Around the time I started the 6th grade, I began noticing how a few of my friends were becoming more introverted. I was going through the same thing, headaches everyday that led to my lack of focus in classes and outbursts of frustration towards people. It was hard to begin on this path of isolating oneself to avoid negative encounters with others.
Then, I had gotten used to sitting alone during classes and lunch, scribbling in books. I had a pretty good knack for finding words that, when paired, seemed to relay a thought, a trinket of my mental state without the breath it took to take them flying. I sought the afterthought of challenge when I no longer crawled through hardship, and instead pulled a flag and left it grounded. I’m not going to show off like that! Y’all not ready for all that!… anyway, I had these journals that were blank with lines that caught the eye and seduced scribes… I need to stop. What I’m trying to say is that I was becoming a pretty good poet who used all of his free time to write instead of hanging around people. I definitely would fit in at PYPM.
Instead of empty spaces, I fill these words on dark blotches/ A place in time that my people have forgotten/ Pieces of canvas that no artist has begot then/ I space them nicely with a shine, clear polish/ When they sound good enough to see the light of day/ Flip the script and start writing in a better way/ Some ears will be deaf to everything you say/ But most eyes can’t avoid where the sun casts rays/
I like to not only speak on things that people can relate to, but also speak on things that I feel some could never really grasp. Whether in reality they can or not, I’ve made it a practice to be as ambiguous as possible while still leaving a trail of thought to follow. Many poets do this, but I feel that it is unique to me because no one taught me how to do this, I came up with it all on my own. And, in a way, that is what connects us all as poets, we can come to the same conclusions whether we share notes with one another or not, like some kind of widespread verbal convergent evolution. Threw some biology in there… college.
Afford to spare a bit of ink and let another write/ The difference is just as clear as pitch black and white/ The pitch is changing like a singer raising up her height/ Or rather sloping like a graph in algebra, right?/ Not really good in math but I can see the end/ Hiding behind a matrix wall and dividends/ I’m not the only writer compensated with a grip of bands/ But I’m the type to shove it right back at the man/
Obviously not something incredibly deep but I still love the way that you can interpret a simile or metaphors right in between lines and capture not only an idea, but also an actual statement of fact. The difference is clear, meaning when you let someone else write something for you, you get to see their interpretation of words and meanings. The difference is clear like a song, a crescendo in a sense. Also, I have truly never been compensated for my work nor have I accepted an offer for it; I’ve always shoved the grip of bands (money) back to whomever offered. The joy of writing something you found to be awesome is all you need, along with imagination.
Now, read these words, but slowly try to analyze the message:
I miss the days your attention was in arms reach/ When I could see you from a distance you would care to speak/ Though you left I thought that we would still be close as we/ Are and now I think we’ve separated quietly/ Now all my focus went to tracing back the days of old/ Where I can see you smile and feel your gentle laughter grow/ I used to take the mental image home and hold it close/ But now they’re tearing from me, breaking for the door to go/
Do I need to say more or can you see the way I’m feeling/ You walked away and broke the walls down, falling ceiling/ Just to see you now would be to me the most appealing/ How can you take a heart then take a leave, always stealing/ Better call the law; I need to be before a jury/ I’ll tell ’em love is gone and this is means for rush and worry/ I’ll bring a search party out and play them music during/ They trample over our old stomping ground where we would journey/ Through the bushes that our parents told us not to go/ We snickered moving on the path that only we would know/ I held your hand and told you I could get us back to home/ Now I don’t know where to turn, you’ve let your grasp unfold
A big portion of my life was spent in silent thought. I became a shell, feeling only what I cared to feel and thinking about my life as this sort of projection on a screen; I wasn’t me, but I was watching me. So all the things I used to write about were very deep and touched on things that I would think of, but I would write them out with no problem because, in my mind, it was the same as writing about somebody else. Therefore it wasn’t difficult to lay out these raw emotions.
I say to try to analyze the meaning because that is how you get better at feeling the emotion within it.
It was a pretty sad time back then. Loving your poems felt like everything, but I had nobody to really share them with. Plus, in the 6th grade, I was a pretty sharp kid who always acted like he didn’t belong and other people didn’t vibe well with me because of it. It made me cringe to even think about having a conversation. All I wanted was a book and pencils as friends. But, of course, those around me who knew me well knew that I, like everybody else, needed attention and needed support. So, during the days that I along with my brother and a few of our friends would meet in the school’s conference for Public Speaking club, the entire group would write poetry instead of speeches. My friends there would force me (as in offer me Reese’s) to write about different things and use the best similes, metaphors, double entendres, etc., I could think of. That balance of being in class and disassociating myself from others was good for focus and creating new ideas, despite me becoming too antisocial, tagged along with having a room where I could enjoy what I’ve written and share it with friends was pretty good.
My goal is to one day find the time to write something as beautiful as my favorite poem, Cadenus and Vanessa by Jonathan Swift.