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I think that the only real work in progress happening right now in this class is our group project! It seems to be coming along well and our group has a good plan of action. We have already met twice … Continue reading

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There are a lot of things I could have done differently in with this speech, especially after watching it!! Okay, first of all, the ums…have to go. I say “um” a lot, especially in the beginning. I don’t even remember … Continue reading

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TED talk, check

Now that my TED talk has been presented and is an event in the past, I want to reflect on it and recognize some of the things that I thought went well, and also some things that I could improve … Continue reading

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Ted talk and paper

My Ted talk is still in progress but it’s coming along. I originally wrote my paper around the idea of how sneakers represent “choice” in society and how not only have plenty of choices to pick from, but also how society seems to be more accepting of the … Continue reading

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Rough Draft

Here’s my rough draft of the paper! Honestly it’s still pretty rough though, just so ya know. I need to iron out my research more and just organize my ideas a lot better and more clearly. I feel like most … Continue reading

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Figuring this out

I’m trying to figure out how to organize what I’m going to say about sneakers and how they have evolved to mirror how society has evolved. I have a few ideas but they’re kind of all over the place. I … Continue reading

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Sneakers

My idea for the paradigm shift paper is sneakers and how they’ve changed to reflect our values in the American society. I mean, the American dream labels success as being on top, which means we’re always aspiring to “top” the person on … Continue reading

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My Rhetorical analyses essay

I will be analyzing the Totino’s Pizza Roll commercial where the two boys are hungry and call their mom in a doomed-like panic because they cannot find any food to eat, even though the Totino’s pizza rolls are right next … Continue reading

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Condensing writing

I’m blogging about blogging. Alright, so my blogs are really long and I need to figure out how to make them shorter yet still be able to say all that I want to say! My high school english teacher was … Continue reading

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