for young people? What could make young people even more engaged?

Civic engagement is crucial for the younger population because we are the future. Our generation holds so much power, if only we maximize it to its full potential. Growing up, we may have started to form our own opinions, but it was the adults who made all the decisions. Now, as we venture into young adulthood, it is easier for our voices to be heard.

I turned 18 back in May, which meant that the 2020 Presidential Election was the first election I could vote in. If I could’ve chosen any election to be my first, this would’ve been the one! It was exciting to cast my absentee ballot from college; it made me feel like I was making a difference. Many people in my age group have the misconception that one vote isn’t very significant in the grand scheme of things, which prompts them to abstain from voting. However, if this is a widespread mentality, and many people continue to assume that their one vote doesn’t matter, a substantial amount of votes are being lost.

I think my generation has improved immensely with civic involvement due to the chaos that was this year. Out of all of my friends that I talked to, I don’t know a single one who didn’t vote in this election, regardless of which candidate they chose. The civic issues we are currently faced with, such as the Black Lives Matter movement, are issues we are passionate about and we want to see change. This movement was definitely a motivating factor for the young adult population to vote.

How did we get young people to become more civically aware and involved this year? Appeal to your audience. Social media is a great way to promote awareness to the younger generation. For example, one of my friends gained an enormous platform in a short amount of time because of her passion and dedication to advocating for the Black Lives Matter movement as well as orchestrating the protest in Washington DC. (Yes, the protest in DC. That was my friend!) As for me personally, I advocated for my beliefs through Instagram and Twitter, learned of protest locations through Instagram and Snapchat, watched videos that spread awareness on TikTok, and gained further information from reliable sources and politicians on Twitter as well. Despite its flaws, social media is a place where we can come together as a community to educate and advocate for our civic issues and duties.

Overall, I am proud to say that I believe this generation is trending in the right direction when it comes to civic involvement. Is there more that could be done? Absolutely. If we continue to utilize reliable social media platforms to appeal to our generation and change the narrative that votes don’t matter, I think our future is on track to be a bright one.

Paradigm Shift Essay

Run Like A Girl

By: Zoey Goldstein

 

The year was 2018. Adrenaline was coursing through my veins and my hands were trembling as I placed my fingers behind the line and adjusted my feet in the blocks. In the seconds before the gun went off, my body was poised, like a slingshot pulled back and stretched to its capacity, ready to be released. This was the biggest crowd I’d ever raced in front of, the highest stakes I’d ever competed under. The gun sounded and it was though my legs were moving on autopilot. I was in lane 8, running blindly the first leg of the fastest heat of the women’s 4×4 at New Balance Nationals. Knowing I was racing some of the fastest quarter-mile runners in the country, my coach’s words repeated in my head, “They are going to pass you. When they do, don’t freak out, just stay as close to them as you can.” As I neared the 200 meter mark without yet being overtaken, I started to second guess myself and wonder whether or not the gun had been fired twice, indicating a false start and for the runners to return to the starting line. How else could I possibly still be ahead? As I rounded the final turn, one of my competitors finally came into view. It was a lactic acid induced battle as we hurdled ourselves down the final straightaway, neck and neck. It was hard to tell who handed off the baton first, but I later discovered that we both ran 54-second splits, the fastest split of my entire track career. When our anchor leg crossed the finish line, we became All-Americans; running the third fastest 4×4 time in the nation. It was a surreal experience, one of the proudest moments of my life, and one that, if it were 100 years prior, likely never could have occurred. My name is Zoey Goldstein and I am currently a member of the Penn State track and field team. My sport is my passion and a huge part of my identity. If I had been born in the early 20th century, however, my identity would have been entirely different.

 

The year is 1918. For most women, the only running allowed was running a load of laundry. None of my track experiences would have been possible for me had I been alive back then.. During this time period, women’s role in society was mainly to be a good wife, have children, be a good mother, and cook and clean. Women were thought of as the “weaker sex”, both in terms of physical strength and in terms of intelligence. As a result, it was thought that the woman’s place was in the home, not in the workplace. If they did work outside of the home, it was often in clerical and teaching positions or in factories and clothing mills. Their choice of work was limited by misconceptions about their strength. For example, they were prohibited from working in jobs that involved lifting anything that weighed as little as 15 pounds (WIC 2020). This attitude transferred into the sports arena too. A stigma existed. Telling a boy, “you run like a girl” was an insult, implying that they could not run fast, that they ran like “sissies”. In addition, there was a concern that participating in athletics would compromise a woman’s ability to have children and, therefore, make her less attractive to men (Schwarb Summer 2019). So, while there were some women in sports during this time frame, it was not the norm. 

 

As women fought for and then won the right to vote in 1920, women started to pursue new job opportunities typically reserved for men (WIC 2020). The world began to open up for women in America and that world included competitive sports. As more women participated in sports, perception began to change, but it was slow. Mildred Ella Didrikson, who became known as Babe Didrikson, excelled in golf, basketball, baseball, and track and field. At the 1932 Olympics, she won gold medals in both the hurdles and the javelin, and a silver medal for the high jump. She continued her athletic career focusing on golf and helped establish the Ladies Professional Golf Association (LPGA) in 1950, and won 14 consecutive golf tournaments at the height of her career. These amazing accomplishments were overshadowed, though, by public criticism that she was not feminine enough. This prompted Babe to take classes to learn how to be more lady-like, wear make-up, style her hair, and dress like a lady to try and fit the societal mold (KNBR 2020).

 

When did things begin to improve for women in sports? June 23, 1972. On that day, President Nixon signed Title IX of the Education Amendments of 1972 into law. Title IX stated that, “No person in the United States shall, on the basis of sex, be excluded from participation in, be denied the benefits of, or be subjected to discrimination under any education program or activity receiving Federal financial assistance.” (History.com 2020). This legislation required elementary, secondary, and post-secondary schools to offer equal access for both males and females to all educational programs, from career and technical education programs to science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) education to athletics to help all students succeed in school and beyond (NCWGE 2012). Required changes specific to athletics include allocating the same resources, such as practice times, sports equipment, and coaching to women’s programs as to men’s programs. In addition, scholarship money had to be equitable so that the percentage of the scholarship budget awarded to men matched the percentage of scholarship budget awarded to women (History.com 2020). 

 

Title IX was extremely influential and significant in influencing the number of women in sports. In terms of high school athletics, during the 1971-72 school year, only seven percent of high school athletes (fewer than 300,000) were female. This increased to 41 percent (nearly 3.2 million) in the 2010-11 school year. Similar improvements have been seen in collegiate athletics.  In 1971–1972, less than 30,000 women participated in college sports. This number increased to over 190,000 by 2010–2011. The amount of school athletic budgets allocated to women has also improved significantly.  In 1972, only two percent of schools’ athletic budgets were applied to women’s sports. This increased to 40 percent in 2009–2010. Before Title IX,  athletic scholarships for women did not exist. By 2009-2010, women received nearly half (48 percent) of the total athletic scholarship funds at National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) Division I schools (NCWGE 2012).  Division I schools are also getting closer to reaching gender equity. As of 2019, 47 percent of student athletes are women and 53 percent are men. In addition, women’s NCAA teams now outnumber men’s teams, with 53.6 percent of the teams being in women’s sports (Schwarb Nov. 2019). 

 

One of the early beneficiaries of Title IX was Jackie Joyner Kersee. Jackie was born in 1962 and started high school shortly after this legislation was implemented. During high school, she excelled in numerous sports, including track and field, basketball and volleyball. Due to her success, Jackie received a full scholarship to attend the University of California, Los Angeles. She went on to become one of the greatest track and field athletes in American history, competing in four different Olympic Games and winning two gold, one silver, and two bronze medals (Biography.com 2020). 

 

Mant other advances in women’s sports have taken place since the implementation of Title IX. Perhaps most notably, in 1975, just three years after Title IX was enacted, Brown University funded what is considered the first women’s varsity soccer team in the United States. Over the next decade, other colleges followed suit and soon there were enough teams to support a national women’s soccer championship. The sport’s success led to international competitions with the U.S. women’s soccer team winning the Women’s World Cup in 1991. Women’s soccer was then added as an Olympic sport in 1996, during which the U.S. women’s soccer team won the gold medal. In 1999, they won the Women’s World Cup again. It was at that game when one of the players, Brandi Chastain, took off her jersey in celebration, revealing her sports bra. This was considered by many to be inappropriate and highlighted that bias against women in sports still persisted. Despite this, the success of the U.S. women’s soccer team continued with countless more World Cup and Olympic victories (Schwarb Summer 2019). 

 

Other success stories in women’s sports include the following:

 

  • Not too long ago, in 1990, there were just over 6,000 registered female hockey players in the U.S. and only approximately 15 collegiate programs. Now, 20 years later, there are nearly 60,000 registered females, 37 collegiate programs, 86 NCAA Division I and III programs, and numerous international competitions, such as the Olympics. The U.S. women’s ice hockey team earned its claim to fame winning their first Olympic gold medal in 1998, and an additional two silver medals and one bronze since then. This is a massive accomplishment for women in this sport, considering that back in the early 1990s, even a youth women’s ice hockey team was a rarity (Amidon 2010-12).
  • In 1996, the Women’s National Basketball Association (WNBA) was created with eight teams of 12 players each. The first season started in 1997 and continues to this day. The WNBA is now comprised of 12 teams (WNBA 2020).
  • Additionally, the NFL now has a female coach, Jen Welter, and a female official, Sarah Thomas. The Arizona Cardinals hired Jen Welter in 2015 as a part-time coach with a focus on inside linebackers, making her the first female NFL coach in history. That same year, Sarah Thomas was hired as the first female full-time on-field official (Kern 2020).

 

Thanks to countless female athletes and one unlikely man, President Richard Nixon, “run like a girl” is now closer to meaning running with speed, agility, and fierceness. Despite this progress, many barriers still exist. For example, in addition to having fewer participation opportunities, girls often experience inferior equipment, facilities, coaching, and publicity to boys. Additionally, at NCAA Division I schools, only 42 percent of the total athletic scholarship funding, 31 percent of the dollars spent to recruit new athletes, and 28 percent of the total money spent on athletics was allocated to female student-athletes (NCGWE 2012). Perhaps the hardest barriers to overcome, though, are those related to individual attitudes. Sadly, there are still people who oppose Title IX. These individuals try to reduce the effectiveness of the legislation through media attacks, legal challenges, and governmental appeals. They maintain that females are less interested in sports than are males, and that providing females with equal opportunities discriminates against males (NCGWE 2012). Change happens one person at a time. So next time, when someone tells you that you run like a girl, say thank you and ask them which one.

 

References 

 

Amidon, Michael. “Opportunities for Females in Ice Hockey.” USA Hockey Magazine, 2010-12.

https://www.usahockeymagazine.com/article/2010-12/opportunities-females-ice-hockey. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

Biography.com Editors. “Jackie Joyner-Kersee Biography.” Biography, 30 Jan. 2020. https://www.biography.com/athlete/jackie-joyner-kersee. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

History.com Editors. “Title IX Enacted.” History, 20 Jun. 2020. https://www.history.com/this-day-in-history/title-ix-enacted. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

Kern, Mason. “Jen Welter and the Backstory on the NFL’s Female Coach Pioneer.” SI, 19 May 2020. https://www.si.com/nfl/cardinals/news/jen-welter-coaching-intern-first-female-coach. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

KNBR. “The ‘Greatest All-Sport Athlete’ Who Helped Revolutionize Women’s Golf.” KNBR, 2020, www.knbr.com/news/the-greatest-all-sport-athlete-who-helped-revolutionize-womens-golf. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

National Coalition for Women and Girls in Education (NCWGE). “Title IX at 40: Working to Ensure Gender Equity in Education”. NCWGE, 2012. https://www.ncwge.org/PDF/TitleIXat40.pdf. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

Schwarb, Amy Wimmer. “How Women Got a Foot in the Game.” NCAA Champion Magazine, Summer 2019. http://www.ncaa.org/static/champion/how-women-got-a-foot-in-the-game/. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

Schwarb, Amy Wimmer. “More College Students than Ever Before are Student-Athletes.” NCAA, 19 Nov. 2019. http://www.ncaa.org/about/resources/media-center/news/more-college-students-ever-are-student-athletes. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

WNBA. “Frequently Asked Questions: WNBA.” WNBA, https://www.wnba.com/faq/. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020.

 

Women’s International Center (WIC). “Women’s History in America.” WIC, http://www.wic.org/misc/history.htm. Accessed 22 Nov. 2020. 

 

Extra Credit

I was very interested to watch the zoom interview with Dr. Ibram X Kendi, the author of the book “How to be an Antiracist”. The information discussed in his book is such a crucial and relevant topic in our country, and it’s so important to educate ourselves on the racism that unfortunately still exists today.

Dr. Kendi’s overarching theme was that we should not simply be “not racist”, and instead we should be antiracist. This was an interesting standpoint that I had never heard before but I completely agree with. The term antiracist refers to being against racism, rather than simply not being a racist person. It’s one thing to not be a racist person, but it’s another thing entirely to be actively opposing racism and promoting racial equality. Not being racist is the bare minimum, while being antiracist should be the basic standard.

One topic that Dr. Kendi discussed that especially stood out to me was the idea of “colorblindness”. I’ve often heard people use the phrase “I don’t see color”. Many people may think of this as a good thing, when in reality they are saying this as a way to “prove” that they aren’t racist. This, in itself, is a racist act. Saying that you “don’t see color” means that you don’t see the struggles that black Americans have to struggle with on a daily basis that non-minority groups couldn’t possibly begin to understand. Additionally, being black is a part of their identity, so if we don’t see color, we don’t see them for who they truly are. We need to acknowledge our differences, while still seeing each other as equals. We can do this by being color conscious rather than colorblind.

Another thing I found interesting was when Dr. Kendi was asked how someone can personally work towards being antiracist, he responded by saying that, before we can hope to fix the stigma of racism within our country, we have to self-reflect, look inside, and fix any underlying racism within ourselves. He said that we also must have the right mindset going into this, and shouldn’t just transform ourselves for personal gain, but rather to see what we have to contribute to the cause. He stated that it is a process, and that even he is not perfect when it comes to being antiracist. I think the impact of parents, society, and other environmental factors can play a role into our subconscious thoughts, even if we don’t realize it.

Finally, the last thing that stood out to me was when he made an interesting metaphor when comparing inequality to children with cookies. If he gave two kids 4 cookies, but one of the kids took 3 of the other kid’s cookies, how do you equalize the situation if he didn’t have any more cookies to give? He said that some people would say that to take the 3 cookies back to give to the first child would technically be reverse discrimination. He said that we need to think about discrimination on a much broader spectrum, and this really got me thinking more.

RCL blog

I really enjoyed this assignment because it allowed me to intertwine my own personal experiences into the paradigm shift of my choice. I chose to do my TED Talk on the history of women in sports and the shift brought about by Title IX. One thing I will say about the assignment is that I would definitely have preferred to do this presentation in person, of course, because I am such a perfectionist and I spent way too much time redoing the voice thread! However, overall, I think it went well and I thought it was a refreshing break from all my other generic assignments.

On another note, one idea I had for the History of a Public Controversy Project was the controversy behind climate change. Although there is evidence to show that climate change is occurring, many people still refuse to believe it. This could be an interesting topic to explore, due to its kairos and the impact it will have on our planet if not reversed or at least slowed down.

 

Passion blog

Time trial week! This week we were evaluated both on the track and in the weight room, with time trials and maxing out with weights. In high school, we ran time trials together as a group, simulating a meet scenario. In college, however, the pressure is on and we have to run our time trials individually. Now this stressed me out because it’s much harder to be on pace when you have no one else running with you. On top of that added stressor, all eyes are on you when you’re running, and for the freshmen it’s like our first debut in front of the team. Usually, I would thrive under pressure, but given the circumstances and the exceeding amount of time it had been since I’d actually gone race pace, I was overwhelmed with nerves.

It went okay, not horrible, but definitely not my best. On Monday, we had a 150, and on Tuesday, a 300. Unfortunately, I was too sore from Monday to do Tuesday’s time trial, to my disappointment. (The 300 was my favorite race in High School and one of the main events I got recruited for). However, even though I wasn’t entirely pleased with my performance, I was ecstatic to just be able to run at top speed again in spikes. One thing about the Penn State track team, we know how to cheer for each other! Usually I tune out any and all sounds while I’m racing, but this time it was nearly impossible! Everyone was encouraging me as I rounded the last turn and came up on the finish line, even teammates I didn’t get the chance to meet yet. It’s nice to be a part of such a supportive and enthusiastic team. Even though time trials didn’t quite go as planned, it helped calm my nerves and get me even more excited for our first meet! (January 16th).

In the weight room, we did our maximum weight for back squats. I never lifted before college, so this was still relatively new for me. I surpassed my trainer’s expectations for my max by 40 pounds, which was a good start. I was quite satisfied with how I did until I looked over and realized some of my upperclassmen teammates were lifting 100 pounds heavier than what I had just struggled to do. Hopefully I’ll get there by the time I’m in their grade!

Overall, it was a bit of a rocky start, but that is to be expected for a freshman who hasn’t competed in nearly 2 years. It’s important not to be too hard on myself or get too in my head about these things. That’s definitely one of the biggest takeaways I’ve learned from my experience so far.

 

Passion Blog

My high school coach once said something to me that has stuck with me throughout my years of running track. He said that track is 90% mental, and 10% physical. Something that differentiates track from other competitive sports is the fact that it is mostly an individual sport, aside from relays. This can be a good thing or a bad thing, depending on how well you perform. When you do well, you know that you did so all on your own. When you do poorly, however, there is no one else to blame but yourself. I 100% agree with my high school coach about the mental aspects of running track. Whether it’s blocking out the soreness and pain you feel on your last set of a workout, or suppressing the raging anxiety you get before a race, there is much more to track than running in an oval.

I’m accustomed to using mental toughness to do well in my sport, but coming off of a year-and-a-half-long injury requires an entirely new kind. Every step I take, every slight twinge of pain I feel, my brain immediately sets off an overwhelming alarm to stop. The countless setbacks I endured flash before my eyes. It’s like two sides of my consciousness are at war with each other: my competitive side, telling me to push myself as hard as I can and put in the work, and my cautious side, warning me not to overdo it. It’s a difficult balance to find, and I often find myself on one end of the see-saw, trying not to tip over.

Tuesdays are our hardest days, and all throughout the weekend I couldn’t take my mind off of it. I’m a bit of an over-thinker, if you couldn’t tell. The workout is 90-second runs with a circuit in between, and its reputation precedes it. The hardest part about this workout is that there is no rest time! We go straight into doing a circuit including pushups, jump-roping, ab workouts, and more. As we finished our last exercise of the first circuit, I closed my eyes and told myself, “it’s all in your head”.

The workout went much better than expected. Don’t get me wrong, it was hard, but my leg held up pretty well. As soon as it was over I felt a weight lift off my shoulders. I did it! Next step of building mental toughness: try not to stress and overthink so much!

Rhetorical Analysis Essay

Failure: Bad or Good?

The road to success looks different for each person who travels it. We don’t all have the same destination so we can’t possibly have the same journey. Sometimes your road to success can begin with failure. It’s a common misconception when we see someone successful that we idolize, we tend to put them on a pedestal, and believe that they can never make mistakes. We assume that their road to success was a straightforward highway drive in cruise control. In reality, however, in many cases it wasn’t with luck or natural born talent that they ended up where they are today, it was with persistence, even in the face of failure. So, perhaps failure is not always bad. My two artifacts both use failure to inspire success, but in different ways. One artifact is a Gatorade advertisement that uses the negative feelings associated with failure as motivation to work harder. The other artifact is the “You Failed” scene from the Disney movie, Meet the Robinsons, which celebrates failures as learning opportunities.  The Gatorade ad explicitly uses the commonplace that failure can lead to success with the slogan: “The Secret to Victory is Failure” while the Disney movie supports this commonplace with the motto: “Keep Moving Forward”. Both utilize pathos, kairos, ethos, and logos as well as other persuasive techniques to affect the behavior of the audience and convince them that failure is good, to keep trying, and, in the case of the Gatorade ad, of course, to buy Gatorade.

The Gatorade commercial provides examples of various acclaimed athletes and their roads to success and how they used previous failures to motivate them. For example, at the beginning of his road, Michael Jordan did not make his high school varsity basketball team. However, when you think of Michael Jordan, this is most definitely not the first thing that comes to mind. Instead, you might think of how he won six NBA championships for the Bulls, was named NBA most valuable player five times (Basketball Stats and History), signed a billion-dollar contract with Nike (Badenhausen), and became one of the greatest NBA players of all time. Serena Williams, who was ranked #1 in the world, lost to Roberta Vinci, who was ranked #43 in the world. It was the biggest upset in tennis (Bialik), but it didn’t stop her from achieving many more accomplishments. She won 23 Grand Slam titles, which is more than any other woman or man in modern tennis history. She became a four-time Olympic gold medalist. She won $93 million dollars in career prize money, which is more than any other female athlete (CNN Editorial Research). Finally, after starting his rookie season three and 13, Peyton Manning then went on to win two Super Bowls, hold five NFL MVP awards, make 14 Pro Bowl appearances, and have 14 4,000 yard passing seasons (Pro Football Reference).

The failures of these superstars legitimize the audience’s failures and compel the viewer to work as hard as these role models. The ad uses the commonplace of these familiar faces, which helps the watchers to relate to them. People think they know these athletes, simply from seeing their faces and hearing of their accomplishments, so the ad uses that as a starting point to begin to persuade them to do as they do. Although these athletes’ accomplishments and their rocky roads to success most likely have nothing at all to do with an energy drink, the commercial ends with clips of the athletes drinking Gatorade, with the caption: “Make Defeat Your Fuel…Gatorade: Win from Within”. This is a clever advertising tactic to make the audience feel as though something that all of these athletes have in common is the fact that they drink Gatorade. Therefore, if you, the watcher, drink Gatorade, you can be just like them.

Why is watching this commercial so moving? What feelings does it evoke in the audience? What about it persuades the audience to go stock up on Gatorade? The ad uses pathos to appeal to the emotions of its watchers. It’s inspiring to see how far these athletes have come and it gives the viewers reassurance that just because you fail now, it doesn’t mean you should give up. What if Michael Jordan quit basketball in high school? He would have had no idea what he could have accomplished had he stuck with it. The advertisement makes us think about a talent or passion that we have, and makes us feel as though we could be the next Michael Jordan! This artifact is unusual in that its kairos is unique to each viewer. Everyone has failed at some point in their lives, and each person connects this ad with their own individual moments. Even though Gatorade’s primary focus is on athletics, the theme of failure extends into everyday life, and, therefore, expands its audience. This ad uses ethos with some of the greatest athletes in US history, which gives it substantial credibility. The ad uses logos when connecting failure with working hard, working hard with success, and success with drinking Gatorade. It also connects the desire to be like these celebrities with drinking Gatorade. If Michael Jordan drinks Gatorade, it subsequently makes the viewer choose Gatorade over other sports drinks. Finally, the ad intrigues the audience through visual appeal, dramatic music, and catchy, inspirational quotes.

The “You Failed” scene from the Disney movie, Meet the Robinsons, displays a similar message to the Gatorade ad, but with a twist. Lewis, the main character, tries to fix a machine that distributes the proper mixture of peanut butter and jelly for a perfect peanut butter and jelly sandwich, and fails miserably, spraying peanut butter and jelly all over the Robinson family. Rather than scold him, the Robinsons encourage his failure, stating: “From failure you learn, success not so much.” Various members of the family then talk about how, if they had given up every time they failed, they would not have created countless wonderful inventions. They share the family motto, which is “Keep Moving Forward” and then propose, “a toast to Lewis and his brilliant failure. May it lead to success in the future”. After the movie ends, right before the credits roll, a quote from Walt Disney is displayed and reads, “Around here, however, we don’t look backwards for very long. We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things… and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths” (Disney).

Although the Disney scene is not an advertisement, it uses the rhetorical proofs of ethos, pathos, and logos in ways that are similar to the Gatorade ad to promote acceptance of failures as inspiration to keep trying until you find success along with a familiar kairos and the well-known visual appeal of Disney animation. The ethos of Walt Disney gives significant credit to the theme as he is perhaps even more famous than Michael Jordan and the other athletes in the Gatorade ad. The pathos of the movie is established through the development of an emotional attachment to Lewis. The audience roots for Lewis and feels his pain in failure just as they do for the athletes. This scene uses logos to connect failure with celebration, and celebration with trying again. Contrary to the negative connotation of failure that the Gatorade ad presents, Meet the Robinsons advocates for a more positive approach to failure. Finally, similar to the Gatorade ad, the kairos of the movie scene is unique to the viewer. Everyone identifies with the various moments in their lives when they have failed.

The desire to be “perfect” has been a societal norm for eons. We strive to be something that doesn’t exist! It’s a system doomed to fail, which is ironic, because failure is discouraged. Despite what these norms tell us, failure isn’t the main concern; it’s how you pick yourself back up and what you do to fix it that matters. In the wise words of Gatorade and Walt Disney, “Make Defeat Your Fuel” and “Keep Moving Forward”.

Works Cited

The Secret to Victory. Gatorade. 2017. YouTube, uploaded by tv commercials, 15 Aug 2017, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TfYrPdC9JM0.

Meet the Robinsons. Walt Disney Animation Studios. 2007. YouTube, uploaded by Frith Sykes, 30 Nov 2015, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3UqEps1r5E.

“Basketball Stats and History.” Sports Reference LLChttps://www.basketball-reference.com/players/j/jordami01.html. Accessed 18 Oct. 2020.

Badenhausen, Kurt. “The Inside Story of How Michael Jordan Became the World’s Richest Athlete.” Forbes, 3 May 2020, https://www.forbes.com/sites/kurtbadenhausen/2020/04/17/the-inside-story-of-how-michael-jordan-became-the-worlds-richest-athlete/#428e95bf5276.

CNN Editorial Research. “Serena Williams Fast Facts.” CNN. 30 Sept. 2020, https://www.cnn.com/2013/09/13/us/serena-williams-fast-facts/index.html.

Bialik, Carl, and Benjamin Morris. “Roberta Vinci’s Upset of Serena Williams is the Biggest in Modern Women’s Tennis History.” 11 Sept. 2015, https://fivethirtyeight.com/features/roberta-vincis-upset-of-serena-williams-is-the-biggest-in-modern-womens-tennis-history/.

“Pro Football Reference.” Sports Reference LLC. https://www.pro-football-reference.com/players/M/MannPe00.htm. Accessed 18 Oct. 2020.

Passion Blog

My first day of practice had finally arrived! This Wednesday I was cleared and now I’m back on track…literally. I couldn’t stop smiling through all of practice (even though you couldn’t see it, since we have to wear masks). It felt great to be practicing with my teammates, starting a new chapter to a book that has been closed and getting dusty on a shelf for the past year and a half. It’s not all sunshine and rainbows, though. A year and a half is a long time to go without your sport, and especially when transitioning from high school to D1 level. As of right now I’m training with the short sprinters to ease myself back in, and a few weeks I’ll be back with my 200-400 group.

Transitioning from virtually no training at all to D1 level training has been quite a challenge. I’m very out of shape and my body isn’t used to these strenuous workouts. From what I’ve gathered so far, college workouts are similar to high school workouts with one small but significant difference: rest time. While in high school we would do a 200 and then rest for a few minutes, in college, our “rest time” is a circuit including core exercises and plyometrics. It keeps your heart-rate up and makes your breathing heavier when you start the next set. I also never lifted weights in high school, so that has definitely been a learning experience as well. When I was recruited, I was told this was a good thing, because if I could run those times without weight training, I could improve immensely once I started. It’s been a challenging adjustment, but exciting nonetheless!

Another exciting development is that we got our headshots taken! It still feels surreal to see my name and my face on the 2020-2021 Penn State Track & Field Roster. There was a significant time period where I genuinely thought I lost the opportunity to run in college due to my injury, so I feel so grateful every single day to be where I am now. This picture is a reminder that I made it! I wish I could show it to my last-year self and tell her not to lose hope, and instead to keep her head up and be patient. Her time would come.

Civic Artifact Speech

The road to success looks different for each person who travels it. We don’t all have the same destination so we can’t possibly have the same journey. Sometimes your road to success can begin with failure. It’s a common misconception when we see someone successful that we idolize, we tend to put them on a pedestal, and believe that they can never make mistakes. We assume that their road to success was a straightforward highway drive in cruise control. In reality, however, in many cases it wasn’t by luck or natural born talent that they ended up where they are today, it was with persistence, even in the face of failure. My artifact is a Gatorade advertisement that advocates for this message, using the commonplace that failure can lead to success with the slogan: “The Secret to Victory is Failure”. This ad utilizes pathos, kairos, ethos, and logos as well as other persuasive techniques to affect the behavior of the audience and convince them to buy Gatorade.

The commercial provides examples of various acclaimed athletes and their roads to success and how they used previous failures to motivate them. For example, at the beginning of his road, Michael Jordan did not make his High School varsity basketball team. However, when you think of Michael Jordan, this is most definitely not the first thing that comes to mind. Instead, you might think of how he won six NBA championships for the Bulls, was named NBA most valuable player five times, signed a billion-dollar contract with Nike, and he became one of the greatest NBA players of all time. Serena Williams, who was ranked #1 in the world, lost to Roberta Vinci, who was ranked #43 in the world. It was the biggest upset in tennis, but it didn’t stop her from achieving many more accomplishments. She won 23 Grand Slam titles, which is more than any other woman or man in modern tennis history. She became a four-time Olympic gold medalist. She won $93 million dollars in career prize money, which is more than any other female athlete. After starting his rookie season 3 and 13, Peyton Manning then went on to win two Super Bowls, hold 5 NFL MVP awards, make 14 Pro Bowl appearances, and have fourteen 4,000 yard passing seasons.

The failures of these superstars legitimize the audience’s failures and compel the viewer to work as hard as these role models. The ad uses the commonplace of these familiar faces, which helps the watchers to relate to them. People think they know these athletes, simply from seeing their faces and hearing of their accomplishments, so the ad uses that as a starting point to begin to persuade them to do as they do. Although these athletes’ accomplishments and their rocky roads to success most likely have nothing at all to do with an energy drink, the commercial ends with clips of the athletes drinking Gatorade, with the caption: “Make Defeat Your Fuel…Gatorade: Win from Within”. This is a clever advertising tactic to make the audience feel as though something that all of these athletes have in common is the fact that they drink Gatorade. Therefore, if you, the watcher, drink Gatorade, you can be just like them.

Why is watching this commercial so moving? What feelings does it evoke in the audience? What about it persuades the audience to go stock up on Gatorade? The ad uses pathos to appeal to the emotions of its watchers. It’s inspiring to see how far these athletes have come and it gives the viewers reassurance that just because you fail now, it doesn’t mean you should give up. What if Michael Jordan quit basketball in high school? He would’ve had no idea what he could’ve accomplished had he stuck with it. The advertisement makes us think about a talent or passion that we have, and makes us feel as though we could be the next Michael Jordan! This artifact is unusual in that its kairos is unique to each viewer. Everyone has failed at some point in their lives, and each person connects this ad with their own individual moments. Even though Gatorade’s primary focus is on athletics, the theme of failure extends into everyday life, and, therefore, expands its audience. This ad uses ethos with some of the greatest athletes in US history, which gives it substantial credibility. The ad uses logos when connecting failure with working hard, working hard with success, and success with drinking Gatorade. It also connects the desire to be like these celebrities with drinking Gatorade. If Michael Jordan drinks Gatorade, it subsequently makes the viewer choose Gatorade over other sports drinks. Finally, the ad intrigues the audience through visual appeal, dramatic music, and catchy, inspirational quotes.

The desire to be “perfect” has been a societal norm for eons. Despite what these norms tell us, failure isn’t the main concern: it’s how you pick yourself back up and what you do to fix it that matters. In the wise words of Gatorade, “Make Defeat Your Fuel”.

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