WIP Deliberation Essay

There is a reason the name of my blog post is not Deliberation Essay Rough Draft. I don’t have a rough draft. I just finished writing a research paper for the past ten hours, I don’t have it in me tonight. So, here are my ideas loosely brought together here.

Moderation philosophy:

In my experience as a moderator, I wanted to take the discussion to a deeper level when we talked about sustainability and education, but I also didn’t want to break up good discussion. Everyone was contributing and listening well, talking about their experiences in high school and how it can relate to sustainability. This is really good.

What I wanted to push towards was the actual sustainability of the education in this country. The sustainability of our current education with its current funding levels to keep American students competitive with the rest of the world, or the sustainability of our current University system, as costs continue to rise and the promise of a job coming out of that degree falls apart.

My moderation philosophy is that we can learn as much or more from watching where the discussion takes us rather than it following the course of one person in charge. So I sit back.

Deliberative Process:

I was a little disappointed by our deliberation. The conversation was great in that it was civil, people listened, it stayed on topic, it was supported with facts, and everyone learned from it.

What I didn’t like was that it seemed that most of our conversation was people simply listening to one person’s opinion or experiences, and then responding by telling everyone their opinion or experiences. There were very few questions asked whenever someone made a point, and almost no challenging of viewpoints by another group member. One of the most important parts of good deliberation is the back and forth of people challenging each other to defend themselves, and bring the advantages of their vision to the forefront.

I think this is representative of deliberation as a whole in this country. There is a lot of hesitation when it comes to challenging another person when deliberating in person, or even online when you try to remain civil. Recently, there was a facebook group made for the purpose of 138 deliberation, a great idea, except lest a few people who were asking good questions and challenging each other, the comment list is simply a lot of people stating their opinions on a matter.

On the other extreme, a lot of online deliberation is behind the protection of a screen and keyboard, so people violently yell at each other for no reason, pointing fingers, calling names, making generalizations, and forgetting the purpose of deliberation. In my personal online experience, I was called a heart-beating liberal, told I was in Bob Casey’s pocket, and called ignorant because I believe that the gender wage gap is a real thing. I like to think that I am not ignorant, but I am positive that I am not a polarizing liberal.

Just 500 words of starting ideas.

WIP Sustainability

This week we have to define sustainability.

Sustainability is the ability to sustain.

But seriously, I define it as the ability of our world, including those living in it, to perpetuate itself. For example, millions of years of deposition led to the deposits of fossil fuels that we enjoy today, yet we are tearing through them in a matter of centuries. That is not sustainable.

Sustainability is the ability of our world to recycle carbon, water, nitrogen, and other elements in a manner that does not threaten the future of our world.

Sustainability is the peaceful coexisting of the human race and its surroundings, for now and generations to come.

Sustainability is the ability of our Earth to last.

 

Civic Issues: State of the Union

While I had the unfortunate luck of being the only one in our group to have to post the week of THON, I was fortunate enough to have the week of the annual Presidential idealist stump speech: The State of the Union.

Like every SOTU, the President began with a history lecture, then said the same words, repeated every year since JFK, “the state of our union is strong.”

But how strong is it, really? I mean, our country is torn into a contentious dichotomy over immigration, gun control, women’s rights, gay marriage, abortion, Medicare, defense spending, the national deficit, foreign policy, weapons policy, assisting the needy, and international trade. It seems like party contention and debate is at an all time high, even spurring the inception of new political movements (read: The Tea Party).

As for the content of the speech, I will speak briefly on a few subjects.

The first is the most important, our economy. The “fiscal cliff” aversion caused a serious reduction in our 4 trillion dollar deficit, but we are still well over a trillion dollars in the hole for this year, provided that Congress will stand by cutting all they pledged to (they won’t). The president said that the continued reduction of this deficit must come from balanced cuts across the board in spending, coupled with rewriting the tax law, and increasing revenue. Now, closing up loopholes in taxes will save the Government 100 billion annually, sadly this action is almost negligible. When he said that the Government would need to increase revenue, he said it would need to be balanced by all Americans. I may be wrong, but it sounds like the President just hinted at increasing everyone’s taxes.

The problem, now, is that he went on to describe advances the United States needs to make in many areas: energy independence, alternative fuels, biomedical advances, education, the environment, helping citizens refinance, etc. All of these require increases in funding. But we have to cut funding.

And then the President goes on to say how our economic policy must have the sole purpose of creating jobs in mind. Unfortunately, for the Government to create jobs (increase GDP) with fiscal policy, it has to increase spending (GDP = Gov. spending + consumption + private investment + net exports). This is the exact opposite of reducing the deficit.

Look, I totally agree with him that all these things have to happen, but my logic says that they cannot. So, as president, he has to decide which route the country needs to take.

Another topic he spoke on was immigration reform. A measure that received ovations from both sides of the chamber, he proposed strengthening border security as well as influencing immigrants to learn English. Jaanki recently posted about bringing the best and the brightest to the United States, so I will play devil’s advocate here.

The problem with immigrants coming to the United States is that they drive population increases faster than the economy can create jobs. In a word, some people would say that they are taking American’s jobs. A couple of times President Obama referenced the creation of a million American jobs, except with influxes of immigrants, and policies of affirmative action, along with basic microeconomics, those jobs will go to immigrants before they go to established struggling families.

Finally, he touched on some foreign policy. First, everyone should be reminded that John Kerry is our new Secretary of State, and we should send our best wishes to HC, she was a great Secretary. Now, Obama mentioned “making sure Iran doesn’t get a nuclear weapon.” I sometimes (often) have misgivings about the United States being the police of the world. Iran is an independent, sovereign nation, who are we to impose sanctions other than a member of the UN council? Is it feasible that the country that is struggling to sustain a nuclear program will launch a missile knowing that the response would be 100 back into their face?

In addition, he discussed supporting democracy and human rights in the middle east. I agree with the human rights portion, and I love my country, but at the same time, I don’t think that our democracy will work everywhere. I think that we should fight for the basic human rights of people through Diplomacy, and allow them to form their own power structure. The Constitution is ours and ours only, let these other nations have that same beauty.

To finish, he said simply that the gun control measures proposed recently “deserve a vote.” Though we may disagree on what the results of that vote should be, I totally agree with him, it’s time for a referendum on the debate gripping the country right now.

So there’s my entirely disjointed, uncensored, opinionated, probably a little misinformed take on the SOTU.

PS I didn’t watch the Republican Response, or the Tea Party Response. The latter would be a complete waste of time.

The PED Problem

Sports are a save haven for competition. A place where people can perform to their best of their ability to measure themselves against others in their same genre. However, in order to compete, there must be fairness.

This is why sports have rules, referees, and Governing Bodies. There are checks and balances in place to maintain the integrity of the competition. However, more and more these days, that integrity is being challenged by modern advances in medicine and technology. Golf equipment is better, athletes can train harder and longer with the help of Science, and incredible statistics breakdown helps teams predict the future. However, nothing is contributing more to ruining sport than Performance Enhancing Drugs.

Performance Enhancing Drugs, or PEDs, are a variety of substances that enhance the human body to increase its ability to train and to perform. They expand the capacity of the natural human body. There are two sports that PEDs have become a serious issue: Baseball and Cycling.

Alex Rodriguez made headlines again this week for his second positive test for the use of PEDs. He first tested positive a few years ago, and served a suspension, but now he could be facing an exit from Major League Baseball. A-Rod is not alone. Many of baseball’s greats face either accusation of, or indictment of the use of PEDs. The all-time home run leader Barry Bonds, sluggers Mark MacGuire and Sammy Sosa, and Ace Roger Clemens all face tainted reputations, as displayed by their failure to make it into the baseball hall of fame. PEDs take away from the integrity of the game, and cripple the legacies of some of our most beloved players.

The other tainted sport is cycling. PED use in cycling, often referred to as “doping” because of the methods of blood doping used to achieve results, is rampant. In the sport’s pinnacle, Le Tour de France, there have only been seven legitimate victories since 1996. It seems that everyone dopes, as cyclists are tossed from races all the time. Doping violations have scarred the legacy of my favorite athlete, Lance Armstrong. Now, Lance of France has been stripped of his seven consecutive titles, and ridiculed despite beating cancer, returning to the top of his sport, then starting one of the world’s largest movements for the fight against cancer. It is not known how much of this was his doing, and how much PEDs aided him, but it pains me to think one of my heros wasn’t everything he appeared to be.

My questions for you guys are do you like these posts that go deep into an issue in sports, or would you rather see stories of the success of sport? Also, I’m thinking of doing some posts just about parts of sports in general, such as what makes a great coach, and who are the greatest? Thoughts? Concerns?

WIP: Online Deliberation Week 2

So this week, I have continued my online deliberation with the use of my local newspaper, PennLive. I have not received any responses yet, so I have nothing to post. I responded to an article about Gov. Corbett wanting to raise gas taxes to fund an increase in the state transportation budget. Obviously people were disgruntled over pain at the pump, but I tried to play devil’s advocate and explain to them that if they don’t make sacrifices, nobody will, and our roads will (continue to) fail.