WIP: Advocacy Project

So I want to do my advocacy based on my Persuasion paper. In case you guys didn’t know, I focused my paper on Medical Malpractice, and how tort reform can change the future of Medicine.

My idea is that I am going to advocate by showing people the eye-opening statistics of Medical lawsuits. If I can get people to realize that doctors think that upwards of $650 billion is wasted each year because of defensive medicine, people may listen.

If I can talk about how the average Malpractice settlement is over $290,000, and that’s outside of court and out of the hospital, people may realize why I am advocating. (By the way, a trial that goes to a jury decision is an average $800,000 payout.)

The facts of my paper were all big statistics, and I want the facts of my advocacy project to be the same way.

I wish that I could use a method similar to the one used at the end of The Other Guys. I think that would be the most effective way to get a point across. Here is the video:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tvuDGyUkzoI

However, that may be unattainable. I would like to try to build graphics with that style though, the plain, statistical nature makes it effective.

WIP: Persuasive Somewhere In-Between Draft

I still lack a conclusion, and want to include a little bit more from the other side of the argument. I decided to just go forward with what I felt strongest about: the medical aspect of lawsuit in this country. Feedback welcome….I’m really looking to see if I am really being persuasive or just shouting an opinion at you.

 

In our society, where the wealth of a nation is driven by private individuals looking to succeed, wealth is equivalent to power. Our country is rife with a culture of greed. To many, money can replace certain intangibles of life. Thus, there is a perpetual system of lawsuit in the United States, where those who feel they have been wronged can receive financial compensation in return. Annuity replaces the void left by the loss of a loved one. A lump sum payout compensates for living a life with mesothelioma. Advertisements cut into programming to advocate opportunities for private citizens to sue, or to join a class-action lawsuit.

This established culture of lawsuit in our country is one that is often called into question. Is it wrong to perpetuate an industry founded solely on greed? Does a financial payout really make up for emotional loss? I think it is wrong for us to assume it is ok to act as if money is a remedy to grief or suffering.

The problem with lawsuit is twofold. In addition to the uneasiness of the industry from an ethical standpoint, every profit for one man is the expenditure of another. This vague idiom is actually very pertinent to the situation. Whenever someone wins a lawsuit, his or her financial compensation has to come from somewhere. Whether the plaintiff receives payment directly from a defendant, or through an insurance company, for every lawsuit won, there is also a loser. Private citizens usually cannot afford to pay out of their pockets, so either they face bankruptcy, or an insurance agent protects them. When insurance companies have to shell out large settlements, premiums rise, and costs increase industry-wide.

This latter situation is very pertinent to the modern health care industry. Costs are rising across the board, and everyone from nurses to Blue Cross/Blue Shield executives are cutting corners to save money. One of the main reasons why costs are rising relates directly to the situation explained above. In the medical industry, a defendant is a doctor facing a lawsuit for medical malpractice. He or she is constantly at risk to be sued if they ever make a mistake; or, in some wild cases, if a patient is unsatisfied. Thus, physicians are required both out of necessity, and by law, to protect themselves and purchase malpractice insurance. The cost of insurance is not cheap, and this causes both direct and indirect increases in costs from care providers. Worst of all, the cost effect of medical malpractice lawsuit is a direct result of the aforementioned culture of acquisition in our nation; it is entirely preventable.

It cannot be denied that medical malpractice lawsuits cause increases in healthcare costs. They do so for two reasons. First, the cost of malpractice insurance is one that burdens many doctors, and is one of the major sources of overhead for the primary care industry. And second, the possibility of facing a lawsuit for care that does not meet the highest standard causes doctors to behave differently.  Physicians overprescribe tests, treatments, and waste extra time and resources in a practice known as defensive medicine. Such outcomes from malpractice lawsuits make it a burden to the healthcare industry.

The most direct result of medical malpractice cost is the pressure it puts on physicians to make enough money to pay for their insurance. Whether we are discussing a private practice, a massive hospital healthcare system, or a boutique medical practice that has patients pay once a year for all the access they want, doctors have to charge enough to turn a profit. That means they must pay their staff, pay for supplies, physical capital, depreciation, and another cost: malpractice insurance. Thus, high insurance premiums translate into high costs for patients. There needs to be a change in the industry of medical malpractice lawsuit so that these price-gauging effects can be averted.

The cost of medical malpractice insurance is one that varies greatly. It is dependent on state law, the type of doctor being insured, and the preference of the physician as to how much or how little coverage they wish to purchase. A good model state for this discussion is Pennsylvania, because its costs are comparable to median costs in the country as a whole. The average base cost of medical malpractice insurance coverage for a general surgeon in Pennsylvania is anywhere from $28,000 to $50,000 annually. For an internist, those numbers are anywhere from about $6,000 to $11,000. And for an OB/GYN, the base cost is over $60,000. (Source 1)

It should be noted that these figures represent base costs. For a premium plan from an insurance company, one that provides significant financial protection, these costs could be up to 50% greater. Considering that the average outpatient malpractice settlement outside of court costs a doctor $290,000, and a full trial that goes to a jury decision averages upwards of $800,000, physicians often reach for the more comprehensive coverage out of necessity. (Source 2)

Likely the first response to these numbers is that doctors make an exorbitant amount of money, and these costs aren’t really significant. However, by the numbers, it makes a significant impact. The median salary for an internist is roughly $189,000. (Source 3) At this salary, he or she will be paying 33% of their earnings in income taxes. Add on top of that somewhere around $12,000 for malpractice insurance, another 7% of income, in addition to college and medical school debt, and the same expenses as every other American, and this Internist will be looking to increase their income by charging more to patients.

And the situation of the Internist looks bright next to a Gynecologist. At a median salary of about $255,000, and malpractice insurance costs of $65,000+, an OB/GYN will shell out 25% of their income for insurance coverage alone. (Source 4)

The reason that these costs are so significant is that they are more cost passed on to the patients. Studies estimate that the insurance premiums and settlements paid by doctors without insurance in 2009 were somewhere around $35 billion. That is $35 billion passed on to patients, healthcare insurance companies, and the Government. (Source 5)

Though technically indirect costs from malpractice suits, defensive medicine costs comprise the greatest total of waste arising from medical lawsuit. The practice of defensive medicine is quite simple: doctors do not want to miss a possible rare diagnosis or fail to treat a condition that could have been addressed with an easy remedy. They do this for many reasons; however, one of the biggest reasons is that they do not want to screw up the care of a patient when that patient could potentially sue them. At the end of the day, the physician wants to be able to say that they did absolutely everything that they could, almost in an effort to cover their asses for the future.

So what happens? Tests are ordered that aren’t necessary. A second-year medical school student could identify carpel tunnel in a patient just by hearing the words “tingling and weakness in my fourth and fifth digit.” However, an experienced orthopaedic surgeon is not allowed to perform surgery to fix said carpel tunnel without ordering a nerve conduction test first, costing somewhere in the range of $500-$1000. (Source 6)

Defensive medicine also leads to overprescribing of treatment. Every patient who heads to the family doctor can get a Z-pack of antibiotics if they present symptoms that could indicate an upper respiratory infection. However, a virus usually presents itself in the same manner, but the body can fight off a virus on its own, whilst an infection from bacteria can spread easily. So, every patient receives antibiotics, regardless of whether they will be worthless or not. (Antibiotics have no effect on viruses and viral conditions.) The doctor wants to make sure he or she did all they could to combat what could potentially be a bacterial infection.

Overall, in 2009, surveys of thousands of physicians yielded estimates of how much money is wasted through defensive medicinal practices. The results of the survey estimated roughly $650 billion to $850 billion in wastes annually. (Source 7)

While it is true that defensive medicine is not entirely caused by malpractice lawsuit, malpractice plays a very key role in its existence.

Thus, what can be done do address the increase in medical cost caused by the industry of medical malpractice lawsuit? Outlined in a proposal to Congress in October of 2009 are some suggestions for “tort reform,” or limiting the costs of medical malpractice. Among these suggestions are both specific monetary proposals and broader conceptual proposals. The ideas in said proposal are concurrent with the ideas of this literature. (Source 8)

First, there should be limits as to how much a lawsuit can yield for a patient. The rights of the patient must be defended, so they must always receive at least enough payment to cover their economic losses because of physician negligence. However, there should only be a limited about of liability for doctors beyond that economic loss. Some proposals outline a $250,000 cap, a $500,000 cap, or a cap of no more than double the economic damages. Even this seems a little extensive. No matter how much money is paid out for pain and suffering damages, no amount will make the pain go away; thus, there should be modest limits. (Source 8)

Another proposition is a statue of limitations for how long a patient has to levy a lawsuit against a care provider. (Source 8) This issue is very pertinent to the OB/GYN profession. It was laid out earlier in this paper that a Gynecologist pays a very high premium for malpractice insurance. This is because they deal with the birth of children. Under current law, an OB/GYN is culpable, and susceptible to a lawsuit, until the child is 18-years-old, with a two year statue of limitations on top of that as well. Thus, their insurance company must protect these doctors from each patient for twenty years. A statue of limitations on tort lawsuits would help lower the very high cost of insurance for these doctors. (Source 9)

Estimates indicate that costs of medical malpractice liability could decrease by ten percent with such modest reforms. This would mean a $3.5 billion decrease in costs. (Source 8) Plus, if a similar trend would occur in practices of defensive medicine, healthcare costs could increase by many billions of dollars as doctors’ liabilities decrease.

 

  1. http://www.ehow.com/about_5514154_average-cost-medical-malpractice-insurance.html
  2. http://www.medicalmalpractice.com/legal-advice/medical-malpractice/medical-malpractice-introduction/average-settlement.htm
  3. http://swz.salary.com/SalaryWizard/Physician-Internal-Medicine-Salary-Details.aspx
  4. http://swz.salary.com/SalaryWizard/gynecologist-Salary-Details.aspx
  5. http://www.cbo.gov/sites/default/files/cbofiles/ftpdocs/106xx/doc10641/10-09-tort_reform.pdf
  6. http://www.howmuchisit.org/nerve-conduction-test-cost/
  7. http://defensivemedicine.org/hello-world
  8. http://www.cbo.gov/sites/default/files/cbofiles/ftpdocs/106xx/doc10641/10-09-tort_reform.pdf
  9. http://www.equotemd.com/blog/obgyn-medical-malpractice-insurance/

Persuasive Essay Rough Draft

My persuasive essay is going to be along the lines of a personal essay that is supported with facts and research, rather than the other end of the spectrum.

This “draft” is a very opinionated rant about how I feel on the topic and does not have any cited sources. It does have some places where I will look for facts and figures to give my arguments merit. The only “proof” I make is the logical thought process that makes up my argument.

 

A popular film called Office Space includes a part of the hilarious plot where an employee at the main character’s office is mutilated by a car accident that leaves him in a full-body cast for the rest of his life. He then sues the driver of the car that hit him, and is set for life. He can leave his job and never lift a finger for the rest of his retirement  He even goes so far as to have a party afterwards, calling his accident the luckiest thing that had ever happened to him. Examples like these represent a problem in this country: people can take terrible things that have happened to them, many times by accident, and turn it into a huge payout for the misfortunate. Law firms looking to bring together a class action suit interrupt programming with advertising to bring thousands of claims for millions of dollars. Couples fight in civil court for years, each claiming they are suing their spouse for their relationship ending. There is a culture in this nation that if something happens to you, you sue somebody. No questions asked. Lawsuit is the bane of this country. It perpetuates the culture of greed in the United States, victimizes many people, and is one of the major causes of rising costs in this nation.

The United States is a capitalist society, founded on individuals looking to make a fortune for themselves, their family, and those in business with them. Though not entirely synonymous, this culture creates a trite personality trait of greed throughout the nation’s individuals. We always want more. Ask the little kids in the AT&T commercials; two is better than one, bigger is better, faster is better, more is better. This culture drives the idea of a lawsuit. The only reason civil court exists is because people’s love of money is so dominating that they feel a monetary payout makes up for the ways in which they have been wronged. A lump sum makes living with mesothelioma worth it. Being fired is reason to bring forward a lawsuit when the word “insubordination” is too vague. It is all about the money.

Greed drives people to do wild things. Recently, a Judge sued an Asian family who own a few drycleaners in Washington DC. The cleaners temporarily lost a pair of the Judge’s pants. So, naturally, he sued them for $67 million dollars. That is almost half-a-million times the amount that the pants cost. The two sides have gone to court after court, because the Judge continues to appeal time and again to higher courts. The legal fees have put the family almost entirely out of business, something they worked their entire lives to build. They cannot even afford to pay the legal fees to sue him for their losses because of this ludicrous suit. Not to mention, at one point they even offered to pay him $12,000 and return the pants. He declined, he wants millions. He sees his claim as lucrative, not ludicrous.

This brings us to the second problem with lawsuit. It creates reverse-victimization. Since you can basically sue almost anyone for just about anything, those who are wrongfully sued become victims. They must pay court fees, legal fees, and unless they can find a lawyer pro bono, they have to pay for legal counsel. Going back to the asian family, they lost their life’s work to one ridiculous man with an even more ridiculous idea. And they are but one example. The mindset that negative happenings in one’s life should be approached with the mental idea “someone better pay for this” means that yes, someone eventually has to pay. And it rarely is pretty.

The fact that anyone can become a victim of a lawsuit means that individuals and companies have to protect themselves from such an occurrence  Where we see this the most nowadays is in one of the largest and fastest growing business of our economy: Medicine.

While the healthcare debate spills out of Capitol Hill among the American people, dividing democrats and republicans on the future of the United States healthcare and healthcare insurance system, one must question the fundamental basis of the debate. Reform goes into the Government insurance plan for seniors and the underprivileged  regulation dominates the insurance industries, and the healthcare system is squeezed for every dime from all sides. However, nobody talks about why the costs are so high to begin with.

Here is a proposal: medical costs are so high, and increasing, in large part to lawsuit. This is because of two main drivers of cost rooting from lawsuit.

The first is malpractice insurance. It is the insurance a doctor or hospital purchases to cover themselves if a patient does not receive the highest level of care possible, or if mistakes are made. A very large portion of the overhead of any medical establishment is the cost of its malpractice insurance. What happens when overhead is high? Costs are high. And when lawsuits continue to increase as they continue to come after caregivers, costs go up. The cost of healthcare is so high in part because a healthcare provider needs to pay for what they have to shell out.

The other half comes from how doctors behave when they can be easily scrutinized for mistakes. When an improper diagnosis can land them in court, facing a million dollar suit, they will do everything they can to make sure they miss nothing. Doctors order test they don’t have to, and even sometimes that they don’t even need, because they have to document that they ruled out every possible problem or made even the worst of doctors one hundred percent sure of the diagnosis before they can move on to treatment. In the treatment stage, they perform treatments they don’t have to, such as prescribing antibiotics for every runny nose they see just so it doesn’t turn into pneumonia when they said it would solve itself.

So, I propose a change in our civil court system. Large corporations are protected by a thing called limited liability. Why aren’t we all?

Persuasion Idea

For the persuasion essay, I am going to write about how lawsuit is the bane of this country, which I really believe it is.

I understand that sometimes it may be a bad idea to write a persuasive essay on a topic you feel very strongly about because your emotions can get the best of you, but this is a fight that I want to fight.

I believe that lawsuits are one of the most fundamental issues with our country. You can look at this from multiple perspectives; ranging from the ridiculous lack of personal responsibility in our country that allows people to sue for stupid things such as my coffee was too hot, to the effect of lawsuit on rising healthcare costs. A viewpoint of this issue that I really want to talk about comes from a Facebook page I follow called “Faces of Lawsuit Abuse.” It shows the most ridiculous lawsuits in our country each month, and each year, shining light in the incredible greed and lack of responsibility in our nation.

One example from the page is about a Judge who sued an Asian family who own a few Dry cleaners in DC. The cleaners temporarily lost a pair of the Judge’s pants. So, naturally, he sued them for $67 million dollars. You read that right. Look it up. They have gone to court after court, because he continues to appeal time and again to higher courts. The legal fees have put the family almost entirely out of business, something they worked their entire lives to build. They cannot even afford to pay the legal fees to sue him for their losses because of this crazy suit. Not to mention, at one point they even offered to pay him $12,000 and return the pants. He declined, he wants millions.

This is but one example. And I can prove that malpractice is the main driver of healthcare costs, not Insurance Providers or even Care Providers like everyone thinks.

WIP Deliberation Essay

There is a reason the name of my blog post is not Deliberation Essay Rough Draft. I don’t have a rough draft. I just finished writing a research paper for the past ten hours, I don’t have it in me tonight. So, here are my ideas loosely brought together here.

Moderation philosophy:

In my experience as a moderator, I wanted to take the discussion to a deeper level when we talked about sustainability and education, but I also didn’t want to break up good discussion. Everyone was contributing and listening well, talking about their experiences in high school and how it can relate to sustainability. This is really good.

What I wanted to push towards was the actual sustainability of the education in this country. The sustainability of our current education with its current funding levels to keep American students competitive with the rest of the world, or the sustainability of our current University system, as costs continue to rise and the promise of a job coming out of that degree falls apart.

My moderation philosophy is that we can learn as much or more from watching where the discussion takes us rather than it following the course of one person in charge. So I sit back.

Deliberative Process:

I was a little disappointed by our deliberation. The conversation was great in that it was civil, people listened, it stayed on topic, it was supported with facts, and everyone learned from it.

What I didn’t like was that it seemed that most of our conversation was people simply listening to one person’s opinion or experiences, and then responding by telling everyone their opinion or experiences. There were very few questions asked whenever someone made a point, and almost no challenging of viewpoints by another group member. One of the most important parts of good deliberation is the back and forth of people challenging each other to defend themselves, and bring the advantages of their vision to the forefront.

I think this is representative of deliberation as a whole in this country. There is a lot of hesitation when it comes to challenging another person when deliberating in person, or even online when you try to remain civil. Recently, there was a facebook group made for the purpose of 138 deliberation, a great idea, except lest a few people who were asking good questions and challenging each other, the comment list is simply a lot of people stating their opinions on a matter.

On the other extreme, a lot of online deliberation is behind the protection of a screen and keyboard, so people violently yell at each other for no reason, pointing fingers, calling names, making generalizations, and forgetting the purpose of deliberation. In my personal online experience, I was called a heart-beating liberal, told I was in Bob Casey’s pocket, and called ignorant because I believe that the gender wage gap is a real thing. I like to think that I am not ignorant, but I am positive that I am not a polarizing liberal.

Just 500 words of starting ideas.

WIP Sustainability

This week we have to define sustainability.

Sustainability is the ability to sustain.

But seriously, I define it as the ability of our world, including those living in it, to perpetuate itself. For example, millions of years of deposition led to the deposits of fossil fuels that we enjoy today, yet we are tearing through them in a matter of centuries. That is not sustainable.

Sustainability is the ability of our world to recycle carbon, water, nitrogen, and other elements in a manner that does not threaten the future of our world.

Sustainability is the peaceful coexisting of the human race and its surroundings, for now and generations to come.

Sustainability is the ability of our Earth to last.

 

WIP: Online Deliberation Week 2

So this week, I have continued my online deliberation with the use of my local newspaper, PennLive. I have not received any responses yet, so I have nothing to post. I responded to an article about Gov. Corbett wanting to raise gas taxes to fund an increase in the state transportation budget. Obviously people were disgruntled over pain at the pump, but I tried to play devil’s advocate and explain to them that if they don’t make sacrifices, nobody will, and our roads will (continue to) fail.

Online Deliberation Work In Progress

So this evening, I began my online deliberation with the use of PennLive.com, the website of my local newspaper. I chose an article about Senator Bob Casey’s proposal of legislation that would require equal pay for men and women for the same job.

Here are my screenshots from the conversation I had:

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At first, I refuted an argument based on absolutely nothing, simply name calling of the senator and calling men’s work “harder” because it involves more physical work. I was then refuted by someone calling my sources biased, and challenging me to explain the actions of people who are only slightly involved in this debate. While I cannot explain other’s actions, I attempted to reason with the person logically. They sensed a liberal mindset in my words, and then generalized me to have one heartbeat with Bob Casey, dismissing me as a reason for the failed economy. However, I think level heads prevailed here.